Date: 12/21/09 03:01 am Title: Chapter 4 - Hotel Desk Clerk
LOVE!!!!!
Author's Response: hehehe thanks
Date: 12/20/09 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Hotel Desk Clerk
I love your story
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading it
Date: 12/20/09 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Hotel Desk Clerk
Oh my God, this story is just really feeding me, fattening me up. I love it. =D I've been writing an interracial relationship story like this ever since the end of Novermber (unposted) and as I've searched the site for some interracial fics to give me some ideas, I realized I'm kinda on my own. lol I also read the reviews for such stories to see how others respond and I guess it's okay. That makes me happy. =D
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Angela and Georg's POVs are quite interesting to read and I love how Georg freaked out at the end. I liked Bill's interaction with her. ^^ It was so cute. lol =D Tom, Tom, Tom... yeaa, that's where I'll leave it with him. haa Oh Angela, why can't you just be nice?! I can see that's just a part of her personality (the toughness) and being pregnant probably greatens those a bit more than usual. I hope Georg will break through to her before she basically breaks him to pieces. lol Continue on. =D
Author's Response: Hehe thank you so much I really enjoy reading your reviews and thoughts on the situation and characters. I can't wait to see your reactions on some future events lol.rnrnI hope you do post that story soon, I would love to read it.
Date: 12/20/09 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Latest Rumor
lmao for the ending!
“You have to admit though G, the girl was hot. If she wasn’t pregnant, I would have been glad to help her with her groceries. Maybe more than that.”
You learn to ignore him after a while. I promise."
Tom is such a character. lmao When it went from Angela to Georg's POV I was kind of confused for a moment but I'm just a little slow sometimes. =9 I didn't notice anything wrong. Wow, rumors do spread though...Just like that! I wonder how they'll do damge control. Awesome chapter! ^^
Author's Response: Thanks...yeah Tom is pretty funny in this story I think
Date: 12/20/09 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Do You Need Help?
Aww! That was so amazing. =D
I like how Angela's all "female pride" and "I'M WOMAN. HEAR ME ROAR!" lol She seems like a dazzling young woman. I was literally freaking out of the small details (in a good way) of this chapter and they made me smile. I live somewhat close to a Wal-Mart and I swear, you have to watch out for the cart falling over! I know of potholes in the streets, but the parking lot? lol. Nice job!!
Author's Response: Hehe I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 12/20/09 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 1-Prologue
So Angela's black? Really?! SHOCKING! No, I'm just kidding. The banner for this story really went to my interest because TH does have non-caucasian fans so I think it's refreshing to read about a black character involved (other than Samy Deluxe) or a non-caucasian main character. =D Kudos, there!
Angela's mom is just being a mom. lol She's a bit invasive and really protective. I don't know if Angela realizes this yet, but she's showing that protective attitude as well and it's only the first chapter! ^^ It's a shame what happened to her in the past, but it seems like she's come a long way since then. I'm also glad she kept the baby too!
Author's Response: Thanks that's exactly one of the reasons why I decided to do one as well.I wanted a little change and I'm glad that people like it. Thank you for reading and I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Date: 12/20/09 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Hotel Desk Clerk
Poor Angela...You just want to be left alone and you can't.
Poor Georg...He likes a forbidden girl...
Author's Response: Hehe a forbidden girl...nice title i like that
Date: 12/19/09 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Latest Rumor
Interesting and funny!
Author's Response: thank you im glad you like it
Date: 12/16/09 09:50 am Title: Chapter 3 - Latest Rumor
Poor...I forgot her name! AUGH! MY MEMORY SUCKS! Trust me on this, last night I had to ask my brother what we had been talking about. It was about two minutes after we had held that conversation...
Poor Georg. Ya help a girl out and whaddya get? Accused of havin' a kid outta wedlock.
Author's Response: haha aww im sorry about your short attention span, but im glad you read the chapter and yes that's exactly how the media is lol
Date: 12/13/09 02:04 am Title: Chapter 1-Prologue
MY DAMN COMPUTER HATES NING SO EVERYTIME I GET ON THERE IT GOES BONKERS! UGH! I'll catch up on ASOM as soon as I can....
and yes it is a small internet world chick...I am everywhere...I see everything...I am God (not really but I'm pretty darn close) ROFL xD
Author's Response: awww you've been on there too many times sleeping with my man and others..now it's kicking you off lol
Date: 12/13/09 12:09 am Title: Chapter 1-Prologue
OMFG! WHY DID YOU NOT TELL ME YOU WERE POSTING THIS STORY ON HERE GIRL?!?!?!?!! I WOULD HAVE BEEN YOUR FIRST READER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UGH I DONT EVEN HAVE TO READ THIS CHAPTER TO KNOW IT KICKED MAJOR ASS! (I read it anyway and it kicked major ass xD)
just incase you don't know who this is this is Allay....you fave person in the whole world :P
Author's Response: OMG ALLAY HEY GIRL I HAVEN'T TALKED TO YOU IN FOREVER!!!!! DANG IT'S A SMALL INTERNET WORLD LOL thank you so much for reading again....and you need to catch up on ASOM...some major shitz has happened..and more to come
Date: 12/12/09 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 1-Prologue
Interesting :)
Author's Response: ^__^ very interesting lol thanks for reading
Date: 12/12/09 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1-Prologue
OMG, Iyana, this is Nora from the Ning. I love this story so much!!! I read the whole thing on the Ning and loved it a lot!!! I hope you read my stories here.
Author's Response: Oh you did...thank you so much I'm glad you liked it...I thought I would try my luck here lol