Date: 06/02/08 09:29 am Title: Sweet Love
Hello there!
how are you?
I'm "nushy" by the way, you know the french TH fan who's obsessed with your fic and who won't stop talking about her life lol. it may sound stupid but, i forgot my password XD and i ended up with another "pen name".My laptop suddenly refused to do anything,and after my brother repaired it,i was no longer logged in,in this site.I realized that i just put some random password at the time when all i needed was reading those great stories...
Whatever,here i am as "eiri" lol. I saw your reply to my last review and i was more than pleased,thank you!I LOVE reviewing the fics i'm fond of(is that okay to say "i'm fond of a fic"? Crap,i need to progress in english)
I came here to check if there was any new chapter! ç_____ç *crying* i'm a bit disappointed.But it's okay if you don't have any time yet,your life's always more important than a leasure,i mean the finals are around this period of the year nee? I don't know how the system work wherever you come from.
Anywaaay! i'm still convinced that tom's perfume is hugo boss hmmm! back in the 1900 bill has never known such an incredible scent(mixed to tom's natural one of course).Oh,boy i'm still obsessed with the story.Do you think i'm insane?'cause i think i'm becoming...Er...It's so well writen and i'm stuck with it,i can hardly let go.Every now and then i'd think of it.When i see my cellphone for example,i'm wondering how would bill learn something like that when he's gonna live with tom in the future?(here i go again with my theory lol,i'm stuck with it too,thanks to our reply the over day).
*sighs*I have to go. i guess i'll leave you alone for a while. See ya!
Author's Response: HAHA! nushyyyyy or eiri, now. :D Hello back. I'm goooooood, it's nice to see you're using the review system as a means of conversation ^_^ niiice. And that sucks that you forgot your password. And that whole "forgot your password?" link didn't help? Or does this site not even have one of those options? Anywho, hah - it's okay to say "fond of a fic" ... but I have an odd taste of words sometimes. So that could just be me. But it seems like an okay word choice with me. and YES I know. I'm sorryyyyyyy!!! DON'T CRY! I hate it. And you're right; it is finals week (think I mentioned that in the last response). And on top of finals I've had all these STUPID projects and the one group project we nearly had to start over from scratch after finding out we formatted it completely wrong. Which sucked and took up an entire afternoon of when I COULD'VE BEEN WRITING. Ugh. But nooo instead of writing the next chapter of this story I was stuck writing a random fictitious Latin story. -_- Not fun. But yes, point being: finals this week; must cut out time from writing to study. HAHA, no, I don't think you're insane. I get obsessed with stories all the time. But as said, I'm weird (and possibly a little insane) - so maybe we're just floating in the same boat! lol. Hehe, sorry to keep you waiting, but uh, hold onto that theory; you never know how it may play out in the end. I'll try my hardest to update ASAP... AFTER finals, that is. Sorry for the insane wait. Hold in there. :D
Date: 06/02/08 01:51 am Title: Sweet Love
omg..this story is soo lovely~~
Author's Response: ^_^ Thank you! That means a lot..
Date: 05/31/08 03:39 pm Title: Sweet Love
sooooooooo wwwwwhhhhhheeeeeeennnnnsssss ttttttthhhhhheeeeeeeee nnnnnneeeeeeeexxxxttttt
( just in case you cant read that it says 'so whens the next' just really streached out cause i cant wait!)
Author's Response: Haha! I can read it, but yeah, thanks. XD Glad you're excited for the next chapter... I just don't know when I'll be able to get to it. Hmph. Stupid finals and projects. But I'll try to continue as soon as I can. :D
Date: 05/31/08 09:25 am Title: Sweet Love
Beautiful story :D Please continue soon! I really like it :D
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you think so. ^_^ I'll try to continue the next chance I get.
Date: 05/31/08 12:13 am Title: Sweet Love
First time reading through.
Not bad, like i thought it would be, but then I love your other work, so i really should've known.
I love time travel. Its one of my most adored subjects. Just thought i should throw that out there. XD
I really like this...And I'm really wanting to know what happened to Bill, in the past. Is James, the grandfather, still alive in Tom's time? Will he be able to talk to someone in his family about Bill? Tom should try to find out what happened...Or what will happen. Just think, if James were still alive..i wonder if he would remember Tom. Wow. Now there's a thought. I love how the concept fucks with your brain. Ugh. Love time travel.
I dont want Bill to get married..*pout* I love James' character. He seems very intuitive for an 8 year old. XD. Anyways, I'm really glad i decided to read this today. I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: XD Thanks, I'm glad you decided to read it, too! Well.. to answer your questions about James and if he's still alive, currently I'm still thinking about that. I keep switching back and forth, so ... I guess you'll just find out in an upcoming chapter. =/ Which I'm not sure when that'll be with all of these end-of-the-year projects due this week alongside finals. *fun fun* Hah, but that's beside the point. And I know!! Time travel can really fuck with your mind; you get thinking about it too far and it just becomes one massive, vicious circle! Which is, of course, why we love it, right? :D Hehe, anyway, thanks for reviewing, and even for reading the whole thing. Extremely glad you're liking it!
