Date: 11/28/08 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
omg this is AWESOME!!! more more more!!!
Date: 08/27/08 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
You cannot just leave it ther. I'm sorry, but just no.
Update already!
Date: 03/10/08 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
ok so the first chapter was lame...not to be too harsh; the writing itself was good, it was just overly cheesy with the little blonde 15 year old being tom's soulmate. anyways, now the story's getting good, i'm looking forward to reading more as you post it!
Date: 11/22/07 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
omgomg i want more pls!
Date: 11/01/07 10:17 am Title: Chapter 4
u need to add more lol!!
Date: 09/17/07 04:25 am Title: Chapter 4
I am really curious to find out who dared to REALLY upset at such point our dear Bill!
Date: 09/16/07 02:29 pm Title: What's up with Bill? (Before the birthday)
argh i wanna see Bill showing his sadness!
MORE!
Date: 09/16/07 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
I thought it was really good. Can't wait for the next one hope you update it really soon.
Date: 09/01/07 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
I thought it was really good. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 08/31/07 11:23 am Title: Chapter 3
Oooh another chapter! I liked this but I wanna see more :) is Bill gonna take this girl to Dubai?! Sure Tom is taking Zaphyr =) love, post soon. Silvia xxx
Author's Response: i think bills gonna take the girl yeah :)rnbut im not sure yet
Date: 08/31/07 06:21 am Title: Chapter 3
awww yes love at first site, :)beuatifully written
Author's Response: thank-you :)
Date: 08/29/07 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
Soudns interesting ^___^
I can't wait!
Date: 08/07/07 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The boys get ready (Tom's gift)
good so far keep writing please
Date: 07/24/07 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The boys get ready (Tom's gift)
i really like this
it's a good start
keep writing
i hope to be a twincest in here
and it'll be a complicated one
Date: 07/23/07 07:07 am Title: Chapter 2 - The boys get ready (Tom's gift)
Awwwwwwwww how wonderful *-* very compliments!! Gorgeous *-*
But.. poor Bill ç_ç any girl gave him a present ç_ç but.. I can u.U" xD
Date: 07/21/07 03:39 pm Title: What's up with Bill? (Before the birthday)
i like this story and i want to see where it goes
but WHOA. my username.. Zephyr? I've has this username for years.
that is so weird. 0_o
Date: 07/21/07 01:45 pm Title: What's up with Bill? (Before the birthday)
Just can't wait to read more! =)
Date: 07/21/07 11:28 am Title: What's up with Bill? (Before the birthday)
I like this story! Poor Bill, he's always the one who wants something and can never get that xD go on we want more!
Author's Response: thanks :Drni know poor little sexy bill haharni should have part 2 by tomorrowrnjust thinking of the last few detailsrn
Date: 07/21/07 11:13 am Title: What's up with Bill? (Before the birthday)
ooochh hurry and finsih!!!
fab so far xox
Author's Response: thanks :]rni'm still working on what to write for the next part butrni should hopefully write chapter 2 tomorrowrn