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Reviewer: Stardust27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/08 08:04 pm Title: Stories and Questions

I found this story yesturday, and you don't even know... I've been reading it for about 8 hours now. My roomate thinks I've gone insane. This is so amazing hun, seriously. I would lovelovelove for you to post a new chapter when you get a chance, I want to see the ending so bad

Reviewer: eiri Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/08 05:29 pm Title: Stories and Questions

WOW! sorry for my longest review ever! i saw it and it's nearly half, or maybe it is half of your chapter O_O! I didn't know i was THAT carried away...But i try not to make many small reviews because i saw that on this site, someone has been doing the"review bombing" as they call it, in a story so that the story gets many reviews to be in the top ten XD. That's pathetic if they needed to do that.Now we're not allowed to review more than 2 times a chapter, and here i am with my third. I hope they won't delete my review? I mean it's not some random shit, they said it was okay if the review meant something at least. So this one has a point: pointing out the sooo long review filled with grammar mistakes below. XD sorry!

Reviewer: eiri Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/08 05:20 pm Title: Stories and Questions

What was tom so happy about? Did grandpa tell him anything intersting? Like Bill vanished or something?Then he is now more sure that bill will live in the future?Or grandpa KNOWS something and he's "James's scret keeper" too? Andnow he spill the beans? XD yeah, silly theory but,he has no Alzheimer's XD
Or did grandpa tell a story about whatever james has told his son?

Georg's "yeah" was so funny! He was still in the clouds. Had it had been me,if tom yelled at me like that i'd shut mu phone to his face.
"Do you have a fucking death note?” It reminds me of one of my favorite manga "death note",probably one of the best suspens manga ever,if not the best. I'm a huge fan of anything japanese, a japan-freak? O.o I own a huge collection of YAOI manga on my bookshelf,91 actually.Especially the hardcore ones^^
Now,back to the fic: the voicemail.Tom's heart probably droped,he missed the phone call XD.no wonder he's shaken and surely fustrated.

Bwahaha!! take that! "whatever..."georg didn't bother to say goodbye!yes! i love him,he's so cool!I mean, even if he doesn't get it much,he's still willing to help and he's still being himself.

While he lies restless in his bed, he’s completely unaware of his sister lying awake on the other side of the room after being awoken by and overhearing a rather confusing one-sided conversation about Tom, Bill, and the early 1900s…"

I hate that paragraph,and i already hate the sister even if she couldn't do something about it,it's not her fault but i really dodn't like the idea of she knowing.Like i said in the previous chapters, i was relieved she wasn't the type of know-it-all, and i was glad she didn't found out something. But now that she does,i no longer like her, not that i was fond of her in the first place.I just feel like she's too much in the list of the people in the confidence about tom and Bill's tale.

"They were exploring the town in a hundred years time, which is only a minor discrepancy, right?"
Fuck yeah! definitely!!

wilhelm.I was reading some fic the other day,i think it was "the nanny" or something. I saw that Bill's "real" name was that too. I tried to see if the author ever made a note about it since the only wilhelm on this fic is izzap's,and it's not so common. I know,she probably has the rights to do so,but to me it wasn't so right.Did she asked permission before using it or has many people used that name forbill in other previous fics i'm not aware of? I mean,fuck, i don't know what i mean but i couldn't read any further since the only wilhelm on this fic ,to me is Bill in "turn back time" and that's it,end of story. It bothered me A LOT to see that braty bill in the fic named like this sweet one.Usually, i absolutely love promiscious!Bill but in that one i couldn't.The name was like "stolen" so ,even if the author asked permission or whatever,i'd still not read.Tell me about originality.u___u

Whatever...Bill's mother is so nosy. But i guess she can't help it.She'sexêcting a lot of his son.Shewill be disapointed.Deeply.James's reaction to their mother's question was so...natural? Back then, respect towards parents had so much more value and meaning.Being christian and such too.Lying to his mother was a very big deal for him eh?I'm relieved for him that he hadn't to open his mouth and tell something.I think he'd miserably fail.

Aha! yeah,YOU.Don't act like you don't know who the friend is,tom.I mean james visited the future,lol! that means it 's you the frien U__U.I guess he was surprised...
Grandpa is very cool! He hasn't Alzheimer's yeah!
I like him too,it would be sad if you killed him.Or it would be "beautifuly sad" if Tom and Bill attended to his funerals and thank him. That rave little grandpa!

