Date: 07/07/08 01:09 pm Title: Goodbyes & Dust
i'm like an idiot, but i knew it !! i knew it XD...I better not do that:reading little part and go review. But i have something to say so i can't hold back the urge.And i don't want to make a review too long because i don't want it to be cut or something...Ah, yeah i pressed the back button like you said, the review reamins there.That's cool!
Author's Response: LOL, you know what? maybe you should take notes as you read so you don't have to do this. Then you'll have your thoughts from the beginning of the chapter when you finally reach the review box at the end of the chapter. That could work!! ^_^ But I'm sure you won't do that. I wouldn't even do that. My hand would cramp up... Hehe, yay, glad the back button works. It makes life easier.
Date: 07/07/08 01:04 pm Title: Goodbyes & Dust
Part one done! i read it and wow it was so sad.iF BILL followed tom in the future for these two months,tom's grandparents would be under their grave sooner than expected due too heart attack lol! The scene was very beautiful,at least , in my mind^_^,i love my crazy imagination now.If it were me,i wouldn't say goodbye like that,maybe i'd hide somewhere i can't witness the departure...I'm too emotional and holding back tears is a thing too painful to do.Or i'd have a tantrum right there O_ô,i don't know much about myself so i guess i'll find out when my big brother will leave us to live in germany?It's in september...Nooooo! i'd be too happy to watch him leave,maybe i'd fake some tears for some dramatic effect?but i know for sure that i'll miss him.
The pair of eyes was jaaaaaaames's!! XD(groupie mode on ;)
Maybe he fainted? I mean, he just saw someone vanish like that !I see coming some questions...Huh, i'll go and find out in the next part^^
Author's Response: So you're reviewing after each part? So what would you do if I broke up the chapter into little itty bitty parts? Would you be reviewing after each bit? XDD Hahaa, I won't do that... At least, I don't think I will. Noooo James won't faint (why are you always saying his name like a groupie? you a fan of James?? XD) But he will be full of questions, you'll see.
Date: 07/07/08 12:44 pm Title: Goodbyes & Dust
Now that i started to read, i saw that you lost your cats? Oh, so sorry for you *hugs*. I can give you mine if you want, he's a f*cking lazy fat cat. He reminds every people who sees him of garfield because of the color of his fur. His name's gomez, and when he's too full he have any difficulties to ove around. I kick him all the time and my mom always get angry at me but i can't help it!And the most surprising is that the fool always sleeps with me. He's a bit of a masochist if you ask me,i swear i'm the one in my family who treats him like sh*t but he loves me still.Amazing...Okay, sometimes when i watch TV i pet him...But, the,he makes a cute face and i do find him cute, so cute that i end up wanting to slap him. Three months ago he was castrated, boy it was funny to see him walk,like he had something in his ass XD...But even before,he always walked funny,maybe he's gay i thought then lol!it was his first time ...Sorry sorry sorryyyy! here i go talking about gomez's sex life (ewwww!)Now, i promise, i will read.I really couldn't help it
Author's Response: Yeah, yeah, lost 2 kitties in a month and a half =/ it's frustrating and sad *hugs back* hahaa thanks, but i'll pass. we adopted another cat... he's such a cutie. he's kinda fat, more than our previous cats. and he's like tannish-grey and he has naturally crossed baby blue eyes! (apparently crossed eyes is a semi common trait in siamese cats?) Lol, you're like my dad. He could probably care less about the pets and he'd prefer not to have them, yet they all love him like he's king or something. ^_^ It's funny how that works. Ha, his name is Gomez? That's cute XD Gomez the garfield cat... ^_^
Date: 07/07/08 12:32 pm Title: Goodbyes & Dust
Oh, and just so you know(if you haven't figured that out already) that the "m" button of this laptop refuses to work sometimes.I have to press on it like mad sometimes too...It's the sort of little things that gets on my nerves,and a bit frustrating tsss!
Author's Response: Ugh, I hate stuff like that. I always get extremely frustrated and start pounding on the keys which just leaves me off in a worst place than before. XD Okay, I'll keep that in mind
Date: 07/07/08 12:29 pm Title: Goodbyes & Dust
Coucou!
