omg i want to kill zack and his slut of a mother, im glad ren docked gabe, i hate tom for not believing in chris and i want bill and the babys to be ok. im glad i caught up with ur storys but now u will have to update before i cry cause i cant read anymore...

Finally back to review. i love the story soo far ^^
sorry it never review at the start i need to get enough information on your story now to be able to do my big reviews like i did for your last story
i will try my best today with doing the best review i am not well 100%
so if i have to cut it short i am sorry :(

let get started then =P

Grace Pov:

I feel sorry for grace for her birthday to be canceled during to her sister acts.
it was mistake and it shouldn't happen again and i think Tom was unfair and should of been more understanding but i still feel sorry for made at the same time


but it look like grace to upset to forgiven anyone right now . she was looking toward to her birthday which is now cancelled right now but what she doesn't see that it also ruined her b-day but yeah i can understand why she upset ..it was kind of made fault but i think maDi want to put it behind her now and try make it better for everyone but in the end is just little sister fight and we all have them with are sister …or that just me .

why is tom acting so different in this story ?? his more mean n cant be bother with stuff no more. and is annoyed at the twins ..when i think he just try make more clam has his the "father" father in is family. even know grace is back-talking i think he taking it all wrong

and i know the feeling when come to art shows. my older sister wreak my first one when i was younger. but i didn't fight i more yelled n wreak the house. but still tom is take it wrong again by yelling within the swearing i know the twins are kind older enough to hear it but if your the adult you shouldn't yell at your child. just make them feel worst about themselves and claiming to slash out even more during to now tom isn't going to be everything to make better now. but grace going to be the one to back down n go because she know its not going to get any better now but to get out what she in and go to cool down for while.

Chris's Pov :

Well is chapter is all about chris so it was good to see what he was like. he is really like Bill in way even know he was Daddy boy. but his really good with Chloe he got really soft touch n caring side of him and feel like taking bill place when his not around. which is really good n will help bill a lot.

Zach ins't he Tom son if i do remember and jasmine is the mother of Zach ah okay then. but by the look already Chris isn't like them already . o-o woah jasmine is bossy one. why does she think she has the right to tell chloe off. and what the hell is wrong with Tom his even more bossy and nasty..i think someone changed. why does he had to be rough with his children today its not really nice.

Well it shows that Chris like to do his homework to get out of the way. unlike me last second person with work. but i know the feeling when their too much noise and your not getting notice to the people around you. and also when some get praise and cheer on when your not. it can make you feel down a lot. because that what you want to have but never got it but that was bang out of order for tom. to don't notice that chris was doing his work and came in with his other family and didn't notice him until the mocking then to take zach tone towards Chris it must be soo hurtful for him to see his father to just do that to me. It really look like Chris want Tom to be father to him like he to Zach. But Chris is thinking really down of himself. and is thinking some things he shouldn't be thinking off but i don't think Tom want normal family. he never been normal himself.

i think it good that Chris goad at music he really got his fathers's touch and runs in the family. but i am glad that chris is happy about something and that his music. and with his family been into music it will help him really a lot. but music is way to get yourself out and escape the world that your in right now and to forget everything that is happing. but Aww world Behind my wall it is good song and i enjoy that song a lot. it really amazing song. and Awww chris is kind of thankful that someone has notice him. and i think grace is great to be around and to talk to him when no one really does.
but Chris shouldn't been himself down too much because he has family on his side to be there for him. but chris cant take it for long which is upsetting n need to get away from it soon. has he not used to it at all. but chris is happy that he got the twins to be happy again with each other. and that is good that the kids are so into their fathers n Gs music but i bet it is cool for them.

o great here come dad to wreak it all but in the same time be nice to the others too his only been nice to Chloe really because his the youngest one. it what i think too i think it was once again bang out of order for tom to do that in front of him it only make him feel upset about himself. that Zach getting more from tom then himself.
but for not been notice is most upsetting thing for child to be unnoticed by his father.
but i feel sorry for chris to go that far . when he really should talk to tom himself. but i know its not the easy thing to do in the world but i do understand when you don't want your family to know and make it more than it is now. but i think Chris is being to hard on himself and just talk it out with him soon or later. but tom has chance great deal.

but it great that chris got someone to make him happy when his don't happy at all and its good Daniel is there for him. and cheer the poor boy up when needed.

