Time to review this chapter!
I do my best not to leave too many reviews and wrap everything in one,well almost everything. But hell, i don't know why,i always end up with several reviews...Wait, i know why, because you're one of my favorite authors!!!It's harassment do you think? XD
Nooo, i'm a sweet little girl...No wait,(looks in pants)...Er,yeah a girl.
LOL! if i were a boy, i'd have been gay for sure...Logic, i LOOOOVE BOYS! XD

You may find it a bit silly but,ireally followed your silly advice XD, i took a sheet of paper and a pen *coughs* and took notes, but at the second sentence my patience left me lol and you were right,i couldn't do it.I felt a bit odd in front of my screen so, all i did is read,and surrender to my urge to write something, re-read again and so on...(to be totally honest,at this stage of this review i still didn't read this chapter *shame*)

Oh, F*ck! The phone dumbass! pick it!(i'm reinded of those oents where watching a movie, people tend to tell the character what to do, where to go "no, don't open the door, the criminal is right behind it!" LOL,we sometimes forget that it's useless,it's a movie for christ'sake XD! but i think it add some fun when we do that kind of silly stuff!)
Oh,James! he's getting cuter as time pass by! i love that kid. The scene where they hug is sooo beautifuly discribed!I imagine georg just a few feet away and hahahaha!! it made me laugh!*pets georg's l'oreal hair*

The photo tom's holding must be beautiful too! awww! cute! To think about it, i'm imagining my photos 1OO years from now in the future...My descendent will use it as a toilet paper if the earth continues its degradation.at the rate the pollution and such increase In 100 years, no forest,means less papers, means my face right in the***** of my descendent ...shudders!!

"he does fine on his own – in his mind, at least."

O_ô.

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I remember something you said to me the last time..."what if he has Alzheimer's?"...Seriously? XD XD he's no longer in his right mind,then? Plus he's sooo old!So what happen to the "energyzer bunnies"? Bwahahahahaha!

While tom's dealing with "grandpa", grandpa's father is eight years old and in the same century as himself...He's old ,his father young and neither of them know how close they are to each other...Past and future,it's...Fascinating! it leaves an odd feeling to me.
i see then that james's son never bothered to read his journal.But he has this "i know something very secret" attitude! I like this grandpa^^
So...James used to tell stories about bill? without revealing too much i suppose?He will grow old keeping everything in his heart, wow...He 'd have a secretive smile whenever he'd think about his own adventures...I imagine him with his children,telling them stories...He'd be a good father.
Will jaes know that tom shares his blood?
Another subject, i think that it'd be intense if , when tom and bill live together in the future, they discover a note from james...I'd be bill, i'd cry.

*rolls eyes at georg*. Hadn't you noticed the similar clothing?? tsssk! LOL it was funny how slow he was.

“Florence thinks she can be as close to Bill as Tom is. She can’t.” *nods* TRUE.A simple but clear sentence,no need to dance around the subject.
Why don't Georg try to call tom? I want to see tom and bill talking on the phone! *pout*
So, Bill plans on returning home late? Hope he won't be lectured by his mother. O_O Hell! i hope florence didn't fuck something up! and i hope she won't come running to bill's mother and complain...I'd hate her if she does!
I wondered what reaction 'd bill and james have towards the great mélange of race in our century! you know,a black and a chinese holding hands for example...Back then, blacks were slaves.Georg and Tom will have a lot of job to explain things^^
well, i'll leave you now because it's 01:32 in the morning and i'm yawning! I have some ideas, but since you and i seem to have nearly the same in mind , i guess i'll just wait and read ^_^

