Date: 03/03/10 07:10 pm Title: Thirteen
I liked this chapter quite a lot, but, and correct me if I'm wrong, I think this is a mistake: "Tómas was so pleased. In the near four years he had known Ville, this was the deepest they had come to talk."
Years? They can't have known each other for years. It hasn't been that long. I think.
Author's Response: Yeah, if you pay attention to the little parts where it says weeks passing and shit, plus the time it takes to travel, it actually does work out to be that.
Date: 03/03/10 06:41 pm Title: Thirteen
I feel so sory for Tom. He should just give up, lol. Bill is really unfair to him. :( I love this story though!
Author's Response: He can't give up, cos he's just pathetic like that, lol
Date: 02/25/10 07:14 pm Title: Twelve
If you're on chapter 16 why can't you post 13,14, and 15 and make the wait less painful for me?
I like how you brought back Bill's ex mate. I hadn't realized he was still around, that makes for an interesting plot.
And when will Bill fully accept Tom? I'm waiting w/ baited breath here.
Author's Response: Because I'm a bitch? lol
Date: 02/25/10 06:11 am Title: One
are you norwegian? cuz I am, and I think the tale about Odin (ect) is from Norway
Author's Response: I am not Norwegian, sadly. Actually, I think I am part, but it's really far back. Old Norse is simply a way that seems right to me, so I can't help but cave in and write stuff like this.
Date: 02/25/10 02:07 am Title: Twelve
Yay! Tom is so proud of his bill! =)
Author's Response: Well of course! Wouldn't you be if he was yours?
Date: 02/24/10 07:40 pm Title: One
To be honest...I've been checking the site about like MILLION times a day so I can't lose another update of this!! The funny thing is...my friend Angel is a very especial person. I mean, he doesn't like just anything, the things he likes must be somehow especial and pretty fucking good to be honest...and I made him read this story (because we're both into viking metal and nordic mythology) and even if it's slash (which most guys don't like)...HE LOVED IT!! So now...the two of us just keep on talking about this fic ALL DAY long!! Even if my fangirl side keeps on taking over me!! xD
Author's Response: I have up to chapter 17 prewritten XD Don't I rock? And holy fuck, you actually whored this to your friend and it was liked? AND you guys talked about it? O.O I can't lie, stuff like that scares me. Now I'm terrified there are loopholes or something, or I wrote something crappy, or I dunno what else lol *is still mentally panicking*
Date: 02/24/10 04:52 pm Title: Twelve
*.* Draconian Umpire!! I love LOVE this!! And how Ville it's slowly falling for Tómas!! I just hope he can fully recover from his previous heartbreak!!
Please update soon!! *.*
Author's Response: YAY! You got the update on time lol. I thought that song so fit lol and yes! Bill has a HUGE breakthrough in chapters....14-16 *double checked to be sure*
Date: 02/24/10 03:31 pm Title: Nine
lol! raping MEANS to take without asking, it can apply to anyhtign its just more commonly applied to the takig of sexual pleasure without consent. lol-cough- had to clear that up ;)
lol, and wow....i am wowed by this story i wish i had started reading ti earlier,i'm really enjoying it :D
Author's Response: Oh believe me, I know..
Date: 02/24/10 03:29 pm Title: Twelve
YAY for slayed-dragon afterparty.
Date: 02/24/10 02:21 pm Title: Twelve
luv it
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 02/24/10 02:12 pm Title: One
oh....my...god... system shock? i started a fanfic last week. i wanted to get away from the typical relationship-type twincest-type stories. It became a mythical quest. oh my.... i guess great minds and all of that? Mine is a different tack but it's cool to see someone else go this way.
Author's Response: XD That's awesome! I hope I get a chance to read it. I totes love writing the guys like this, all viking-esque. I think I just like Geo in chainmail and Tom going berserk XD
Date: 02/24/10 01:10 pm Title: Twelve
*laughs* only you Iggle hun would choose a name for something to be of food. But I do love bacon so it's okay. lol. I honestly squeed when I read the bit with that douche mentioning Haldor and Tom getting up so fast. Gah I love this hun. I really do! You have me all excited to see what comes next! XD
Author's Response: You should know me by now. Bacon and I have a very close connection :3 And really, the guy that Thorbjorn is modelled after is obsessed with ham and beer, and bacon comes from the same animal as ham does, so... ^^
Date: 02/23/10 02:10 am Title: One
I can totally imagine Tom getting hurt (not so badly) just enough so Ville realizes how much he really loves him and stops being a bitch. But Bitchy Bill is *heart*.
Author's Response: What the fuck? Seriously. You're creepy lol! So, I'm almost done writing chapter SIXTEEN (!) and yeah. . . You know too much lol! Really, have you been peeking in my window or somehow hack into my computer and read ahead? XD
Date: 02/21/10 12:21 am Title: Eleven
yay! keep up the good work!
Date: 02/18/10 12:39 am Title: Eleven
Hey back :).
Dragon's all taken care of. Impressive show on all their parts though it's gonna take forever for tom to get the mud out of his hair.
Also, seriously? 1/3 mark? My god you're not updating this at the pace I desire. But on the other hand the quality is better if you take your time so I shall wait.
Author's Response: *Giggles* Yeah, the mud won't be pleasant, but you do what you have to do, you know? And yes, only 1/3rd. My updates were slow this time cos I was netless for a while, but I'm back so they should be more regular.
Date: 02/17/10 05:42 pm Title: Eleven
You should fix the italics part at the end. Apart from that...wow. Just...wow.
Date: 02/17/10 04:54 pm Title: Eleven
O.O if you have the nest chapter already done...
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! *begs*
I need more!! Please!!
Author's Response: The next chapter should be up no later than monday, depends on when I have net and such.
Date: 02/17/10 04:46 pm Title: Ten
Why do I feel that something is going to happen when they fight the dragon??!!
I know you won't kill Ville (I just can't help but love calling Bill that way!) or Tóm...but don't hurt them!! Not so badly at least!! xD
*goes to read next chapter*
Author's Response: As you can see, nothing TOO major happened with the dragon. I've just always wanted to write a scene with one lol
Date: 02/17/10 04:36 pm Title: Nine
I want to become a member of the Society for Prevention of Cruelty to Vikings!! What should I do? Where shall I sign??!!
I must admit that I don't like bottoming Tom, BUT dear Lord!! That was very fucking hot!!
And...am I a freak or something?? Blood+lust+body parts ripped off+dead bodies+sex=MASSIVE NOSEBLEED!!
Tissue, tissue!! I need to get over those images in my mind or I'll die of blood loss!!
...or dehydration!! *drools*
Author's Response: Simply by reviewing, you are now a member ^.^ And I'm not a huge fan of botTOM, but it really fit the plot, so it was written. And you are so not a freak. I was as excited by all that as well XD