Yeah,Florence is silly.People can't vanish like that come on, what sort of statement was that? Bwahahahaha!! But then again, i re-read the chapter, and i'm still confused.Didi seriously miss something? She wa turning her back to Bill,right? And Bill vanished.Okay.But then, James ran past her and was following Bill,Florence was there.So the lines suggested like she saw james vanish but not Bill.

Why do i have the feeling that, THAT day tomake a decision will be before tom's return? LOL! the suspense and the plot want it to be like that huh?Pkay girl, i can accept it if they have to go through that to be together in the end.The ends justify the means,right?

O_O re O_O ans again O_O WTF?

I LOVE THAT LETTER!!! my heart race and wow! isn't it weird,yet exciting and incredible? James was an adult when he wrote this, he knew that his son will live till he's very very old(yes because when he was little, he was in the future when his son was old. Insane:.!)And now, James visited tom and bill very often as he became adult, he continued the visits, and wow! Tom has a hint of his FUTURE WITH BILL IN A LETTER AND STUFF FROM THE PAST!!!

O_O Insane!!LOL But i love it more!

Now,even if Tom would like to tell james about this letter , he can't because james himself doen't even know that he'll write it. It's like an insane link toying with james,bill and tom's future,and still it's something from the past. And tom will read what WILL happen in the near future,after his summer vacation! O_O

INCREDIBLE! It's bloody brilliant! WOW! I'm very impressed with your work Izza and i'm so ...Happy. I mean, the logic in this fic is clearer and ou knew well how to twist the events.I wanna kiss grandpa now. LOL! It would be insane too, to see pictures that haven't been taken yet. O_O as the years pass by, and james and tom and bill mature.

WOW!I'm still a bit shaken...*breathes*...Yeah.I love this story!Fuck! Even James could attend to his own son's funerals in the future,it would be a torture i think since he is a young father and in his time,his son is a young little boy. But here he is attending to his old son.*shudders*
But i think, that could help him to deal with all this insane time travel thing, he will get stronger and accept fate as it is.He is wise.I LOVE YOU JAMES!
Now, I still don't like tom's sister.Don't know why. Florence became pathetic but i feel sorry for her...One sided love and tring , fighting for this love but ending up alone and left with nothing to hold,not even a sweet memory.Painfull.If Gustav is as protective as he is,he'd be mad.
As for Bill's mother,i feel sorry for her too.Even if she was harsh and a bit too commanding,i believe she didn't mean to hurt anyone,she just does what she think is best for her son,not that she knows anything about Tom and Bill's realtionship?Will she be left in the dark wondering where her son's body lays if he was dead?Or whe he might be if he were alive?She will live pure torture,not knowing.Where did her 17 year old offspring disappear?She's a mother after all,she lived for her family.I don't see her as evil even if she tries to force things.
It's painfull.I know that since i've known my sister for 15 years until she passed away at the age of 17.My mother was broken,and the place is like void?even if she still has three sons and a daughter.
Sorry about my life again, but i try to put some references to real life to fully understand what those characters might feel.The loss will be painfull.

Anyway,congratulations!! now i'm squirming with impatience to know the rest of this fabulous story! thanks really!!I'ù a passionate reader ,more than usual whan i read this particular story, and i swear, it's the only one i ever thought so deeply like this.

Now, about Simone. How will she react? Will she be in the secret too? Will Bill live with them?(of course, where else would he possibly live?)wow!! so much questions...And I hope tom's sister won't be too annoying.

There.Finished the ranting.LOL!!

I love yaaaaaaaaaa!!! come back very very soon^^
(I hope,even if i might be disapointed,that the end of this story isn't around the corner O_O)I feel like it is. ;____; I don't want that!! *cries*
Tom and Bill diserve their happy ending.Especially Bill. He's so...soft, innocent, cute and pure. Everything about him is beautiful(beautifuly described!! ;) and he's guenuine.Tom too, he's fighting so hard for this love and it's honorable.Every character in this story are sooo guenuinely "themselves" ,even Georg!!
My favorite remains James f course! He's MY HERO!!

