Date: 01/05/10 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Personal Body Guards
OMG 8oP on the count of three 1.2.3!!!!
happy birthday to you
happy birthday to you
happy birthday to Iyana
happy birthday to you
i can sing huh??? lol
that was awesome can't wait til the next chapter
Author's Response: aww thank you so much and yes a very great singer
Date: 01/05/10 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Personal Body Guards
I've actually started something new for my review process. Now, as I read the story, I just open up 'Notepad' and just jot down the little thing I want to bring up in my review so I don't read back over it and be like "oh yeaa, that's what I forgot!" lol. Okay. :) So, omg, when Angela left Georg's room it was a lot better than what I thought. I had it nailed down that Angela was gonna be all bitchy and want to stay as far away as possible from (mostly) Georg and the others! To my surprise, she actually wasn't sour and owned up to it. You know, being woman enough to admit that she really likes him after not knowing him so long.
Next, the effort Bill makes with Angela is really unusual in this story. Like, he's the one that's got the balls to go that extra mile...even though he knows that Angela has zero tolerance. It's really sweet! It just makes me wonder sometimes... I think he has good intentions but, I'm still struck up on the fact that Bill kinda maybe sorta possibly could have a 'wittle crwush' on her. ;3 Bill/Angela interactions make me all warm inside. :33 However, I don't think that whatever Bill's doing will even effect the Georg/Angela pairing. So yeaa, nice try, Bill. xD
Gustav! No, not much to say about Gusti. :( But Tom, now we've got something here. lol I think we're on to something with these two. Tom's just like Angela; realistic. He sees what Angela is seeing, and tries to tell that to the others but nobody is listening, as always. I guess that's why opposites attract. :) I know that Tom and Avie seem to be a little bit more than friends but nothing serious.
Papa-paparazzi! Are the literally that stupid?! *thinks back to watching TMZ* YES! They're like savage beasts with cameras. lol They know their mission (get the photo) and let nothing stop them. I'm guessing they don't care that Angela's pregnant and having something like this overwhelm her wouldn't be good. I hope they don't get too out of hand. Even so, they did basically trap Bill in a corner with Angela. Did I read he put his arm around her waist? Haa, smooth move Bill. ;) I'm glad they hooked a sista up some security! (Although she didn't want it the first few times. lol) Something tells me that things are only going to go a bit downhill from here but nothing major! ...Right? Also, I wonder if Avie will be put into the spotlight by the paparazzi? Gaah, stupid paps. -_-
Happy -early- Birthday! ^_^
Author's Response: yeah i figured she might as well own up to what she is feeling no matter how bad she wants to ignore it lol i loved the morning after scenernrnbilla nd angela awww i love writing things with them and boy you are good with your observations lolrnrni love gusti and yes tomi is very realistic so no one will listen but he will keep tryingrnrnpaparazzie those darm paps. yes you did read that hehe nice touch bill. right...lol
Date: 01/05/10 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Personal Body Guards
Ooooh. Angela and Georg almost did it.
Author's Response: hehe they can't really do much considering she's preggers
Date: 01/05/10 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Personal Body Guards
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg i love the story keep it up...
Author's Response: lol ok i will thank you
Date: 01/04/10 02:42 am Title: Chapter 9 - No Drama
oh yay i love the update
Author's Response: thank you very much!
Date: 01/03/10 04:27 am Title: Chapter 9 - No Drama
Awwww! PLEASE let Angela warm up to him! This is a GREAT story, and I wish they would hurry up and get together already! He can help her heal! :)
Author's Response: hehe we can't rush love, but i'm glad you're enjoying the story
Date: 01/03/10 02:04 am Title: Chapter 9 - No Drama
Damn, this story jump starts my hours. lol :) “Avonlea…you look at my stomach and think twice about whatever you think you may end up doing.” Avie turns and looks back at her. Haa! That made me laugh so hard! It feels good to know that I'm saying her name rightnow. I don't know why but I get kind of testy with pronunciations. ;P Anyway, I think it's so cute that Angela fell asleep on Georg's shoulder as the others played a quiet game of cards. :3 Also, the fact that Georg made the kiss for his first move - which was totally expected (which is a good thing, I'm glad he took the risk of being possibly slapped! lmao) - was a total plus! Nice balls, Georg. xD I was totally waiting for that moment where Angela would just drop her brick walls and fall into Georg's arms but in this case she fell into his mouth. lmao ;D I hate to say it, but she's right about them not being able to really go anywhere. There's just too much standing in their way - school, work, pregnancy and the fact that Georg is rockstar that doesn't stay in one place too long.
Jeez, I must say that I am really intrigued on how this story will end! I'm already entertained with everything you've updated with so far! :D Please, follow up soon!
-Happy New Years to you too, dear! ^_^
Author's Response: Girl as much as you look forward to reading this story, I look forward to reading your comments. They are amazing and I love how you analyze the story and really let me know what you think. I'm so happy that you like it as much and yes it is quite the drama. The circumstances are way too complicated.
Date: 12/29/09 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Friday Night Out
no why did it have to end there i was just getting into it
awww man i think ima cry lol
naw it was wonderful though i wonder whats gunna happen at the hotel *wink wink lol;)*
Author's Response: hehe aww im sorry but i love ending it right there..im glad you liked it and please don't cry
Date: 12/29/09 03:10 am Title: Chapter 8 - Friday Night Out
Omg! I had these awesome moments in the story. lmao I don't know...I think my Subway sandwich made me hyper because I was laughing and arm-flailing all through this chapter. Literally! hahaa It's mostly Georg's POV that gets me going. I don't know why but his thoughts are hilarious. lol
Georg and Angela is just too cute together! I wanna know where the hotel room takes them.
