Date: 05/23/08 07:02 pm Title: Long Lost Relative
oh shit! he didn't make it to his room!
Author's Response: nope, thanks to his darling mother.
Date: 05/23/08 06:37 pm Title: I Can't Deal with This Right Now, Mother!
“He ran away when he was 18, but no one ever saw him again.”
when i read that, my "theory" become more stuck in my mind lol, but i'm not sure, i hate sploiling the story do i keep reading
i can't wait to know what happens next
Author's Response: Haha, well you might want to hold onto that theory. ^_^ Glad you're liking the story!
Date: 05/23/08 06:23 pm Title: You Can't Fuck With Time
oh my!!
i've been thinking. Bill's death is in about a year? Maybe in the books and the family tree he is known s dead but in truth he didn't die? He just disapeared in 1909,thanks to tom and they assumed he was dead.In fact,he and tom live their love in the future!
well, it's a théory. Wow, i should go to sleep, it's past midnight and i have a lot to do tomorrow, but your fic is just obsessin me so i decided i'd stay and think about the consequences of lack of sleep later *nods*
Author's Response: Very, very nice theory. You guys catch on quickly sometimes. ;) Lol, hope you didn't lose too much sleep.
Date: 05/23/08 06:04 pm Title: I'm Not Going to Live Forever
you made me cry.My eyes still hurt
while i continued reading, i didn't even notice my tears falling till they've reached one of my hands.OMG this chapter was amazing!so sad
Author's Response: :*( sorry for making you cry! but yes, I was trying to be emotional with this chapter, so I was purposely pulling at your heartstrings and teasing your tears with that. Guilty. ^_^ But thank you, I'm glad you thought this chapter was "amazing" :D thanks.
Date: 05/23/08 05:30 pm Title: Don't Tell Me You Forgot Her Maiden Name
" Of course, Bill had heard of cars several times, but he had never been granted the opportunity to sit in such a vehicle or even to be within reach of one. Such vehicles were uncommon in his town and only the richest of the rich were fortunate enough to own them. And furthermore, cars back in his time are much, much, much different in appearance than these things Bill has run into in this time. Not to mention, the few cars he had heard of at home didn’t have the speeds of racecars, which seems to be the norm among these speeding cars that practically own the streets in this time period."
that explains a lot! i'm just imagining that bill's time's not in the 1900 'cause you know what my grandmother was born in 1925nshe's a vegetable now but still alive So i'm imagining other time myself to leave you alone with all that "time shit". I'm getting on your nerves aren't I? Sorry for that! I still love the story through
Author's Response: YAY, I was able to explain myself. ^_^ LOL, no you're not getting on my nerves, I just get disappointed in myself when I have all these little discrepancies 'cause I know I could've done some sort of research or something, but I neglected history in tidbits of the story, which you're picking up on. :D So don't worry about it. And I'm really happy you love the story!! thanks for reviewing.
Date: 05/23/08 05:25 pm Title: Sweet Love
OMG this chapter was perfect! You're writing skills keep improving every chapter and they just seem to get better everytime
Author's Response: Seriously, thank you!! Lol, and glad you think so [for the writing skills] :D You're sweet.
Date: 05/23/08 05:20 pm Title: Are You Lost, Mr. Trümper?
I really love your story seriously! it's rich and such but something's definitely disturbing me: in 1908 cars already existed;ferrarri,citroen,volswagen...They were invented like what...two century ago? I still think bill's time should'nt have been in the 1900s but at least,in the 1800 In the time of the great author Jane austen for example?It may be more believable and coherent?
Whatever,i still enjoy this story and don't care too much about the details. Bill's just too cute!
Author's Response: Yeah, yeah, the car bit through off at least one other person, too, so I had to explain that [which i see you already commented about]. And yes, perhaps a wee bit earlier time period would have been a little better, but it's a little late for that now, isn't it? And I'm just glad you kept reading! I was afraid from your first review that the whole phone and history discrepancy was going to steer you away from this story! But I'm glad it didn't. Thanks =]
Date: 05/23/08 03:04 pm Title: Sweet Love
That was an amazing chapter! as always :] keep going
Author's Response: Hah, thank youuuuu! I will, when the chance of free-time pops up. ^_^
Date: 05/23/08 02:12 pm Title: Sweet Love
that was such a great chapter!