I haven't read yet...Yeah i know,i do this all the time even on the french fanfictions i read lol(or the few i really like). I read your answers *squeals* they made me laugh at soe point and i don't even know why...*cough* I' a bit insane,maybe? LOL. It's you who's funny!not me U___U Or we are both? XD. About disneys...Hannah montana?You may not believe me but i've never seen one single thing she does. My little cousins love her so much,i saw her face for the first time in their room months ago. And then magazines and such...Internet...But it never came in my mind to check out what exactly this teen does,i mean, i read a random summary somewhere and then
i discovered too that she's the youngest
star who's got the biggest influence with teens(besides me? O.ô)in america or something...Whatever...I don't hate her or anything, i just don't care i guess.So i'm in the same boat as you XD
Here in Nantes the weather's so bad. It rained cats and dogs till a moent ago. Now it's a bit calmer but the sky's too grey and it's a bit depressing. I swear it influences my mood too...Fortunately,i have hot chocolate to drink and my brother's laptop so i'm happy^_^(i stole it fro him XD,hopefully he won't notice yet,he's kinda busy now.If i asked permission he surely would lend it to e but i don't know what came into me é_è...Maybe i'm gonna read your chapter now before someone interrupts me(i hate it when y little brothers play around when i try to relax.Yeah i'm the only girl of 4 children.My parents f*ck like bunnies...Why do i keep on making a tale of y life? LOL Sorry sorry...Now, on the fic!
Author's Response: Oh.my.god. XDD Okay, seriously? How many reviews do you leave? LOL I logged in and checked up on the stories and it was "Turn Back Time - 468 reviews" I was like o.O WTF? And of course I come here and see there's like 9 new reviews from none other than YOU!! XD Hahaa, but I'm not complaining. We're so weird... we treat this review system like e-mail... half of the stuff we write about has nothing to do with the story. ^_^ Oh well. Yeah, Hannah Montana/Miley Cyrus... I've never watched her show (besides when flipping through channels and i catch like a few seconds and i'm like "hell no, turn it off!!") and I don't listen to her music (besides when I'm in some store and it's on and i have no choice but to plug my ears). I know it's wrong to say I hate her and her show or whatever since I have no basis to judge her, but it's not my style and it's annoying to walk into Wal-Mart and see racks of clothes with Hannah Montana stuff on them... I swear her stuff is in EVERY department. It's crazy. It makes me mad. I usually want to lash out and start yanking everything down, but I control myself. ^_^ I guess basically she's like the Tokio Hotel of America on the younger kids (even though some older teens somehow like her...). She's everywhere. It gets annoying. AGh, I hate when the skies all dark and depressing - it makes me depressed, too. Lol, don't worry. I like reading random tales of people's lives XD sometimes. it makes me laugh. XD alrighty... now onto responding to your OTHER reviews!!
Date: 07/05/08 10:47 pm Title: Goodbyes & Dust
omg you made me cry at the beginning
cant wait till u update
I'm really looking forward to it
Author's Response: aw, did I really make you cry? sorry ^_^ and i'll do my best to update soon. thanks for reviewing
Date: 07/05/08 04:56 pm Title: Goodbyes & Dust
Oh, the plot thickens. (The good news is Bill will always be able to have his teddy.)
Author's Response: Oh yes, the plot thickens. ^_^ Aw, yeah, I guess he will. Even though it's sitting in a box in a dusty basement in the future, he can always get it, I suppose. XD
Date: 07/05/08 01:37 am Title: Sweet Love
poor Bill limping because of buttsex XD
Hope Tom doesn't have to leave though:(
Author's Response: XD yup, poor Billa. But Tomi still has to leave - he doesn't have too much of a choice, actually. :/
Date: 07/05/08 01:12 am Title: Dreams & a Surprise
man I was like 0_o when the pipe/portal wasn't working! thank god it was all just a BAD BADDD dream^^
Author's Response: Yeah, THANK GOD!! That'd kinda ruin the story, wouldn't it? If the pipe/portal thing suddenly stopped working? They'd be crushed!! ... and I would be, too... o.O which is odd, since I'd be the one causing it to happen, but whatever. I'd still be crushed. So I'm not gonna do that. That idea can stay a distant nightmare forever XD
Date: 07/05/08 12:45 am Title: Admitting with a Lie
aww Bill should have trusted james and told him the truth.
Author's Response: he should have. but would you if you were in bill's position? i probably would've lied, too...
Date: 07/05/08 12:26 am Title: What If He Tells Mother?
haha james is so curious :P but he'll keep their secret safe right ?
Author's Response: he is their secret holder :D *nods* he'll keep it safe, I swear
Date: 07/05/08 12:08 am Title: Don't Hope. Know.
oeps they got caught! hope james won't tell:|
Author's Response: little jamesy won't tell. XD he's a nice brother.
Date: 07/04/08 09:38 pm Title: Goodbyes & Dust
*dies happy* never read a story SO good!
