Date: 12/19/09 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
that last sentence really got me thinking... what could tom's ancestors possibly have done? and i love how andreas owns a convenience store. :p adding in famous power people like ange jolie and oprah is a smart move, they'd probably rule the world or something in the future. good thinking.
as an intro chapter, this is just the right length and is informative yet mysterious enough. i'm definitely looking out for the next one, so don't disappoint - but i know you're incapable of doing such a thing, you writing bunny. ;)
Author's Response: Ah... I wanna know what Tom's ancestors did too. :D Haha... Don't you get this feeling that every tall blonde Andreas you see on the street should be the owner of a convenience store? ;) MATT DAMON! You forgot him!rnrnAh, plish. You write way better than me, and you STILL haven't posted anything yet. x\rnrnI'm still waiting.
Date: 12/19/09 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
woah lol. this story seems like it's going to be cool =]
definitely can't wait to see more =]
much love
Author's Response: Thank you! :D I hope the rest of the story won't disappoint. :D
Date: 12/19/09 08:07 am Title: Chapter 1
That's...special x) But I think I like it :D It's great to read something more original sometimes (:
Author's Response: Thank you! :D *blushes*
Date: 12/19/09 12:12 am Title: Chapter 1
I like this already, and I love futuristic things and hearing about the six-leaf clover pwder for transportation made me excited XD
I would love to hear more about their powers.
Author's Response: Thanks! :D Heh, I try to think of something that doesn't exist. The next chapter lets you know about Tom's and Andreas...I think. O.o xD
Date: 12/18/09 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Seems promisin, nd im likin ths ulternate uni: it sets 4 an intarestin storyline.....cnt wait 4 an update gud luk!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D I'm glad you like it. Was pretty scared trying to post it up.