Here i go again, i thought i said goobye earlier,above those lines but i got carried away. Your talent got me carried away.Thank you:)

Andy.

Author's Response: so.. i'm determined to answer a few of your questions. forgive me, i'm only skimming your review right now. try not to worry too much about tom's little sister, i'm still juggling whether or not i want her to know the truth or not. at the moment, her overhearing the conversation won't be a big deal. she'll just think she was dreaming. so try not to hate her too much, okay? (I don't like you guys hating my characters unless i INTEND for you to hate them) And you're right with Florence; you didn't miss anything. She only saw James vanish, her back was turned when Bill disappeared. BUT the fact that she turned around and he wasn't there so quickly, it had to make her heart race - how could he disappear so fast? it's not like he disappeared into the forest THAT quickly. And then she saw James vanish... and well, silly Florence. *bops her on the head* Teenage boys don't just *vanish* - what are you? whack? Ha ha. *heavy sigh* I now have the feeling that I shouldn't have put in that bit about "the day to make that decision" because so many of you are freaking out over that. Have no fear, I don't plan on there ever being a wedding between those 2. Tom'll make it back in time. Bill has some skill when it comes to stalling plans and events. :D So don't even worry about that. I don't even want to picture Florence in a wedding dress with Bill standing at the altar. Bad image. Now with Bill and Tom on the other hand... :P And yes, it's definitely an annoying little mind-boggling link toying with James, Bill, and Tom. Things that are in the future for all of them feel like they're the past because they've already been noted. Ahhhh, it makes my mind swim... And yeah, I feel bad for Bill's mother, too. So many of you hate her for being so strict, but come on! Who's mother ISN'T a bit strict at times? Or even a bit overprotective? I mean, seriously, Bill's mother in this is less harsh than some of my friends' moms in real life. She just means for the best and now she's gonna have total heart break, leaving her in the dark. Aw, I'm sorry about your sister. I can only imagine the heart break a mother feels after losing a child.. that has to be unbearable at times. As for Simone.. I'm still juggling ideas around with her, too... I'm trying to come up with which story Tom will end up telling her, but I'm thinking she'll end up knowing, since after all, her own dad (james' son) knows the truth. ^.^ I'm honestly so glad you love James. A few chapters back when I spent so much time (and I'll admit that I spent a little too much time on him) on James and his curious questions about Bill and Tom, so many readers were getting annoyed with James. Even if they didn't flat out say it in reviews, I could tell. The interest in the story went down around there; they were obviously getting a bit tired of reading about little curious James. So I backed away a little bit, but I wanted you guys to get used to him since he plays such a huge role right now and later on (obviously). So I'm happy you like him. Me too, actually. I love James. He's my little character, genuinely - since he is one of the original characters, made from scratch from the confines of my crazy mind :D So he holds a place closer to my heart than Bill and Tom in this story (since Bill and Tom, sure, their personalities were slightly altered for the fic, but still... they're still fitting a certain mold of the real Bill and Tom). You know what I mean? Sorry if that's confusing. :D Anyways, thank you. So many nice compliments in your review, they make me smile. :DDDDD

Reviewer: eiri Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/08 03:13 pm Title: Stories and Questions

Du dun dun!! dadaaaam!!
Hello!!
It's been a while,ne? I missed this story *sighs*. I saw that there was a new chapter,days ago,but then I wanted to have time to really enjoy my reading! I want to enjoy every word till the last one lol!! I read your replies to my reviews,that's very nice of you even if it was long ago! I don't mind giving you my hotmail adress but you know,i'm not connected that often ç__ç.
Okay,now i'm going to read lol! i'm so excited,there's that feeling of anticipation lie when you want to unwrap a present^^

Reviewer: vixen91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/08 01:46 pm Title: Stories and Questions

NO NO NO NO NO! Its not allowed to end! wheres the rest of it?? this is getting sooooo good! I need to know what happens! Bill and Tom HAVE to be together!!!! OMG!!! take your time and keep writing good quality stuff, because this was worth the wait!

Reviewer: oxoxbill4lifeoxox Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/08 07:28 pm Title: Stories and Questions

Ahhhhh omg I can't believe this story this was such an amazing chapter I can't believe his grandfather knew all of this and just ah, I can't wait for the next chapter it is so amazing.