Author's Response: *dances* thank you, really. i'm glad you think so XD
Date: 07/04/08 12:34 pm Title: Old-Fashioned Lunatic
i have to correct it before i die... *piece of technology* not "peace"! my! I'm soooo dense. I have to go out for fresh air and the sunshine!
Author's Response: ANOTHER REVIEW?! My god, Andy!! How much are you gonna write?! XD but I'm not complaining ^_^ And no, you're not dense. I make mistakes like that all the time!! And English isn't your mothertongue, right? Well, it's mine.. and I swear, I make more mistakes than you sometimes. So don't sweat it, honestly. XDD okay, talk to you when you get a chance to read Ch 20, which hopefully won't be too long from now
Date: 07/04/08 12:32 pm Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
I re-read my review and boy i ade many mistakes XD. Whatever...James and his virgin foreskin XD are eight years old not ten nee? And you know what?I was scared when i submited y review. Fortunately i kept a copy lol because when i did tried to submit it minutes ago it told me that i was not authorized to that function or something *sweat drops*. I had to log in and then submit the copy lol and it was only the first part. They cut it! *bless my good fortune* i tried to put the second part but all that appeared was my goupie like scream to james's name *shaaaaame* and finally i did it! *proud*
next step: chibby eyes to father so i can borrow his laptop to read chapter 20. The family PC is an ancestor(no offense here Bill lol)the screen is eewww! and all in it isn't likeable. When i think about it, years ago it was THE technology...Well, windows98 isn't "in" anymore u___u .
Byyyye!!
Author's Response: Yes. James and his virgin foreskin are 8, but it doesn't matter. The point being: he's a youngling. XD Hahaa, yeah, that means you were sitting "idle" on the site for too long, not doing anything. It kicks you out after not clicking on links for so long. Usually if you log back in and hit the "back button" to the review page the text stays... at least for me it does (but that could just be my browser or computer, not the site). I get that "not authorized to access this function" warning A LOT because I'm such a lazy ass slow reader!! Gah, windows 98? That SUCKS!! I'm so sorry you're stuck with that... we used to have it. I don't think I could count the number of times it crashed even if I wanted to... -_- Ugh. And don't worry about little mistakes, I can tell what you're saying. XD
Date: 07/04/08 12:23 pm Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
ahem! yeah,james. He's too cute in my head oh my!I think that he would grow old keeping Bill's secret. He is the only one who knows that bill's not dead but gone in the future. I don't know if bill told him that tom's a relative though...Because he has a little piece of his future in tom. Isn't it scary to know your descendent at the age of ten? You even don't probably know yet how to pull back your virgin foreskin XD(how vulgar i am, sorry).
I already think about farewells between bill and james oh no! i'm already sad i wanna hug your characters. "I will keep your secret forever my beloved big brother" waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!! I really wanna cry here!!
i HAVE TO CHANGE THE SUBJECt before i cry for real. Oh i remembered something. The photo. It's in all color, why didn't james ask why it was not in black and white? And why a glossy paper? I mean, wow! in that time the photographer had to hide in that black thing and hold the
*i don't know what it is* that smokes...
everyone smiles and then...*cheeers! le petit oiseau est sorti!* XD.
Maybe he didn't want to ask too much questions? He would just leave it be and assume it coe from tom's "town"...
Did i say i haven't read the next chapter yet? Yeah, i absolutely had to say those "little" things in that chapter before reading it. Seeing the title, it's scaring me!
i have to go. But i always come back nee? I want to know what happens next but the owner of this peace of technology *dead* wants it back. I will find another way to read it i swear!
Bill< no sneakers! white brand new adidas *nods* ,and pull back your hair in a sensual motion will ya? drive that dreadlocked lover of yours crazy.
I have to go...I don't wanna goooo! *kicks and flail*
Oh congratulations for your finals by the way...I succeeded too! yup!(otherwise i could do my farewells to my laptop XD)
Bye, Izza.
