Date: 02/28/10 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 14
OHMG :O
he brokee ravens face! @_@
I dnooo why but im getting berz attached to her u_u
WowWOwoWOow good chapter overall :L :L :L
Cant wait to read more!
But wherever is Bill... wouldnt he get mad since Tom kinda violated RavenRaven O_O it seems like he had gotten sort of attached to her... or atleast i hoped he had :) I loovee ravenravenn... >_< I get attached to fictional characters alot sooo yes yes im being as normal as i can be :] Omg i think im blabbering on a review :D How funny is that? Well acht its not very... but yes LOOL :)
YOU ARE AN AMAZINGLY AMAZING WRITER buddy_c22 And i cant wait for your next chapter!!!
Muchas Lovas xXx XxX xXx
p.s i gottaaa askk was that me mentioned in your chapter note xD I totally get if it wasnt... my god im gonna feel dumb :L but loool xD
Okok i probabaly have to stop writing at some point soo okok last wordsss
urmmm DONT LET BILL AND RAVENRAVEN BREAK UP :')
yes thats all XDxDXD
Xx Lovage xX
Author's Response: Wow, long review - me likes :P Lol, I was hoping some people would get attached to her, she IS pretty important :P Thanks soo much for thinking this was a good chapter! I wasn't feeling too great about it, but I guess it was gripping enough for it to make you want to read more! yay! -spins in circles- And YES! Bill will get VERYY mad :P And don't worry, I get attached too :P I almost feel so sorry for the first Raven I don't want to continue writing horrible things, but I make myself xD -dies from your compliment- wow! Thankyou so much! I really didn't think I was too good but... yeah! Thanks! -eats popcorn- Oh and to your ps, no that was the chapter before, you were the 11th reviewer which makes you EVEN BETTER! :O You know so ;) And I shall think about your last request as I sleep tonight ;) Thanks sooo much for the awesome review! I LOVE YOU!! :D xx
Date: 02/28/10 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 14
I think this chapter was good :) and it would be cheesy if u post the next today :D
Author's Response: Aww thanks :P And as much as I would LOVE to post the next chapter today, I haven't even started writing it :/ Sorry :( I just have so much to do! Lol! Anyway, thank you sooooo much for reading and reviewing! Lovees!! xx
Date: 02/28/10 10:00 am Title: Chapter 13
The blondee ravenn :L
Oooft i get tom then :)
but.... whatever shall happen to raven(first one) noww :(
xXx
Author's Response: Haha! I just came to post the next chapter and see your review here! :P Thanks! You'll just have to wait and see for a few chapters until you find out what to happens to raven1 :P Thanks soo much for the review! -goes to post next chapter-
Date: 02/21/10 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 13
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im lost. i love it
Author's Response: wow thanks :D I'm hoping to get time to do another chapter soon, but school is being a bitch, and I've only been back a day :O I'm SO annoyed that I have so much work to do! But, when I get a chance in between my dance and work and such I'll write another chapter i PROMISE I will get one out - I will die if I don't have chance before march :( But don't worry! I will write it IN SCHOOL if I have to! Today in English I planned out the remaining chapters instead of annotating the text we were given... so I'm pretty sure I'll get to write one way or another :D Thanks for reading and reviewing! -goes back to crappy work-
Date: 02/20/10 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 13
OMG NOOOOOOOO DONTTT DIEEE :(
lovely chapter! Berzz interesting BUT DONT MAKE RAVENN DIEEE :S
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :'(
p.s why is tom so bitchy :(
xXx Lovage xXx
Author's Response: ahahaa, which Raven? Hmm.. Not that I'm saying either will or won't die, I was just wondering ;) Oh and Tom is so bitchy because he is in love with Phoenix and now she is in danger and he blames Raven (the first one). Sorry, if that wasn't clear :D Thanks for reading and reviewing :D xx
Date: 02/20/10 08:31 am Title: Chapter 13
*Wide eyes* Omg! This is..amazing.
Everytime I see a review I nearly fall of my chair in excitment O: The last three chapters have left me so completely speechless and as always even though you have writers block, you pulled it off because your so suppa talented.
I can't wait for the next update, the cliffhanger was unexpected and it's left me in such supsense but as always that keeps the reader reading :D I love cliffhangers!