Bisous.
Andy

Author's Response: JESUS... long review!! But I guess that's what happens when you take everything you have to say from your normal 7-8 reviews and shove it all into one, hey? :D Lol, well, hi. Sorry the response has taken a while. I actually wasn't going to respond to any 'cause... well.. they're all like a week old and people sometimes find it odd when a review is responded to so late. But I was on vacation, so yeah. Here I am! I'm back!! :D Hahaa, you actually tried the pen and paper?! Kudos to you!! I don't even do that... I barely ever write anything down (besides, of course, like... fanfics and homework) - it's all up here *taps head* :P Haha, I do that sometimes. In reviews, too. I'll be like "NO!! Tom, you freaking idiot get your ass back there andsafasf yada yada yada.." Actually... I don't know if I've ever yelled at a movie... fanfics, yes, but movies? Not so much, unless I'm doing it jokingly. Ewww, so our photographs are going to be used as toilet paper? Damn, thank you for that oh so *lovely* mental image!! Now I'm soooo looking forward to the future. ^.^ Wellllll... about the Alzheimer's... I'm actually not sure whether to have him have that or not, or to just make him a happy old man who's so locked up in his mind that the world is a very jolly, merry place. :D And of course, he's still an energizer bunny!! Old and still pushing his way through life instead of giving up... you know the energizer bunny; he just keeps going and going and going and going.. Umm... yeah, time really screws with your mind, doesn't it? What if in the future they've created a time machine and our descendants are already coming back and checking in on us as we speak? What if they're walking around our rooms hidden by some futuristic invisibility cloak while we're so ignorant and unaware? o.O Freaky, man, freaky. Just think about it... *shudders* ooh, yes that'd be intense. as for tom's grandpa/james' son... you'll just have to wait and see how much he actually knows... hahaa (actually, i have to decide how much i want him to know.. i'm weighing my options). :D As for Georg.. he takes things slowly. He always does in all of my fics. He's my little fiction puppet to play around with, I always have him as the comedic relief, so it seems. ^.^ oh, well, Florence may not blab about it, but she definitely saw something. :D Oooh, that's a really good point. I hadn't really even thought of the racial make-up and how we're so much more.. not diverse, but... "okay" with it, not as racist as back then. Good point. ;D Okay.. well... I think I've responded enough... I'll try to update soon.. not sure how soon that'll be, though. Thanks for reviewing, as always. *hugs* I love your reviews, by the way. :D

WOW!!!! I am amazed!!!! I love time travel story's! I find them extremely fascinating...
Although... Trying to understand the concept of time travel and the consequently disturbing tempus, is a tad bit difficult... I think I will do as the famous Captain of the Voyager, Kathryn Janeway, does... Forget about it or I will get a nasty headache...

You write REALLY good! Awesome....
I keep smiling the whole time, and at the same time i'm sitting on needles... GOD... I am soooo awestruck about this...
I can not find the words to describe how much i love this story!!!!

Thank you, thank you, thank you... :D

Poor Bill... It can not be an easy thing to see your own death date...
Love Geo... because he is OK with Tom being Gay... He seems to be the only one who is concerned about the Timeline...

How are Bill and James going to explain their disappearance to Florence?
And explain Bill to Simone???

And when are Tom and Bill finally going to be together???

AAAARRRGGHHHHHHH why oh why did i start reading a unfinished story??? The suspense is killing me...

Thank you for a wonderful, romantic, sweet, happy, fluffy, angsty, funny and just so exiting and perfect story!

Thank you! :D

WHERE'S THE REST OF IT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
OMG OMG OMG OMG....you HAVE to right the next chapters like RIGHT now!!!
Very very very good story! well written, please get the next chapters out soon!!

I forgot, i hope georg will tell tom everything the moment he can reach him!

OOOkay! i was melting in front of my screen! james's too cute kyaaaah!in my mind he is! Not stupid that kid,I'm glad you put his comments about the photos, even if people don't care about those details, i'm very sensitive to them because details make a story unique and closer to reality. i like the impression that the character "thinks, analyze and react" in his environment like it really happened , it's more believebable. Not like some other stories where the author dismiss some major details leaving many chapters with cliffhangers and unanswered questions.
The other day i read a french fic, it was a good fic really, but then i was reading chapter 4, where Tom and Bill were kissing hard passionately,such...The scene may sound hot you tell me,except the fact that, Bill vomited before that(and she described the color and told what food it was ew!)He was ill, and sunddenly,in the morning after vomiting he and tom kiss passionately? WTF? She did not mention wether bill washed his mouth to appease the reader's mind,to me the kiss tasted like puke ew! and he was terribly ill! no matter how in love tom and bill might be,they appeared like blondes with no brain. Bill's illness was discribed like he was drained and no energy, and suddenly he was healthy! wtf?i stopped. I agree it's a fic but...Whatever, i'm carried away lol! Why am i writing all this? It's not like it has something to do with your wonderfuuul fic^^...I wanted to say that you were talented girl!
Now with james, yeah...Him. His questions in that diary of his were definitely interesting! since i asked the same things!i mean, if i were him, in that time and at that age, it would be strange...And while i read his lines, i was trying to read it from tom's point of view...Scraing! my blood would've run cold.But in the other hand, he knows what's happening!Bill's with that girl?*jealous*