Andy
Author's Response: Gah, are you in my mind? I think you are. Or I'm subconsciously putting in little hints about James that you're picking up on... o.O Anyways - hahaa, yeah that'd be scary knowing your future descendent at such a young age. Agh, vulgar Andy. x_x lol, just kidding. Hahaaa!! Don't worry, there won't be a teary good-bye like that between Bill and James. I'm pretty sure the situation that causes their separation won't allow much time for a goodbye (still contemplating the exact details and stuff about that situation... I have a couple ideas in mind and now I just have to choose a path!! so tough!! I don't wanna choose. Can't I just make it like one of those movies where under the special features they sometimes have an "alternative ending"??? Ahhh! Dude!! I should so do that!! Hahaa... maybe I will if I end up not liking the one I choose...) Moving on-- Well, James didn't really get to see much of the photos in those few seconds, but I'm brushing up on that idea in Ch21 - so look forward to that. And lol, I know what you mean, though - with the guy and the thing that smokes and creates the flash or whatever... yeah, I get it. But I don't know what time period that was. that's something I should look up.. Oh and don't worry about the next chapter. The "goodbyes" aren't FINAL goodbyes or whatever, just a little semi goodbye. Hard to explain without giving it away, and I want you to read it for yourself. ^_^ Hehe, gah I know what it's like to be pulled away from fanfic... it's no fun, is it? It sucks. -_- Good job on succeeding your finals, too!! Hope you get back to read the next chapter soon! XD
Date: 07/04/08 12:21 pm Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
*jaaaaaames!
Author's Response: jaaaaaaammmmeeeesssssssssss XD do you like praising his name or something??
Date: 07/04/08 12:18 pm Title: A Carnival & Teddy Bears
Hallooooooooooooooooooo!!
How are you? Fine? Me too XD...My PC is now dead forever. The damn thing refused to do anything ç___ç. But thanks to that, my parents promised to buy me a new laptop by the end of july woooonderfuuul! *thanks her old peace of sh*t former PC* yay!!
I borrowed my brother's and when i checked my mail, something flashed in my mind! FICTIOOOON! it said, yeah, when i surf in the net, i ALWAYS go to fanfiction sites,this one especially. And then i thought about your wonderful fic and My review (about the size of the bible u_u) that have been deleted ç____ç. I barely slept that night.
whatever...
I passed by, and only on your fic,even "makes three" with a new chapter was invisible to me lol. Well, honestly i love reviewing you because you always have a little response and it encourage me too. I re-read this chapter.OMG i loved it!!! in my long review i did an annoying speech about Bill's shoes lol, *i want adidaaaaas! adidas!*
*cough*
and then i talked about disneyland...To think about it, maybe i'm a bit of a disney too *bwahahahaha!!*. If i were Bill i would have been scared for life in front of a giant mickey mouse. *more scary than cute if you ask me*
Oh and a talked about tom's way of driving and bill holding in something fo dear life. OMG, i talked too uch in that
review,you're lucky you hadn't read it. Boy, it was endless words of nonesense at all and poor english(i put some french words in it 'cause i didn't remember the meaning in english and i was too lazy to find out lol).
Anywayyyys! enough about that stupid review who disapeared without reason. Here was my little speculation(yeah i had this one but you put a new chapter ç__ç i haven't read it yet but maybe you put it already. I wish you could read what i had to say before =)
I talked about james *jaaaaaames!
Author's Response: WHOAAAAAAAAAA, girl, slow down!! ^_^ Hahaa, well, okay, don't. I love the long reviews. And I'm good, fine. thanks for asking XD Wow, I feel honored. You passed up Makes 3 for this? *shakes head* You're funny. ^_^ I love responding, and I try my best to do it when I can - and if I'm short on time to respond then I just do the ones that have questions or whatever. (and yours usually have at least one question squeezed in there somewhere, but i love responding to your reviews anyways. i look forward to them, actually) Wow, a whole long speech about Bill's shoes? Hahaa, I want his adidas, too!! And you talked about disneyland? Aw, I wish I could read everything you had to say about that! I'm a disney freak (for the animation and such - I don't like the "disney stars" nowadays or whatever - like Hannah Montana and High School Musical stuff... *shudders* that stuff I can't stand!! *flips out*) XD And yeah, I'd freak out in front of one of those huge characters... I think i did as a little kid, actually. XD I cried. Awwwww, but I wanted to read it!! I like when people talk too much ('cause I do, too!) And what about James?????? *off to respond to your other handful of reviews* XDD
Date: 07/03/08 09:13 pm Title: You Do Know That Love Involves Much, Much More than Kissing...
wonders if bill even remembers that he's tom's great grand uncle XD
so hooked on this story ^^
Author's Response: i'm pretty sure that fact is the least of thoughts on his mind right now. XD YAY!! *dances* I'm so happy you're hooked on it. XD I love picking up new readers - thanks for reviewing. I love that you're doing it with every chapter, it means a lot.
Date: 07/03/08 08:57 pm Title: Don't You Forget About Our Little Talk
XD poor kids! stupid parents :P
Author's Response: XD yeah, stupid, stupid parents...