Now let's go on to everyone else. hahaa So, Tom and Avie are a cute couple too. I feel a bit bad for her because she seems so energetic and young compared to Angela. I think that her and Bill would make more a match, but it could've gone either way. I like the kid in Bill here, as well. I saw all three of those movies and they were awesome! ^_^ Gustav...I don't have much to say about him. lol I take it his alone time with Avie seemed to go well. lol
No wait, back to Georg and Angela! xD Transformers wasn't scary at all, so the fact that they are so cute as they cuddle up during an action movie was just priceless. Jeez, could I be more into this story? lol I sooo can't wait for the next chapter.
By the way, how do you pronounce Avie's name. I just thought about that. lol I don't think I'm saying it right. Avon-leah? (long A like the avon cosmetics) Or is it like Ah-vonlia?
Whatever her name is, I still love this story. x'D
Author's Response: awww i absolutely love your reviews girl...and the hypernessrnrnyeah this was one of my fav chapters to write even it took me forever to write it and decide what they would do.rnrnthe way i pronounce her name is A(like avatar) von lay ah did that make sense? lol
Date: 12/27/09 12:58 am Title: Chapter 7 - Do You Wanna Hang Out?
i did have fun with my family thank you
hope you did too!!! oh yea this chapter rocked they're moving nicely lol and it was awesome..")
Author's Response: yes i had a great time with my family and im glad you liked the chapter
Date: 12/26/09 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Do You Wanna Hang Out?
I love your story
Author's Response: thank you so much
Date: 12/26/09 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Do You Wanna Hang Out?
*Cheers* YAY! THEY ARE IS HANGING OUT!
Author's Response: lol im glad you liked it...i hope you like the next chapter when they finally do hang out
Date: 12/26/09 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Do You Wanna Hang Out?
Oh God, I love this story! ^_^ ANGELA ftw! No, I think those rights belong to Bill. Jeez, is he crushing on her too? lol I agree with Tom's claim. I was screaming on the inside when Bill said that they were close friends with her. I'm like "wtf, she doesn't really even like you guys" lol. I knew the charity case thing would pop up because that's what it would seem like. Ah, Georg... Georg...where will she take you? Or should I be asking Angela that question? What is Georg going to do Angela Iyana?! lol I can't wait to see where this journey takes them! =D Also, I like how Angela told Avonlea "no" when she asked to go to the hotel with her. It shows how mature she's being and doesn't submit to her friends all the time. I kinda knew Avonlea was going to end up there somehow, so it doesn't surprise me that Tom wouldn't mind her company. hahaa
-My Christmas was what I expected, lol, which really takes the surprise out of things. Either they're really predictable or I have psychic powers. xD I hope you had a fun holiday as well, hun! :)
Author's Response: hehe you know sometimes i have psychic powers as well....my holiday was great as well and i just got back from seeing avatar which was good. but i can't fo 3D movies...it makes me nauseas...as for the story hmm where will georg and angela go with this
Date: 12/25/09 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Talk To Me
Someone is a little stubborn...
Author's Response: hehe that she is
Date: 12/24/09 03:33 am Title: Chapter 6 - Talk To Me
An 'AU-fic' is just slang around here for Alternate Universe! =D If your story was a AU-fic, Georg and Angela wouldn't have fame in their way because Georg probably wouldn't be famous. xD But since it's not, I think it makes it better to read in my opinion. ;D
Author's Response: oh lol thanks yeah it would be easy, but like you said it's a better read when ther are complications
Date: 12/23/09 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Talk To Me
The bold was a bit surprising, but it's whatever. lol Uh oh, I think Georg's slowly stepping on square one! The dream has got her shaken up and back into her introverted ways. ={ Now I feel sorry for Georg! I hope he could break through to her again, you know, like she really wants him to. Damn, if this was a AU-fic, she might be in luck. haa
Merry Christmas! =D
Author's Response: hehe yeah i was only trying to bolden the actual words georg pov but it got the remaining writing as well...too lazy to change it and i was rushing. btw i have no idea what the AU stands for lol but thanks for reading..i enjoy your commentsrnrnMerry Christmas to you as well!!
Date: 12/23/09 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Talk To Me
oh my gosh i really like your story the girl is beautiful and i like how Georg is so persistant with her but she's so stubborn with him it's awesome
can't wait til the next chapter...:)
Author's Response: thank you so much im glad you like it
Date: 12/22/09 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Do You Want To Get To Know Me?
Yay!
Author's Response: lol yay!
Date: 12/22/09 12:02 am Title: Chapter 5 - Do You Want To Get To Know Me?
YAY! ANGELA WAS IN GEORG'S ARMS! Yes, sure, it wasn't supposed to happen and he was just catching her, but still...
Author's Response: LOL im glad you liked that part
Date: 12/21/09 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Do You Want To Get To Know Me?
WHAT?! She's...lightening up? Well ya don't say...!
I'm actually happy she is, it's good for her! ^_^ Georg's got a point though, he won't see her for a whole week. BUT, if Angela is as passionate and dedicated to her work as she says she is, I'm sure they'll be seeing each other soon. I really like this story. xD
Oh, and the part about the breast was amusing! =D
Author's Response: hehe thanks...yeah i really like writing her actually being nice to him