Date: 05/28/08 10:57 pm Title: Sweet Love
This is amazing, I love it
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm happy you do. :D
Date: 05/28/08 06:22 pm Title: Sweet Love
No offence! But this story is kind of dying for me, it is not the same as it used to be and i hope this does not upset you cuz i am only being honest!!
It's really not as amazing-wow as it started out!! There is far too much description these past chapters, no scratch that: WAY TOO MUCH DESCRIPTION!! It's a nice and creative description but it's just a little too much girl, i'd like some dialogue instead of a whole chapter of describing something! And the twins having sex was so random, it doesn't flow well at all and i'm sorry that i can't describe (as well as you obviously can) what i'm trying to say! I really love this story idea and i want to see something better! thank you for even writing it though, i hope you don't take this the wrong way!!!
Author's Response: Hm, okay. I'm sorry... ? Don't really know what to say. I really don't want this story to die for you, I really don't. So... you're not liking the loads of description, right? Well, I'm just trying to paint the picture and lay the scene for you guys; I want you guys to be able to feel like you're THERE with them, and the only way to do that is by the loads of description. Sorry if that bothers you. As for the dialogue, yes, I realize there hasn't been too much. I'll try my best to fit more of that in; I just feel like I don't flow very well with dialogue all of the time. As for the *amazing-wow* factor, what could I do/add to make that come back for you?? Is it just the dialogue versus description or is there something else that's bugging you with the story?? thanks for your review [and for being honest] ^_^
Date: 05/28/08 01:57 pm Title: Sweet Love
aawww!! it's so cute!
tom's scent is mixed with his natural scent and his hugo boss perfume? lol
when you talk about the things in the 21st century from bill's point of view, it made me laugh! it's so true for him, i mean "those little people in the boxes"? It's understandable that he thinks that way, everything's like crazy. even my grandfather's lost you know, using cellphones was a thing he could do only after my parents explained it million of times. Sometimes he would ask the same questions and it's getting on everyone's nerves. He can use it properly now,unlike my grandmother who's a vegetable.(hum, i think i better cut it there before it goes too far,i'm not very fond of them anyway)
Back to your story,i laughed like mad at bill's pain...It was worth it nee? You know,there are not so much fictions that mention how much it hurts down there after THE act. They dismiss it as if it was no big deal, but it is.
well, i loved this chapter. ' hope you'll update soon, but if you can't then i'll patiently wait till you do^^
à bientôt!
Author's Response: hugo boss perfume? ... ^_^ lol. Hah! So is my grandmother; she's only in her 60s and she has SO much difficulty just checking her e-mails. It's amazing how different the technology is nowadays that it leaves that whole generation so clueless with things like cellphones and e-mail. :D Oh yes, it was worth it. Yeah, I've noticed that! Majority of the stories completely look over the factor of pain and slide right into the pleasure. And I'll try to update soon, but I think I'm going to be taking a short break; finals are next week and I should study at some point [even though I probably won't study until the night before] ;D Anywho, happy you're still loving this story! By the way, have I mentioned I LOVE your reviews?
Date: 05/28/08 05:41 am Title: Dreams & a Surprise
Sorry about my previous revew. I didn't understand myself. LOL
I guess i'm a bit too attached to details. I love details,even those that aren't so useful.sometimes, it's a bit frustrating.
Still...I LOVE this story! oh, boy, it's a pearl!
Author's Response: LOL, that's okay; I understood you just fine. No frets. Aw, thanks. I'm so glad you're loving it.
Date: 05/28/08 05:33 am Title: Dreams & a Surprise
kyaaaa!! the last lines of this chapter made my heart jump a little! i don't know why...Or maybe i do.LOL
I couldn't wait to read again. I've been busy enough to distract me and keeping me from thinking about those fics that sometimes obsess me,such as yours lol!
When i first read this chapter, my jaw nearly dropped to the gorund, seriously!i thought that tom's dream was "real",i told myself that it couldn't be happening! she's not THAT sadistic! but then it was a dream i was relieved^^
when bill refers to tom's grandparents and mother, i've been thinking,or i missed something because, i don't recall reading that Bill knows that he's tom's "ancestor"(?). I mean, there was no conversation at all between the two of them,Bill didn't know that Trümper's tom's mom's maiden name.
Wait...He saw the book. He saw himself in the picture and his own date of death. Well, i was wrong, he knows. BUT, i think, i would discuss something like that if i were him. I mean,even if it this just talking about it with tom."So i'm related to you huh?I didn't know, till i saw that old book."
