Date: 01/07/10 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
oooooo its good its really good pleaseeee right more you are fantastic =]
Date: 01/06/10 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
oislkdtgiosandjfhsiuf OMFG!!!!!
i'm freaking out as i am writing i cant believe gabe is GAY!!!!! wow i did not expect that. i love this, this is awesome more soon please!!!!!
Date: 01/06/10 05:01 pm Title: Prologue
OOOH! Drama! I loved it! Please more soon!
Date: 01/05/10 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really love this story :D Or, I love all the stories, but havn't reviewed before now, sorry! Please update soon n__n
Date: 01/04/10 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
You're gonna kill meh. I didn't beta this...all I did was add ideas- I went over all sent mail and inbox mail- we didn't beta it... :(
Date: 01/04/10 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
You're gonna kill meh. I didn't beta this...all I did was add ideas- I went over all sent mail and inbox mail- we didn't beta it... :(
Date: 01/04/10 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
You're gonna kill meh. I didn't beta this...all I did was add ideas- I went over all sent mail and inbox mail- we didn't beta it... :(
Date: 01/04/10 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
What a rollercoaster ride! Another cool chapter! If I was Tom I'd wonder the same thing. WTF is up with all the kids??!!
Christian is next and I'm excited to see what his issue is! LOL!
Date: 01/04/10 11:13 am Title: Chapter 3
poor serenity...i hope gabe will still help her with the baby...
and tom with his parenting doubts...their kids really are a handful of trouble eheh
Date: 01/04/10 10:20 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm suggesting maybe going through this one again and correct spelling mistakes because I noticed more than usual here, but yeah, nothing live threatening :p
Um, I'm sorry but I'm a little lost at ages here...How old are Tom, Bill and Chris? Wanna be an angel and tell me?
Awesome chapter otherwise, like always ^^
Author's Response: Thanks for the review first off. rnrnAs for spelling mistakes I just read through it again as in now and was like woah. I'll do that next time for sure. For the ages, Serenityis 16. The twins are 11. Chris is 10. And chloe is 6. Tom is around 36.
Date: 01/04/10 10:08 am Title: Chapter 3
love the chapter. i wonder if maddie's ex boyfriend going to try be with her again.
Date: 01/04/10 09:38 am Title: Chapter 3
great chapter! can't wait for more. this is sooo good!
Date: 01/04/10 06:48 am Title: Chapter 3
Omg... Now all I can think about is if Gabe was joking or not or if he was actually being a dick. n.n' I really hope he was just kidding!
Date: 01/03/10 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
i am still alive lol n still reading your stories ^^
i am sorry i never review for the few last one on the other one. but your When I grow up is amazing ^^ even know their only 3 so far ^^ you already got me hooked n i cant wait for the rest n doing my 2 hour long reviews once again for you only lol
Author's Response: I cant wait for you really long reviews! I love reading those a lot! They areso descriptive! Thanks for reviewing! Cchapter 3 will be up soon!
Author's Response: I cant wait for you really long reviews! I love reading those a lot! They areso descriptive! Thanks for reviewing! Cchapter 3 will be up soon!
Date: 12/28/09 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
oh shit.. more more more, love this story
Date: 12/27/09 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
I just found this story and wow! I already love it! I want more! I hunger for more!
Author's Response: I was wondering where you were! lol! Im almost finished with chapter 3. So stay turned!
Date: 12/26/09 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm soooooo sad that you didnt tell me that you were posting! GAH!
Anywhoooo...Tomi better flip all kinds of shit. Im just sayin.
Date: 12/26/09 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
You have a really weird mind...you know that right?
Author's Response: Well I'm so sorry about that. It just comes out.
Date: 12/26/09 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
O.O...oh maddie...but i blame mainly the boy..puling the "if you don't do this i'm leaving you" card...i hope she has learned her lesson. and tom...when tom hears this...all hell will break loose :P