Date: 06/10/08 01:26 pm Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
This story is amazing! It's very original! I loved this chapter!
Date: 06/10/08 11:55 am Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
such a nice chapter
Bill is absolutely adorable in this
I hope you update soon!
xxx
Date: 06/10/08 10:44 am Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
Gosh, can you make it anymore adorable? I really did think it wasn't possible but now...I have to rethink the whole thing. This, as well as all the others, was such a lovely chapter ^^
Date: 06/10/08 10:13 am Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
Oh, I love your story! But I'm not able to relax properly while I read such fluffy chapters because I'm afraid that there'll be a sad ending. |D I can't help it...
Date: 06/10/08 09:22 am Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
Aaaahhhh finally an update!!!!
I'm excited for the next! ^^
Date: 06/10/08 08:35 am Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
The strip of paper was soo cute, and James is very curious...he might find out about the whole thing xD
This chapter was amazing.
Date: 06/10/08 07:57 am Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
Oh they are so cute together!
please continue soon :]
Date: 06/10/08 06:53 am Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
i loved it!!
so worth the wait!!
my fave part would have to be the scene with the mirrors, that sounded so awesome, i pictured it in my head and it looked so beautiful :D
they were born for each other, it's too cute!!
love it, love it, love it!!!
Date: 06/10/08 06:17 am Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
aaaaawww i loved this chap soo much!!!! *jumps*
Date: 06/10/08 05:52 am Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
OMG WHAT WHY IS THIS NOT FINISHED> OMG OMG OMG.
-trying my best not to sound like a plastic princess right now-
but omg. this is the best i cried so much. i feel like printing this out and sending it to universal studios!!!! this should be a movie or something!!!! i love this.
and whilst i was reading this, i had a song on repeat, i want you to listen to it ok? even if its not your sort of thing, the lyrics so fitted this story perfectly for me. i love it i love it i love it. i love tom and bill so much after reading this.
the song is Always by big bang. they have an english version somewhere.
song: http://aimini.net/view/?fid=qxsgRUWlL3VuXiYZhmWY
lyrics:http://www.justsomelyrics.com/1585163/Big-Bang-Always-(English-Version)-Lyrics
awww. i love tom and bill!
if you don't update soon i swear i will kill myself. LOL. i am so like calling my best friend up right now an making her read this! oh i love it so much i am so touched i love it so much. i love it so much i'm like crying. its so sweet and oh i love bill and tom. i think im like bordering on obsession. its not that good for my health so im like gunna go now. lol. love you! ciao!
Date: 06/10/08 05:50 am Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
this story just got even better! keep it up
Date: 06/10/08 05:14 am Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
James is hella cute!
and I'm glad Bill won't die and I think I was right about my hunch a couple of chapters before :D
congrats btw for being featured :D
Date: 06/10/08 03:50 am Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
Oooooh, okay, okay, so Bill disappears and then James finds the pictuers again, yeah? OR SOMETHING. really glad to see more of this. :)
Date: 06/10/08 03:44 am Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
awwwwwwwwwww!!!
update sooooooon!!
xoxox
Date: 06/10/08 01:57 am Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
OMG you updated!!!!! I cannot tell you how excited I am that you updated! Okay, maybe you can guess :)
Yeah, mom's finding the pics. So busted. I smell angst, yes I do. Poor Billa.
Date: 06/10/08 01:51 am Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
I was so happy to see that there was a new chapter of this story!! The scene in the house of mirrors was beyond adorable. I can't wait for more.
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Date: 06/10/08 01:42 am Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
Great chapter :D I hope you continue soon!!
Date: 06/10/08 01:11 am Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
It's getting amazing-er by the chapter. :)
Date: 06/03/08 05:13 am Title: Sweet Love
Aw! That was strangely cute lol. Awesome writing as always.
Author's Response: Hah! "strangely cute" ... I guess that's a good way to phrase it. XD & thanks!
Date: 06/02/08 05:04 pm Title: Sweet Love
Ooohh soo cute xD
Bill and Tom are so great together. I hope Bill goes to the 21st century.
Author's Response: :D Thanks, glad you think so. And we'll see where they end up... you never knowwww