Bill Pov :

Bill looked already stressed out with everything and yeah serenity does have right to mad at gabe and will bill being preg n she been the same i think their feeling are everywhere. and i think that tom need that door in his face for the way he is acting toward his children n bill himself. but tom need to be little more there for him than anyone else right now. and need to help OO that bad to invited him over…

i think serenity is not going to happy what so ever ! and tom need to take him more right when bill when his in is place right now. and stop joking around with him too much

great now he trying to get his way with fillrting (spell wrong sorry =( ) but bill only take it for second their something wrong bill today. he normal not like is.
oooo great Gabe is here now well guess tom going to be little more there for him now then and his family because he hasn't by the look of it.
and just try and make thing out with everyone for now

{{ Well okay i have though of something now. during to my unwellness which came out of no were today. i am to do is page in two reviews so i will carry one from a other Chris Pov when i feel more better and can stand to be on the laptop for long time}}

so yeah ^^ i am glad to be doing is again for you but yeah it will be better then i am more better ^^
see you soon will part two of chapter review 5
P.S Sorry for the poor english i am not fully here so i made few mistakes.

Oh my goodness, this is getting so good. First of, I hate Jasmine with a passion... that bitch. I just hope Tom is not being stupid and doing what he did every single time in the past.

I was shocked about Christian. I always felt like something about him was different, but that was a nice twist. It is sad to know what he is doing to himself though because he feels Tom doesn't love him how he loves Zach.

Zach, another one I don't like. What is his deal? I mean obviously his grandma and possibly Jasmine are like brainwashing him.

I like Daniel. I am glad Christian has someone like him. I also really liked Grace in this chapter. I loved when she actually just let everything out.

I am looking forward to see what is going to happen with everything that is going one. I hope Bill and the babies are okay.

Oh my oh my... I can barely take all this pain... Please let things be okay soon!

:O I hope bills alright!!! AWWW the part about chris and zack and tom got me tearing up :( LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!

As long as Bill talks to Chris, I think Chris will be okay. Maybe Andi should come along, and join in the convo? And I do hope that Tom will wake up and smell the coffee about his son....

*sigh*

Author's Response: Nothing going to happen maddie. Lol. No cheating of any sort. Promise.

I love christian... he is adorable, but Tom he is so stupid sometimes... its like he doesnt have a head to think, flirting with his sons mom, not taking care of all his children and mostly christian... letting his little prick lie and everybody told him he was lying... and i just hate the reaction of bill when he sees the scar of his son... this is not the reaction a good parent should have, letting him alone was the worst thing to do... they really are a disapointment in this chapter... but all in all its a good chap and i cant wait for another one

Author's Response: I'm sorry. It will all be improved in the next chapter. Promise. rnrnThanks for reviewing!

Omfg!! It's one thing right after the other! This is one dysfynctional family! But PLEASE, after Bill has the kids, let him kick Jasmine's ass! That bitch needs a beat down disrespecting Bill in his own house!!
Bill's reaction to Chris was not what I was expecting. Bill needs to listen to Chris then corner Tom and break it all down for him. Tom's a bit of a moron it seems. And he'd better NOT cheat on Bill again!
Keep rockin this story girlie! Good job!

Author's Response: Bill will listen to Chris. He was just in shocked about it. I'll be sure to right that in for the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

OHHHHHHH I am so going to need Jasmine to have a painful tragic accident really soon!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Something will happen to her sure enough. Thanks for reviewing!