♥
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. :D
Date: 05/23/08 01:17 pm Title: Old-Fashioned Lunatic
it's really interesting. But maybe 1808 is more approppriate with all of your description? The phone existed in 1908 and six years later it was the first war.
Author's Response: uh, yeah, my dates were off and i apologize for that. (give me a break, i wrote that first chapter right after mid-terms, my brain was mush!) but yeah... i realize the phone existed, though i tried to play it off as a "his family didn't have the newest technology" type thing... =/ But yes, that was off. And I'm sorry if that's a big enough discrepancy to turn you away from the whole story. Personally, I think it improves after the 1st chapter, but that could just be me. Thanks for the concern, though. Oh, and sorry, but what does the first war have to do with it? did i mention that in there??
Date: 05/23/08 11:55 am Title: Sweet Love
Hot chapter!
Author's Response: ^_^ Thank you!
Date: 05/23/08 10:58 am Title: Sweet Love
omg ^_^ that was just the sweetest!! =D
i loved it and can't wait for more =)
it was really well written and the way you discribed their first time seemed alot more "real" then what most others write. ofcourse it's going to furt for bill! it's not just going to be an overwelming pleasure if he does it for the first time since he's never been stretched so far....
but anw, as i said i hope you'll be able to update really soon =) *hugs*
Author's Response: ^_^ thanks hun!! :D really, it means a lot. i was nervous with the whole first time scene.. so I'm glad it worked out. and I'll try my best to update soon (but Twisted Words of Wisdom is next in line for update), but like I just said in another response I do have finals coming up for school pretty soon. So we'll see.
Date: 05/23/08 05:55 am Title: Sweet Love
wow! just WOW!!
i'm seriously speechless. that was like one of the best smut scenes ever!!
lol even though there wasn't much detail, but i think that's what made it so good, it gives the reader the chance to picture it all how they want to see it! amazing!!
i loved this chapter, this whole fic is just perfect! :D
Author's Response: Yeah... explicit details of smut scenes, not my forte. But I'm glad the whole *leaving it open for the reader's imagination* thing worked. :D & happy you're still loving it! thanks kat *huggles*
Date: 05/23/08 05:42 am Title: Sweet Love
woah tons of description, can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: mhm. :D i'll try not to leave you guys hanging too long [though Finals are coming up... verrrry soon] thanks.
Date: 05/23/08 12:30 am Title: Sweet Love
I love this story so much and I had been afraid you'd forgotten it! Thank you so much for updating. The love scene was not bad, silly! It was very tender, and appropriate for Bill being so naive. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: o.O Me? Forget THIS story? Are you MAD?! LOL, sorry to say, I love writing this, I'd never forget about it. NEVER. I swear. And thank you; I was just warning you guys I'm not a smut writer since some people get under the impression that all sex scenes have to be insanely explicit and hot, and that's not my style of writing. Thanks again!
Date: 05/23/08 12:06 am Title: Sweet Love
That was the most absolutely beautiful sex scene I've ever read.
Jesus Christ.
I love it so much.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! :D I'm truly glad you love it, seriously.
Date: 05/22/08 10:06 pm Title: Sweet Love
I hope Bill runs off w/ tom before the summer. But his mother seemed really nice in this chapter... it makes the decision harder. update soon.
Author's Response: Yes, see! She's not a totally evil bitch!! ^_^ I didn't want her to be one completely. Lol, well, we'll see what happenssssss... still have to fit in the *scandalous* cause of his disappearance. o.O Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 05/22/08 10:05 pm Title: Sweet Love
I'm proper falling asleep, while i was reading, I could barely keep y eyes open.
I am glad I did though.
Was so sweet.
Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I'm glad you did, too. Happy you liked it!! :D
Date: 05/22/08 07:58 pm Title: Dreams & a Surprise
please please post some more!!!!
Date: 05/21/08 09:03 pm Title: Dreams & a Surprise
...... Ooooooooh, that's EVIL...... =[
Love it!!