This story is just beautiful and wonderful and and AMAZING *Outburst*
I nearly squealed when I saw you were doing a sequal to this story, a SECOND story? I'm excited! :D
I somewhat miss Bill's bitchy attitude towards Raven, when he was cruel *Shifty eyes* he was very..sexual lol. But where would we be without our Diva Bill :))
Bitchy Raven - I hope Bill and Tom teaches her a lesson *Arches eyebrow* I wonder what kind of lesson...hmm, the one he used to teach innocent Raven - That would be like O.O to see Bitchy Raven get hurt lol because she deserves it.
Tuttut; Tom is very mean when he wants to be >< I like mean Tom.
*Smiles* I can't wait for the update but until then I'll happily wait and be patient..and once again you and this story are suppa wonderful (: x
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much -blushes- you complimented me enough for the entire year XP Aww when you see (an update?) that happens? wow! Thanks so much! -begins running in circles before remembering am answering an awesome review), when I saw a review like yours I practically do the same! They rule! -hugs- Glad you like the cliffhanger, I know they annoy some readers so that is such a relief :D And the second story! Yes, hopefully you will like that one too :P It kind of carries on from this one, but I thought splitting it up would be more helpful rather than making a super long story lol :P Oh, and thanks for your outburst, it rocked my world :P Now... about missing Bill's horrible attitude... You won't have to wait much longer :P He is extremely angry right now... and angry Bill=Bill you love :P And just a small hint... you won't be missing sexual Bill for too much longer :P But I can't promise anything -shifty eyes- And bitchy Raven :P She's his real wife though... right? Would he ever harm her? -evil laughter- I'll leave that to your imagination :D And Tom is related to Bill, so he has to have a mean streak! Glad you like mean Tom though... he'll be around for a while :P Wow, I'm so happy that you are made so happy by these updates, and hopefully when I get time (ugh, school again now) there will be another update :P Never knew I was super talented -blushes- anyway, I have to go now before my mum finds out I'm not working (A) Thanks soo much for reading and reviewing! I LOVE YOU!! xx :) xx
Date: 02/19/10 11:10 am Title: Chapter 13
2 Ravens... yeah :D
Well, I just really want to know what will happen next... so... update
Author's Response: Glad you like the whole Two Raven thingy :P This is the idea that I had in my mind that made me start writing this in the first place, so it is a BIG relief that everyone seems to like it :) Hopefully another update will come soon when I find the time to write it, but I have to do the work that was set over half term right now before I go back to school on monday :( There should be another up soon-ish though :P Thanks for reading and reviewing :D xx
Date: 02/19/10 06:04 am Title: Chapter 13
I really hadn't expected that! You are full of surprises, dear! I do love this tatoo story and I can't wait to see what they decide. Hope everything will turn out well for poor Raven; after all, she's just a victim and it's all Bill's fault. How could he be so wrong?
Author's Response: Now, I know that I already answered this seeing as you submitted it twice, but I can never leave a review un-answered :P So I'll answer this one too with a question of my own :P Are you submitting this twice to cheat and get me ten reviews? :O lol, I'm joking :P Anyway, thanks for your reviewS, they were both awesome ;D
Date: 02/19/10 05:58 am Title: Chapter 13
I really hadn't expected that! You are full of surprises, dear! I do love this tatoo story and I can't wait to see what they decide. Hope everything will turn out well for poor Raven; after all, she's just a victim and it's all Bill's fault. How could he be so wrong?
