Date: 01/28/12 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 20
grrrr, not gonna lie, I kinda hate that you ended the chapter there. Now I have to wait for next chapter....I hate waiting
Date: 04/09/11 02:11 am Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Poor Raven!
Date: 04/09/11 01:52 am Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Poor Raven!
Date: 04/08/11 03:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Author's Response: thankyou! :3 There a very almost completed sequel :)
Date: 07/20/10 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
dang she's strong...I would have just eaten. but that's so funny how bill got really angry at the fact that she used his makeup
Author's Response: Well... Bill had to have a diva fit, doesn't he?! :P Thanks for reading and reviewing, glad you;re enjoying the story - that makes me so happy :D ^_^ xx
Date: 07/20/10 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
oooo so exciting!!!
Author's Response: Hehe xD There's a sequel, when you finish this one, if you're still interested ^_^
Date: 07/04/10 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 20
oh this is AMAZING!!! its like seeing a movie iīm speechless...one of the bests 4 sure...i hope this is not the end? right? please donīt let it be I LOVE your story
Author's Response: -dies- Wow! Thanks, I've been re-reading my story (so I can write more) and there's quite a few mistakes in it and I know, if I spend enough time on it, I can write it so much better so... wow. Someone enjoying it this much just makes me speechless :O This isn't the end - the second half is actually up right now, finished up to chapter 5. I'm having to re-read because this is the only place I have it saved as I'm not on my usual laptop, so I should be updating the second half soon - hope you enjoy that half as much as this :D Thanks so much for the review - totally inspirational and motivational. wow... THANKYOU SO MUCH :D I LOVE YOU :D !! :D xx
Date: 05/16/10 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 20
141th rewiew? :3
amazing story! If i fail my r.e gcse at least i'll know why-spent my revision time reading this.
Author's Response: haha thanks :D I have my RE GCSE exam on tuesday too (A) Too bad I spend all my time on here :O Wow, I'm so glad you liked my story :D There's the sequel up but it only has two chapters so far; I'm ATTEMPTING some revision... I always end up back here though xD Thanks for reading and reviewing! Loves! :D xx
Date: 04/30/10 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 20
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGG
firstt offf im sooo sorry i havent reviewed more :(
I havent read this story for agesss!
my gosshhh i love it!
EVERYTHING FITS TOGETHERE AHAHAHHAHAHA
yeshhh raven died :D:D:D:D and black haired raven the real raven not raven riley raven :L :L :L
Ok i need to kool down right nowww im just reallyy hyperactive atm :L
My god i just love your writing you seem to explain these situations SOOO WELL! just amaazinnggg xD
ohhhh xD i got a point
Author's Response: Haha, I didn't expect to get many more reviews since I updated such a long time ago xD but yeah, I'm answering this just before I go to bed, so you're special ;) it really doesn't matter that you haven't reviewed much - at least you reviewed! And woo! Go you for getting a point :D Glad you finally understand how everything fits together lmao, I've had a lot of reviews consisting of 'OMG HOW DID I NOT SEE THAT WOULD HAPPEN?!' lol :D I totally get the hyperactiveness - ever tried cheerios and chocolate milk? No? Try it! Wow, thanks soo much, I didn't expect people to like my writing that much, even from how many people have told me, it's always a nice surprise :) Thanks sooo much for reading and reviewing! Loves, and keep you eyes peeled for the second half coming up soon (hopefully before tuesday) :D Loves xx
Date: 04/10/10 01:04 am Title: Chapter 20
Okay so, I get 2nd place :D Andddddd I'm one of the people who tried to feature this. Just because I freakin love you. I can't wait for her to change into one of them =] And you need to hurry up and post the second half!!!!!!! I love you missyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!
Author's Response: You get second place SO FAR! You can change that ;) Yeah, you know you're one of them awesome peoples :P Aww, thanks ^^ I still can't believe you tried to get it featured :O I'm not sure when I'll get to make a start on the second half, I have to start revising for my exams now if I want to pass them :/ Hopefully I'll find the time somewhere though ^_^ Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I LOVE YOU TOOOOOO! -attacks- :D Loves xx
Date: 04/08/10 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 20
So yeaa, all of my review didn't get posted for some reason. :| I basically thanked you for the dedication beacuse I am simply honoured! ;D I've already started school again but there's only about 2 months left! ^_^ Like I said in the last review, make sure to updateee. THANK YOU SO MUCH! xoxo
Author's Response: aww, wow, another one :') Haha, review count goes up, so all is good (Y) Aww, it's alright :P I just realised I contradicted myself by dedicating you because I said in the chap notes that there wouldn't be any dedications or whatever, but no one seems to care too much xD You deserved it! I have about 2 and a half months left before the summer holidays, and then I start my A levels! Joy -_- Same conditions of writing mentioned in the previous reviews answer apply here, I'm sorry :( I'm going to miss being able to write so much :'( But never fear, I'll get there! Thanks so much for this review too xD Loves xx
Date: 04/08/10 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 20
Wow, that thing have a sister?! WTF?! I never saw that coming! BUT DUDE, SHE RODE OFF IN THE CAR WITH THEM. So I presume that she's cool then? Poor thing must be horrified. The fact that Raven's ready to become a vampire is quite funny. I mean, at first she didn't even like them (I don't think and she wanted to make Bill's life a living Hell) and now she's married to one and wants to BE one. Yes, that's quite funny indeed. :D Also, the fight going on between Tom, Bill, Georg, Gustav and their Father was such a thrill to read! It was nice seeing Bill not only with stronger powers but with a higher confidence as well. I LOL'd when his heart got ripped out and Tom's like 'duh, you're heart been ripped out of your chest.' EPIC! I can't wait for moreee.