Reviewer: lililu7777777 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/08 01:42 am Title: Stories and Questions

oo oo ooooooooo!!!!
im like addicted to this story!!! XD
i REALLY cant wait til the next chapter!!!!! please update soon!!

Reviewer: Zina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/08 02:44 pm Title: Stories and Questions

I`m so-very glad that you updated!!!! It was a really sweet surprise for me!! The story is getting more and more exciting!! So Tom`s grandfather (Bill`s nephew:-P)knew all of this?! Can he meet with his (young)dad after years? You are an exellent writer, this is the best storyline I`ve ever read!! I bet it would be a N 1 best seller if you made it publicated!!! Congrat!!
Update soon!!!!!!

Reviewer: Fallen_whisper Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/08 02:35 pm Title: Stories and Questions

This is a really awesome story!!! I've been on the edge of my seat the whole time! =D update soon please!!!

Reviewer: Ying Fa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/08 01:32 pm Title: Stories and Questions

Ugh, so I finally gave it the second read-through, and really, its so amazing.

Florence makes me want to hurt her, srsly. Cant she tell Bill doesnt want to be with her?

James...There are so many different characters of him I almost get lost. Young James, grandfather James...

I know you touched on it a little, but maybe i dont understand. So what happens to Bill when he supposedly "dies"? DOES he go into the future? But then you said he has friends that are decades away from Tom's time, does that mean he and Tom arent together anymore?

I love this, really, and i srsly cant wait for their reunion, I hope its soon. ^^

Author's Response: The reunion will definitely be soon. Next chapter unless I come up with something else I need to happen before that, but the scenes for their reunion have been beating my mind senseless since before I sat down and wrote this chapter. As for your questions... they'll definitely be answered for you next chapter. I don't really want to give it all away, but I'll let you know that Bill and Tom stay together. :D And decades after Tom's time, by that I just meant decades after 2008 - where Tom'll still be alive. Thanks for reviewing (again), glad you love it. :)

Reviewer: IndigoKitti Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/08 10:28 pm Title: Stories and Questions

Aw!!!!
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! :D
It's great!
Please Please Please Update again very soon!!!!!

Reviewer: FishieLPKaulitz8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/23/08 03:47 pm Title: Stories and Questions

O________O I've been waiting soooooooooooooooooo long for this chapter and now that it's up, I'm like XDDD so uberly happy! O_O You're such an amazing writer and I LOVE how everything is going in this story right now....

Reviewer: deadlynightshade Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/08 10:43 am Title: Stories and Questions

*flailseizurelikething*

askfuyreurhfsa.

I JUST.

dksjfs.

i loooove this fic.

AND I LOVE YOU.

:DD

*sits patiently and waits for the next chapter*

Reviewer: Lrigrl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/23/08 02:24 am Title: Stories and Questions

Oh, I'm so glad that you finally updated! I was hoping that you would. This story is getting more and more addictive with each new chapter! I hope you update soon! :)

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/08 01:01 am Title: Stories and Questions

Oh gawd! Don't stop there! I want more so badly! I love this story! It's so creative and unique. And I like that I know it'll have a happy ending but still, I'm still on the edge of my seat! I want more soon! Please!

Reviewer: KaulitzTwinsLover17 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/22/08 08:19 pm Title: Stories and Questions

Awww. Wow. This is getting even more interesting! I'm excited to read the new chapter.

Reviewer: Betje Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/08 07:09 pm Title: Stories and Questions

jeej update^^

So cool this chappy! So Tom's grandpa also knew and now Tom knows that everything will work out fine^^

Reviewer: highperson2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/08 06:02 pm Title: Stories and Questions

omg!!! i am soo happy you updated!! *hugs* oh!1 James is soo nice leaving some stuff for Tom to read!! XDDD

Reviewer: Dahlia-Starr Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/08 04:26 pm Title: Stories and Questions

Woah! Thats so crazy!! I love it!
Awww Toms missing Bill =[
I cant wait till he gets back from his grandparents.. its.. wow. =]

Reviewer: elingoddamnit Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/08 03:32 pm Title: Stories and Questions

sits on the edge of the chair - stunned.

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