Author's Response: Haha, I was wondering if you'd get around to reading these last 2 chapters. ^_^ LOL, no, I'm not THAT sadistic, but I do have a liking to fooling you guys every now and then, especially with dreams. And no, there hasn't been any conversation between them about being faintly related... yet. Of course, bringing up the book brings up the death, once more. If I were him, I'd be hesitant to even think about that. So.. we'll see. I'll try to fit a smidgen of that topic in an upcoming chapter, okay? :D thanks for reviewing
Date: 05/27/08 04:22 pm Title: Sweet Love
That was really REALLY good smut. It was really romantic, too.
I love this story! I can't wait for an update! :)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :D That means a lot. Glad you're loving it, and I'll try to update soon [even though finals are approaching.. ick]
Date: 05/26/08 09:28 pm Title: Sweet Love
Awwww this chapter was so sweet and well writen it was definetly worth the wait.
Author's Response: Thanks :D Glad you think so.
Date: 05/26/08 03:24 pm Title: Sweet Love
awwwwwww!!
update sooooon!!
xoxox
Author's Response: ^_^ i'll try. thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/24/08 11:40 pm Title: Don't Tell Me You Forgot Her Maiden Name
WHAT ?????!!!!!
DEATH???!!!
... i don't want bill to die :(
Author's Response: ^_^ no! none of us want Bill to die!!! ((keep readingggggg & you'll see))
Date: 05/24/08 12:38 pm Title: Admitting with a Lie
i love this james kid!
poor bill, he's on the edge of a breakdown...i hope the two brothers will eventually understand each other
Author's Response: Hehe, glad you love the kid. :D some readers love him, others don't. yeah.. we'll see how it goes with the brothers. james fades out for a few more chapters or so... oh boy, i've still got quite bit left to go with this story! :D thanks for reviewing, glad you're liking the story still
Date: 05/24/08 12:16 pm Title: What If He Tells Mother?
aaaw!! good chapter! it was brilliant to put the scene in james's point of view. Very interesting, and adds more spice to the story. You didn't just dismissed james and make him look like an idiot eight years old. In some fics, they just make a child of ten years old sound like one of two. James'personality's adorable. I'm sort of proud of that kid, he's not stupid.
love your fic!
Author's Response: thanks! lol, good, i'm glad you like James' personality; I didn't want him to be a dumb little kid (and I like to think that young kids used to be a little more... well-rounded back in the late 1800s or early 1900s). Thanks again. :D
Date: 05/24/08 11:49 am Title: Don't Hope. Know.
Kiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! it's too cute!
*breaths* i kept smiling while i read this chapter, a smile that turned into a grin when james appears !My little brother asked me the very same question when he caught my boyfriend and i when we made out. He was only five but hell, i was embarassed to death...In front of a five years old little boy!
my life's not interesting i know, i just couldn't help it.i like reviewing,putting my impressions, my feelings towards what i'm reading.
You know, the date's a minor detail.I'd not stop reading because of that.
I talked about the first war...Er,lol ignore my crazy comments, i just wanted to point out that the technology has already gone pretty far (you know, nuclear bomb and such...)
sorry for that.
Anywaaaaay! this story is soooo freaking beautiful. Still love it, if not more!In my favorites, quick!lol
Author's Response: Ah, I can only imagine how embarrassing that would be! And I don't mind the little *your life* interjections; I like knowing when I've let people relate something to their life or whatever.. I leave useless stuff about my life in reviews all the time. :D & good, I was hoping that date thing wouldn't cause too much of a disruption, and I'm glad it hasn't. And I figured that was what you were hinting at with the war. Any-who, thanks!! glad you think it's beautiful! :D
Date: 05/24/08 11:17 am Title: You Do Know That Love Involves Much, Much More than Kissing...
hello!!
you don't know it but your story just ossessed me all day! i though about it again and again till my head couldn't bear it and hurts badly. I'm insane,don't pay attention lol!
Oh, and sorry for all my nonsense reviews, i'm a very talkative french person, you know the boring type! XD
I may also make many mistakes when i write so good luck to you to figure out what i'm trying to explain.
i REALLY loved this chapter! cute and hot! I think your writing skills are just perfect! I don't get bored when i read, it's very pleasant!
Author's Response: Hah, really? It's been obsessing you all day? I hope it didn't distract you from whatever too much. ^_^ & Lol, it's okay, I like talkative reviews (and by the way, your english is great, I haven't had too much trouble understanding your reviews yet, so don't fret about that). Aw, thank you!! Hehe, I try not to bore you guys to sleep, so I'm glad it's keeping you interested. And thanks for all your reviews :D
Date: 05/24/08 06:35 am Title: Sweet Love
that was sweet chapter, love it :D i can't figure out any words now so, more please? :)
Author's Response: thank you, glad you loved it. :D i'll try and write more soon
Date: 05/23/08 07:21 pm Title: Don't You Forget About Our Little Talk
gustav finally shows up!
Author's Response: yes, i know, finally! though... he doesn't really have a major role in this story, i'm sorry to say. =/