Date: 06/25/10 11:31 am Title: Chapter 1
yay good job! I wish you the best on this story :D More soon!!!!
Date: 06/25/10 11:13 am Title: Chapter 11
Ahhhh more!!!! I'm addicted to this XD
Author's Response: Oh, I'm thrilled for your addiction, thank you so much. :o) I'm waiting for beta next chapter. Hopefully this will soon, Asch is my beta-read-angel. J. :o)
Date: 06/25/10 10:48 am Title: Chapter 11
funny granny situation and awe moment between the twins. everyone needs a TOM too he's really a android of all trades. can't wait to see how Tom gets himself out of this. oh and Bill's plan is so working.
Author's Response: Bill's plan, yes. ;-D But Tom is very stubborn. It gets hard. Thanks for your reviews, Monique :o) J.
Date: 06/25/10 09:48 am Title: Chapter 11
AMAAAZIIING
Author's Response: Thank you! ;-)
Date: 06/22/10 11:30 am Title: Chapter 10
So I read two chapters in row and this was great with both Tom and Bill stuggling with their emotions. and the sex scene was realistically an android having a romantic intercourse which helped Tom realize he wants that with Bill.
Poor Suzy has fallin for TOM and she will never see him again if Bill has anything to do about it.
love your story the different pov's of Bill and Tom really make the story interesting. I can't wait to see what happens after this.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, Monique, I'm really happy that you liked it. Yes, poor Suzy, TOM is the right man for her but he only plastic, unfortunately. Bill is a fighter and he still has time to five chapters. J. :o)rnrn
Date: 04/03/10 11:50 am Title: Chapter 9
wow idk whether to laugh or be amazed..
Date: 03/25/10 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
oh so Bill's only Suzy sometimes.
Tom talking about his feelings and thoughts in this chapter were enlighting. I feel sad for Tom now and I understand that he's looking out for Bill he wants the best for his brother. I just never look at it from a logical perspective and it makes sense what Tom is doing. and from a emotional standpoint they will all be unhappy in the long run. So the question Tom needs to do is inform Bill about the repercussions of a relationship between them would produce and is he willing to suffer those consequences for their love.
can't wait for Bill and TOM sex next and see if Tom figures out it's really Bill not suzy.
Date: 03/25/10 09:33 am Title: Chapter 8
YES!!!
Date: 03/04/10 01:37 am Title: Chapter 7
I really love this story I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: :-D Thanks for review, your nick is perfect for this story! :-D Unfortunately... Story is written and translated but I'm waiting for the beta read 8.chapter and I hope that it will be soon. My beta is very busy. I'm looking for a new beta reader for 10-15.chapter but I don't success.rnI apologize for grammatical errors, if any... :o)
Date: 02/01/10 11:27 am Title: Chapter 7
awsome story i just wish you would hurry and finish it.....
Date: 01/31/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 7
omfg more i hope soon
Date: 01/30/10 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 7
I keep thinking Bill is Suzy almost all the times Tom calls her. this was a very interesting conversation we get. Love how bill keep trying to get I love you out of Tom with no such luck. hopefully his plan will still work I'm supportive of it. this is funny weird but entertaining story can't wait for more crazy storyline ad crazy characters.
Date: 01/23/10 08:42 am Title: Chapter 1
its awsome btw but why r they 23 their not even that old now.please hurry woth the rest!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01/23/10 08:36 am Title: Chapter 6
damn you hurry up and make the next chapter!!!!!i wanna read on
Date: 01/21/10 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 6
This chapter really made me laugh with all the reaction and thoughts going through Bill's head as he see's Tom kidnapping his TOMMY. I like how much Bill loves his TOM and he shows how dependent and how much he loves and needs the android.
Tom really is so naïve that it makes me wonder what clues he will miss next. But I really like him too. I think the video taping was a great idea but his wanting to be a robot is out there but that your naïve lovable Tom.
And next we see what Suzie will do. How bill will react to his TOMMY being a sex object for research.
Date: 01/15/10 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
can't wait to see how bill reacts to the kidnapping. next chapter the best function is going to be worked. this will be interesting hope that he can get Suzy to test out TOM.
Date: 01/05/10 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
Love Tom's thought process throughout this. And the I didn't think that Bill would use the Android especially for sex but he's using it for confort which is a little sweet and sad. I like that Tom keeps trying to convince himself that he will never fall for one of Bill's schemes to get him when little does he know Bill got him and he fallen for the biggest thought out plan ever. hopefully it will go as plan this is funny.
Author's Response: Thahks for your review... I am really glad that you liked it. J. :o)
Date: 01/05/10 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
i love this great stuff!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :-)
Date: 12/28/09 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love how Bill manipulates and has plan everything to a T to get Tom. This is a great story. can't wait to see what Tom does with all the information he gets about his "replacement".
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, I'm really happy that you like this story and I hope that you'll like it in the future too :-)
Date: 12/28/09 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
it reminds me a lot of this anime I rad at least with the android lover part...and tom being kinda naive about his feelings for bill but...i like it very much so...for a second there i thought tom had caught bill and someone else together...lol thank god i was wrong...
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, I am really glad that you liked it :-) I don't know anime very well but I know that there are some japanesse movies about androids, somebody has already written it to me on my site when I have published it there :o) thanks for your review :*rn