Date: 03/07/10 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 20 - DNA Results
WOW! I can't believe all of this happened...omg. Kuddos to Tom for actually NOT telling her. I feel him though. How can one live with something bad happening to someone they like knowing it could've been preventing? Angela really is putting him in a bind! You know, I really hate that these guys keep coming around when Angela just wants them to block them out of her life, you know? Sadly, I don't think this is the last time they will show up either. Is anything going to happen to Alissa? Jeez, I hope not. :o
Date: 03/05/10 10:44 am Title: Chapter 20 - DNA Results
those bitches i can't believe they showed up oooo if i were there they'd each have their dicks cut off so they could never know pleasure again those bitch ass motherfuckers they're going to hell
awwww poor Tom being put in that situation of having to keep that secret i would still tell Georg
Poor Angela too she should tell him....
ok i feel calmer now...for now lol
Author's Response: hhehehe wow you guys are truly angry with these guys! i love it heheh! and yeah it is hard for the both of them, but we'll see what happens next chapter
Date: 03/04/10 06:49 am Title: Chapter 20 - DNA Results
damn sry but she is stupidddddd
Date: 02/28/10 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 19 - The Promise
Lol! This chapter was totally amazing and I think it's my favorite so far. I think all of TH boys would be great fathers. :) I could never blame you for being busy, it just happens! xD I think this just the start and the whole mother thing is still very new so of course Ali hasn't been to much of a problem just yet. Give it later in the week... Triple A team!! xD It's funny how Mama M is, like, psychic! xD She predicted that Georg would indeed view the breast. lol I wish we could prolong the week so they work from Atlanta forever but...that's not realistic, is it? I can't wait to see what you came up with next!
Author's Response: Yep....realistic is the way we're going hehe. At least I'm hoping I still have it...inside writer's story. When I was planning them leaving at first I had it where they were going to be gone before the delivery but i extended the trip a week and had them there longer so georg could experience it. hehe thanks for reading and im glad you liked it.
Date: 02/28/10 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 19 - The Promise
Ok so like HOW is this long distance thing going to work?
Author's Response: you'll just have to see...lol
Date: 02/28/10 09:54 am Title: Chapter 19 - The Promise
Awwwwwwwww!!!!!
Everything was just so cute!!!!
Date: 02/28/10 05:56 am Title: Chapter 19 - The Promise
h wow,
so I'm gonna be honest here, I haven't read a non-tc storie in a LOOOOONG time
but for some reason, your story kept popping up and I decided to read it, since I'm sick and bored...
but wow, I really really liked it!
the way you described Angela and Georg kept pushing and pushing
oh, so good!
I'm looing forward to your updates!
x
Author's Response: oh yay!!! im glad you like it and im glad it keeps popping up somewhere that's great. i will post soon like sometime this week. thank you so much!
Date: 02/20/10 02:10 am Title: Chapter 18 - A Perfect Miracle
I must say this story blew me out of the water because in most stories people make the love interest blonde hair blue eyes, gothic, or emo. Nothing is wrong with any of those things but you took it to a whole new level making them strong ethnic women. Goes to show that love comes in all shapes and sizes. Excellent work.
Author's Response: thank you very much...im glad you are enjoying it. i was trying to be different from the average story
Date: 02/18/10 07:43 am Title: Chapter 18 - A Perfect Miracle
oh my gosh that was so beautiful Georg rocks my socks :) lol
Date: 02/18/10 01:37 am Title: Chapter 18 - A Perfect Miracle
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Author's Response: hehe have you noticed that your awwwww stretches out of the box hehe thanks
Date: 02/18/10 12:10 am Title: Chapter 18 - A Perfect Miracle
AWW!!!! So freakin' adorable!!!
Date: 02/17/10 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 18 - A Perfect Miracle
This whole chapter is like that! Just, awww! ^_^ The part about Tom and Mama M is really funny. x] It also made me laugh when she touched Bill's face and he got all nervous. LOL The name is really pretty, and I notice the A-pattern. hahaa Angie, Avie and now we have little Ali! xD Crazy David trying to stop Georg's love. *pouts* I'm sure they'll get through it though, I'm not worried. I'm just glad it's not over! So with that being said, keeeep goingggg! :D
Author's Response: thank you so much im glad you enjoyed it and yes i didn't realize the pattern until after i ha written the chapter...hehe i think all of my favorite names begin in A hehe
Date: 02/13/10 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Almost Time
lmao @ oh fudge sticks !
OMGOSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH the baby's coming! Ach! Alreadyyyyy! It seems like she's been pregnant forever lol. Poor thing... It kind of shocked me when she said that she didn't want him in the room but that's totally understandable. :) I also like how she just came out and told her mom about him. That was the mature thing to do...you know, but just getting it out of the way and putting it all on the table. I wish she would've did that with Georg a long time ago. lol
I can't believe her water broke and now she's about to go into labor! Aah! Somebody call Bill! xD OhI can't wait to read what happens next!!! ^_^
Date: 02/13/10 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Private Concert
I thought I review this chapter already (16) but I guess not. Anywho, I agree with what everyone else has said about it. :) (omgosh, I really LOL'd at nann1e's beginning of her review! ROFL!) Anyway, I don't blame Georg one bit for losing control... That guy defintely shouldn't have come back, especially at a time like this. Something tells me he won't be out of the picture at all, and there's another drama brewing! =O
Date: 02/13/10 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Almost Time
Good story! Keep going!
Date: 02/13/10 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Almost Time
Lls oh fudge sticks is right!!!! Time for babygirl to come! Oh I can't wait! :)
Date: 02/13/10 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Almost Time
oh my gosh you better not have me waiting forever for the next chapter she's about to give birth oh man this is exciting i can't wait ah damn i can just picture Georg going pale ooooo it's so exciting!!!!!!:)
Date: 02/10/10 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Private Concert
Yay! Georg for kicking that dudes butt!!!
Awww Angie n Georg are the cutest thing!
Date: 02/09/10 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Private Concert
oh man that bitch ass motherfucker i can't believe he had the audacity to try and come in there and be all nice and say oh i want to help you wat a lie!! Georg should have kiiled him but that wouldn't be good oh man i loved this shit brilliant but sad good thing no one got to hurt i'm all riled up lol
you are getting better lol:)
Author's Response: hehe wow i can tell that you're a little angry lol but i love the reaction and boy i enjoyed writing that hehe. i will be posting again probably this weekend and if he made you made just wait...
Date: 02/06/10 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Key to Your Heart
Aaaaaah, THAT WAS AWESOME! I've been waiting for you to update on this story for quite some time now! I know with school starting again, many authors have been lengthening their story's update and I totally understand that.
It's nice to see them right back where they started. lol Every time they get together, the end up arguing. lol They already act like a married couple. For a second there, I thought she would go into labor from being so stressed out. lol I wonder if that's going to happen... You know, all of them hanging out and suddenly, Angela's water breaks. Ah, that would be something! Haa! Also, I think it would be funny if Tom and Avie didn't hook up tonight. Just because Tom has "charm" doesn't mean he gets. Muahahaha. x)
Just one quick little thing... You know how Georg says "Why do you care?" when he's about to leave? You should turn that into "Why do you care so much?" Just to tie in with the title and with what Angela said to him back at the hotel. lol I think that'd be a real reality check for her like Georg about to leave. xD Even if you don't, it wouldn't hurt this chapter or the story.
Keep going! xD
Author's Response: lol sorry for the lateness....but im glad you liked the chapter and yes i should put that but at this moment im lazy but i will..lol