Author's Response: YAY! -runs in circles- I'm so happy that I surprised you :P I hate it when I end up making my stories too predictable, so this is really good news :P Glad you like the whole tattoo side to the story, it was basically the idea that I had that sparked this story, I had that scene where the second Raven turned up in my head from the very beginning :P Now, WE all know that everything is Bill's fault, but will he? Pah! This is evil DARK Bill we're talking about, he doesn't think things through rationally :P That's how he is so wrong :P he just doesn't think things through properly, and won't listen to others :D And as of yet, Tom seems to be the opposite, right? Well, think again -evil laughter- Thanks for reading and reviewing - I LOVE YOU ;D xx
Date: 02/19/10 03:25 am Title: Chapter 13
gosh! this story gets better and better! i wonder if bill is mad at raven? i hope everything will turn better soon
Author's Response: Wow, that's an amazing compliment! Thanks! :) Is Bill mad at Raven? Well, you'll just have to wait and see :P But one thing is for sure, Tom is definately mad at her ;) Things to get better soon? Hmm.... Maybe, maybe not ;D Definately not too soon though :P Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :D xx
Date: 02/18/10 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 13
Ahhhh! Cliffhanger!!!!! Nooooo. I promise to you, I"m like, hooked on this. I smile everytime I see a new chapter. And it's pretty funny beacuse I went to the dentist today for a root canal so my face is half numb right now. So my smile only goes up on the left half of my face, and the other side doesn't move at all. It's pretty funny. Sorry about my rambling XD Anywhoooooo, I loved the chapter :)
Author's Response: Muhahahaa :D Cliffhangers are awesome when it keeps people reading :P Wow, that is a massive compliment to have people so hooked on the story that they SMILE when there's a new chapter that's just... wow :) That smile sounds awesome, just make sure you're not having, you know, a stroke ;) Your ramblings are interesting, so it doesn't matter :P Thanks for the reading and reviewing, glad you liked the chapter so much :) Hopefully there will be another chapter up relatively soon, and by then you should be able to smile properly, right? :P xx
Date: 02/18/10 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 13
I dont know wath to say... It was just so, stilig:D
Author's Response: I don't know what stilig means -gets embarrassed- but I'm sure it was a compliment, so, thanks? :D I- I left you speechless?! Wow :D Glad you appeared to like it, hopefully the next update will come fast enough and be good enough for you :D Thanks for reading and reviewing :) xx
Date: 02/18/10 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I hate it when the chap ends, i allways want more!! So stop killing me then!! :D
Author's Response: Oh, I'm sorry :( I don't want you to die! But I gotta keep you interested, right? I'll hopefully update again soon (ish) so you won't be in a state of coma for very long ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D
Date: 02/18/10 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 13
OH SHIT!!
you did it...AGAIN!!
always puttin poor Raven in trouble...*sigh*...what are we gonna do with you buddy_c22?!?!
i love how the story is unfolding...i just reallllyyyyyy hope that there's a happy ending.
like...mayyybbbeee...that bitchy, evil Raven getting ripped to a million pieces and Bill and Tom feeding on her carcass.
i don't know...just brainstorming... :P
update soon...i need to know what's gonna happen.
*flails arms excitedly*
just don't kill Raven!!
*shakes fist threateningly*
i'm warning you!!
^_^
Author's Response: first off, I just wanna say that this review was AWESOME :P So I'm replying RIGHT NOW! :D And I did what again? -innocent face- And PLEASE, call me buddy :P -curtseys or however you spell it- Where's the fun and drama without Raven being in trouble eh? :P You know so you love it really :P I'm glad that you love how the story is unfolding, and as for a happy ending... there may be... but there is a second half to this story so the real ending comes then :P I'm splitting it up because it isn't as such two different stories, but it's a different, um, situation if you get me ;) As for the bitchy Raven, it shall do you no good to try and predict the future! :P I can't promise anything as of yet because I haven't really decided, but that is definately an awesome enough suggestion to be a situation for me to consider :D I'll try to update soon, but first of all I need to plan out what's actually going to happen.. -curses damn writers block- ok ok -hides from your arms and fists- Hopefully the next update will be good enough and soon enough for you - thanks for the amaaaazing review - I LOVE YOU! :) xx
Date: 02/18/10 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 12
ok, i THOUGHT i was getting this, but... i was wrong. raven, raven, raven... and I KNEW they were vampyres the entire time. also, it bugs me to death when people don't use the old english spelling of "Vampyre" so if there are any comments on that, its not to you personally. and.... (:
Vampyre, vampyre, vampyre, vampyre, vampyre, vampyre :D
Author's Response: -evil laugh- Glad I'm confusing things here :D Nothing worse than predictability :P I'm guessing alot of people knew they were vampires lol, but that was kind of needed to understand what was going on in the most part :P And I apologise for not spelling vampyre correctly, I didn't even realise that it used to be spelt like that - and I come from England! However, that just doesn't look right to me seeing as I grew up with Vampire, so I'm guessing that's sticking :P I won't take you're comments personally, hopefully you won't get upset with me using Vampire :P VAMPIREVAMPIREVAMPIRE (A) :D Thanks for the awesome review!