Oh my, poor kid! He just saw hiq brother vanish...I'd faint if it were me! And, Florence...(pause...Silence...)...BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! serves her right!It's weird, i don't hate her too much, i'm sorry for her,i guess. You warned me that she'll grow fond of bill and i made a face (lol!!) But the way you write it...You didn't turn her into a bitch and i'm thankful for that...The scenery around them, the atmosphere was pleasant...I laughed imagining the kiss scene lol her lips foring a closed "o" like a child's XD And Bill...God, Bill, poor baby,a gentleman endeed,have it been my brother in his place he 'd've surely shoved her aside dryly ugh! And when he told her to turn away ...WAHAHAHHAHAA!!! HILARIOUS! Yet,a bit dramatic too but, my imagination turned the other way uhuh!

I' telling you, you surprised me here. Bill fleeing in the future..??! But,...that was just BLOODY BRILLIANT! because, in his sadness and distress, it was the best place he could go.And even if tom isn't there,the mere thought that tom live here warm his heart a bit...Perhaps giving him the sweet illusion that he's closer to his love...I'm melting!

OMG OMG OMG!!! my heart couldn't stop racing! thump thump thump!
When i was reading the part where bill explored the vacant place where his house had been, i crossed y fingers and hope he won't get lost, i mean, the further he goes around, he may not remember the way back or something...It's added to his sadness to see that desolate place. And then,Georg! GOD BLESS HIM!! you don't know, how relieved i was...I mean,i didn't like the idea of him being by himself there."she's not that a sadist and make it angstyer and painful to read?!" But pheeew!!
And before reading about the phone call, i thought about it...And it was funny because when i read what you wrote,i said out loud "i knew it!" like an idiot XD. It's a good thing you mentioned that "georg's phone looked different from tom's" to Bill because that simple sentence respond to a bunch of questions...It has the idea in it that bill's behaviour towards the damn thing is not surprising because the object isn't foreign to him.So we avoid questions like "Isn't Bill a bit at loss when georg give him the phone?He doesn't know what to do with it!" Bleh! he does. Because tom showed him!^^


And then...James *hugs him tightly* Too much emotion for his young heart! I was all "ooh!" when bill hugged him...it's sooo, i don't know...Can i join in? XD

An finally, TOM, yeah him...He was reading james's adventures and then...They were here? What is he going to do? I decided to stop speculating...Yeah, i get out of your head XD...Come to think of it...Hmmm, i don't know if i could retrain myself.But To must 've been scared ne? I mean, the little brother KNOWS! I can't wait to read about it and i guess it's in the next chapter.I should stop writing useless things in my reviews too, i think,but i can't help it, i must tell you my impressions. LOL!
ow! my neck hurt a bit, and gomez just dug his claws in my thigh,maybe he's dreaming?
I chased him,he's too heavy...I loved this chapter! characters as human as ever...
ps: i apologize if there's some incoherence in this review, i'm too lazy and mostly tired to correct XD

Oh, I love it! *yay for updates!* :) More soon, please!

Halloooooooo!!!

Don't roll your eyes...It's meeee! yeah, you didn't notice eh? XD.
As usual, i haven't read yet. I was all happy to click here and there till i get to "turn back time" and then...
It was like "chapters:22"
Ans I was like : O___O WTF???
What what what?I mean, i expected just one chapter,i didn't expected such a quick update O__O,not that i'm complaining,far from that.Just a BIT surprised. Or maybe it's me who is late and need to catch up? Yeah,it's defnitely me...
I'm all excited!!! i want to know the menu on this chapter today^_^ See you in another review dear!

This was very, very, very sweet!
Not to mention unbelievable HOT! And loving caring tender...

I hope for a happy ending!
Thank you!

James is such a smart fella ;)
Georg's fit made me laugh.

I almost danced when i saw this update!
as per usual, it was amazing.
I wanna know what his Grandpa tells Tom!