Author's Response: yeah, the new girl is cool :P I need to decide on a name though, I wonder if anyone will work out my plans for the second half :P Pretty cryptic, but you COULD guess I suppose :D I know about Raven xD But I can't have her a rebellious aging human forever, now she can just be a rebellious vampire instead ;) You can count on her not going along with all of Bill's plans if I have anything to do with it. And if I don't, you should be very worried, considering I write this stuff :/ I wasn't too happy with the fight scene, so it's nice to know you enjoyed reading it :D His confidence has got higher actually.. I didn't notice that xD I thought people might find the heart bit quite funny :P It really did fit in with Tom's sarcastic behaviour sometimes :D I'm not sure how long it will be before I get time to write the second half, but I WILL get there eventually :D Stupid exams :'( Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I LOVE YOU AND YOUR AWESOMEOMNOMNOM REVIEWS :D -spins in circles- Loves :D xx
Date: 04/08/10 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 20
Imma submit a full review on the story!!
I absolutely love this half, the twist? I honestly was not expecting that, i really wasn't! I also totally love the phoenix tattoo because I happen to have a phoenix tattoo!! I can't wait for the next half to start, what's it gonna be called?
Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked this half, hopefully the second half won't dissapoint when I get the time to write it :) Glad you weren't expecting the twist, I just deleted a bunch of my stories because they were so predictable, so that's good to hear about this one xD :O MAYBE you're destined to become a vampire!! haha :P Where is it? I would love one, but I'm a Christian so I'm not allowed :( I'm not sure when I'm going to get time to begin the second half, it might be a few weeks before I actually get the first half up :S But yeah, it isn't a seperate story or far in the future (hence why it isn't a sequel as such) So I think it's just going to be called Marked; The Second Half. Original or what ;) but yeah, I'm not totally sure yet :D Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Loves xx
Date: 04/07/10 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 20
I just have two things to say:
1. The end was so cute ^^,
2. The story was so amazing, in norway i would called it megasuperduperkjempebra! :D but i dont know how to write that in english, so i just wrote amazing... But its better than amazing :)
Author's Response: Aww, thanks ^_^ I was worried that the end didn't fit with the rest of the chapter, but people seemed to have liked it :D haha, I didn't realise you were from norway! Your english is amazingly good :D I'll be expecting to see you when the second half goes up ;) Your reviews are always so awesome! I LOVE YOU!! :D xx
Date: 04/07/10 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 20
READY?!?!?!?!!! WERENT THEY READY BEFFOOOOREEEEE?!! omg, YAY! lifes good now :D and, omg, i saw that the story said it was completed, and i promise you that i almost died there. i was like NEOOOOOOO! :( but theres a second half :D so life is good :D
Author's Response: Haha, BILL was ready before, but Raven wasn't when she realised she couldn't turn in the natural way, sorry if that was a little confusing xD Haha, I HAD been warning about the second half for a while, but at least you noticed it before you died, or you'd never have found out what happens when I get around to writing it xD Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, glad you liked the chapter! I LOVE YOU!! :D xx
Date: 04/07/10 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 20
Oh, exciting! :D I think you should update the first chapter of the other half right now, doesn't that sound like a good idea? :D Heheh! No, but seriously, it was good! :)
Author's Response: Haha! I would LOVE to update the first chapter of the second half right now, but I haven't even attempted starting to write it yet! :O I haven't found the time to write it :( But yes -nods- it DOES sound like a great idea xD I'll try squeezing in some writing time tomorrow ;) Thanks, I was worried about this chapter, so you thinking it was good is pretty relieving xD Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I LOVE YOU! :D xx
Date: 04/07/10 11:22 am Title: Chapter 20
She is ready! I am ready too, so update :DD
Author's Response: Well, when the next update comes, it'll be in a new story all together, so keep your eyes peeled! Keep checking back, though I don't know how long it'll be before I can get time to write :/ Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Loves xx
Date: 04/07/10 12:34 am Title: Chapter 20
I was a little confussed in the begining but thats me were talking about so its not saying much. And damn it Jorg didnt get stabed in the face >_< hmpf. oh well all in all i liked the chapter now its time to get back to Childs Play ...freaky ass movie if you ask me.
Author's Response: Lol, I'm not sure if it's you or the chapter, I'm really not happy with it but you know xD haha, I would like to correct you to: Damn it Jorg didn't get stabbed in the face >_< YET! There's still the second half remember! Be sure that he'll make a reappearance some time :) Thanks for the review, even if you had to get back to your film xD I'll try watch it some time, I've never seen it, or even heard of it! -types into google- haha! Thanks for reading and reviewing! I LOVE YOU!! :D xx
Date: 04/06/10 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 20
i love this story
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! ^_^ I'll be expecting to see your reviews when I get the second half up xD Thanks for reading and reviewing! I LOVE YOU! :D xx
Date: 04/06/10 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 19
Puke-worthy? Eh, no, it's awesome! :D I want to know what happens to the evil Raven! And who is Riley!? Update soon please!
Author's Response: I'm updating right now :D Review awards took me a while, hopefully the chapter won't be rejected xD Aww thanks ^_^ Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, everything should be cleared up this chapter, before we hit the second half xD LOVES!! xx