Date: 02/16/10 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 12
wow! i wonder how bill is going to react! just as he finally gets raven to trust him, his real to-be-wife shows up! haha can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Yay, my evil plan is working :D The next chapter should hopefully be up soon, before Friday anyway :D But, you got to ask yourself, is she his REAL wife-to-be? -evil laughter- Thanks soo much for the review :D xx
Date: 02/16/10 11:49 am Title: Chapter 12
omg, this is nothing I've espected... please please please more asap
Author's Response: Glad I shocked people :P I'm going to write more right now when I finish answering reviews :D I think yours is the last one :P Just got to check that I didn't miss any, and then I'll be well on the way of delivering another update by... friday? Hopefully anyway :D It's wierd, but I really feel into this story too - and I know what's going to happen XD Thanks for the awesome review, hopefully I'll update soon enough for you :D xx
Date: 02/15/10 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 12
OH NO YOU DIDN'T?!?!?!
=O
OH MY GAAWWWWWDDDD!!!
>_<
i am so excited and confused and terrified!! update!!
^_^
Author's Response: OH YEA I DID :D OH MY- yeah, no opposite ending for that one ;) Wow, people are excited over this story! -gets excited- such a compliment :D Terrified? Lol XD Confused... tell me any questions you have and I'll worm them into the next short explanation period :D Then you can be a little less confused :D Thanks for the awesome review! :D xx
Date: 02/15/10 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 12
O_O oh shiiittttt gahhhhhhh you have to update now!!! I have to know what the fuck is going on?!?! Like... is she a twin? Omg... maybe she's from an alternate universe... and I would consider that the Raven we know isn't the right one at all if it weren't for her temperature issues as well... that just confuses everything and what the fuck?!?! xD
Author's Response: ^_^ I know I'm awesome right? (A) Fine, I'll do my best to update soon :D I'm noting down all your questions for the second explanation in like two chapters, which shouldn't be too long :D Temperature issues? -gets confused- you mean the burning? Well, that will be explained :D But re-read a little of the chapter :D They CAN go out in sunlight :D -manical laughter- Thanks so much for the review! -scurries off to write next chapter- :P xx
Date: 02/15/10 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
WHAT!?!?!?!?!? That ending was so jipped. lmao Okay, now I'm more into this story that thought!!!
One thing, when Bill says he'll try his best to explain, that's an understatement. This guy was literally talking paragraphs! lol Even so, I don't think it's done...especially by the ending. Two Raven's, Andreas - a new character - is a vampire as well, and new powers revealed? *whistles* That sure is a lot of drama. I'm so happy you updated. ^_^
Author's Response: First off, thanks for the review :D Glad the ending had that effect on you :D I love people getting into my story XD Yeah, I know Bill says he'll try his best to explain, and that he explains ALOT (a whole chapter), but I wanted you guys to understand what was going on :D And! -applauds- you are very clever :D The explanation hasn't finished yet :D I think that the chapter after the next will hold an explanation (but not by Bill), but first I gotta ask you guys if there's anything you want to know ;) I know he explained alot, but there HAS to be things I missed out :D I know a few things that I am explaining in it already, but yeah, there is ANOTHER explanation, but hopefully not quite as long :P I wasn't sure about adding Andreas, but I thought of an awesome idea for him, so I decided to add him in, glad he was perceived (sp?) so well by you guys - my awesome readers :D I didn't know how well the he-turned-into-one would go down, but no-ones complained yet ;) Glad people haven't taken the powers to be like twilight. I really didn't want my story to be like that, but after I added the chap o realised how similar the powers were and got a bit paranoid - IT IS NOT LIKE TWILIGHT! right? ;) *mutters* stupid book taking over the world *cough* Ahem, so yeah :D Glad you liked the update, sooo happy that it made you so happy :P Hopefully there will be a new update soon, and I know I say that every time, but hopefully this time it will be true :P Thanks for the review :D xx