Date: 12/24/09 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
hmm... I like how cryptic you are being! lol! ok, so, now to figure out who exactly is Bill.... is it Lily? Though if it is, then I'm wondering why they wanted him as a boy to carry on the line...? lol!! I like mysteries!! Can't wait to find out!!!
Date: 12/23/09 10:54 am Title: Chapter 3
Tom seems smitten. Lol. Doesn't Simone or Jorg notice Lily is their son? Anywho, update soon!
Date: 12/23/09 10:47 am Title: Chapter 3
Is that Lily girl... Bill??? :O I'm really curious now. Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 12/23/09 10:28 am Title: Chapter 3
luv it please update =]
Date: 12/21/09 07:37 am Title: Chapter 2
yes poor Bill but interesting so far i dont wanna kill Simone cause I can already see Tom yelling: But I love him! and Simone saying: He's your brother XD or something like that
more soon por favor?
Date: 12/20/09 09:48 am Title: Chapter 2
So it IS bill! Ahah! Great chapter. I pity Simone a lot more compared to the first chap. Keep it up! It's good writing and a better story! :D
Date: 12/20/09 04:24 am Title: Chapter 2
oh my god!!! u gotted me!!! i was like 'wah'? is it not bill then?? *confused* LOL!! u evil thing! But yeah, guess it always is Bill, huh? Fangirls/boys are too mean to him... but all in good fun of course! :)
And, good chapter! I really like Tom... so cute shouting about his sister hitting him... Now i wanna know about Bill! Next chapter, maybe? or not... either way! wanna know what happens next!
Date: 12/19/09 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hopefully, indeed.
Date: 12/19/09 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
-sighs- Still selfish of Simone. I still don't like her. Still like this story, though.
Date: 12/19/09 07:44 am Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait to read more. It's okay so far, but I seriously don't understand how Simone could be so selfish as to give away her own son, it's just wrong.
Date: 12/19/09 04:35 am Title: Chapter 1
This plot seems familiar...
Author's Response: Does it? :/ Hmm...thats not good.rnrnHope it won't be the same as another story on here. :O
Date: 12/19/09 04:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Woah. We both posted an extremely similar story (in theory, not exactly in plot) on the 17th. :o
Author's Response: *le gasp!* Uh-oh, did we? Hopefully their not the same. :O
Date: 12/18/09 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
O.O Simone is so...! *tears a piece of paper in frustration*
Great story btw! Am gonna track it! :D And place it in my favs. :)
Author's Response: Oh thank you!! Glad you like it!rnrnKeep reading!! :D
Date: 12/18/09 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
SIMONE YOU SELFISH, EVIL...!!! OOOOOHHHHH I AM SO ANGRY RIGHT NOW!!!
-breathes deeply- lovely introduction to it all!
Author's Response: Haha, thanxs!rnrnYeah, Simone is just confused. Wait for the next chap!! :)
Date: 12/18/09 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please continue! This story has the potential to be very interesting.
Author's Response: Thanxs! Will do :)
Date: 12/18/09 11:11 am Title: Chapter 1
*headdesk* I want to cuntpunt Simone.....just saying.
Author's Response: *gasps!* lol :DrnrnThanxs for the review, ahaha.
Date: 12/18/09 04:54 am Title: Chapter 1
I am caught, keep writing!!!!
Author's Response: Thanxs, will!! :)
Date: 12/18/09 04:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow I'm loving this!! I'm kinda of hating Simone though! :P But I'm loving the story! Can't wait for an update! Poor Bill... :'(
Author's Response: Thanxs!! Bill??? Hmmm.... :)rnWill update soon! Yeah, I think Simone is a little confused.
Date: 12/18/09 03:24 am Title: Chapter 1
O_o looks really intresting. I can't believe she just gave up bill like that! Poor bill
Author's Response: Bill?? :) Hmmmm.... Yes poor baby..
Date: 12/18/09 01:35 am Title: Chapter 1
This is very interesting.
I can not wait to read more!
=)
Author's Response: thanxs!