Date: 03/14/10 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 16
Hey!
I LOVED IT!!! :D :D :D Just like the last chapter, the gore and violence in this scene was absolutely wonderfully written and quite easy to picture. Don't worry about having made the readers wait for this chapter, it was absolutely brilliant and worth every moment of time.
Furthermore, I personally didn't find it confusing at all. The story so far has been quite easy to follow if you live on these types of stories and yet, I'm still on my toes awaiting a new twist every single time I read a chapter.
Overall, just a captivating story and I can't wait for your next chapter.
Author's Response: Hey! :D Thanks so much! That means so much to me, as I always feel like my writing could be so much better, even though this is my best fic by far xD Glad you think it was worth the wait! I began writing the next chapter today on the school bus! Even if that's the only time I get chance to write, I shall update again soon! haha, you may not think it was confusing now, but if you go back and read it, paying attention to the details after the next chapter, I'm sure you'll see what I mean ;) Aww thanks so much :P I didn't really think a vampire story would be such a great hit after everyone immediately thinks ugh, twilight. I really don't want my story to go that way :/ Wow, thanks so much for taking the time to give me such an amazing and inspiring review :) Totally motivated me to keep writing as fast as I can :P I LOVE YOU! xx
Date: 03/14/10 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 16
O_O
oh...my...gawd...
*long, shaky breath*
i have to admit...i was freaking out while reading this.
seriously though...you're always putting Raven through so much shit!!
*sigh*
well...hopefully everything will turn out for the better.
can't wait for an update!!
and quick question...will there be any "action" between Bill and Raven in your sequel???
cuz i'm just thinkin' there should be!!
*wink* *wink*
^_^
Author's Response: -takes deep breath- EEEE! I love reviews! especially ones like yours! :O :D And I KNOW I'm putting Raven through a lot of crap right now, but I'm SORRY! Keeps the readers reading :) I feel bad for writing it though :( HOWEVER! There shall be a little more in store for her, but I shan't say what when or why :P Oh and *winks* there definately will be :D If I can bring myself to write it :P Which I'm sure, with enough encouragement I'll get there xD If there's ever a REALLLLY long while between updates, you'll know what's coming (A) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! It makes my day each time I get a review as awesome as this :D -hugs- I LOVE YOU ;) xx
Date: 03/12/10 10:12 am Title: Chapter 15
:O Tomi's a badddddd booyyyyyy *shameshameshameshameshame!*
Author's Response: haha :P Great surprise to come back from cheerleading to find another review! It's inspired me to carry on writing the chapter - maybe even post tonight! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review - you're awesome! :D xx
Date: 03/08/10 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 15
Waaaah, I can't wait for the next chapter!!! :D
Author's Response: wow, thanks :D I'm hping to update soon, although I don't have much time to write :( I resorted to writing the next chapter instead of doing coursework today at school (A) Good to know you're my priority? I hope so :P Thanks soo much for reading and reviewing, it makes my day :) xx
Date: 03/07/10 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 15
OH! He through her through the door. Wtf man!?! This story took a turn for the worst. lol
“Shit! I’m piss ages away from there! I guess I’m jumping out the window after all. The front door is locked though, so ignore the bang there, it’s just me beating the shit out of it.”
Author's Response: I'm hoping the turn for the worse means as in the plot and for poor original raven, not a trun for the worst so you don't like it :( I guess not though, because you reviewed :D WHICH I LOVE :D Things really are getting bad for Raven, but they get worse still :O I'm guessing you like that line? I love it :P It reminds me how the guys are still pretty normal deep down :P Thanks soooo much for reading and reviewing, I would reply longer but I don't have the time :( Thanks again! I LOVE YOU!! xx
Date: 03/07/10 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 15
it took me a while to figure out what was happening! haha! but i loved the chapter hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Oops, sorry about that (A) It was meant to be a little confusing at the beginning to make you guys feel as confused and disorientated as Bill did, I hope I didn't go too far lol :P Glad you loved it anyway, hoping to update again soon - I write at all available moments - I was writing the next chapter instead of doing coursework today at school (A). Thanks soooo much for the review :D xx
Date: 03/07/10 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ahhhhhh my favorite storyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy :) So, does Andreas die?! I hope not!! I hate this Raven. Bill should just rip her head off and be done with it!! GAH. Um um um um.... I'm trying to rant some more but it's not working out for me XD I love this chapter and I love your writing and I love Bill and I love you! WOOOO! Okay, I'm done :)
Author's Response: I'm afraid that I can't say if andreas dies or not, don't want to spoil all the surprises I have in store for th next chapter :D Glad you hate this Raven, she's meant to be hated :D Though it MAAY take a while for the full explanation to emerge if I choose to go down that path, but yeah, I meant for people to hate her :) Glad it's working :P I love Bill too! Thanks for all that lovin' :D Hopefully I'll be updating again soon :D It's so motivating to have so many people say my story is a favourite of theres -daydreams with massive grin on face- oh sorry :P I should go carry on writing now :P Thanks for reviewing! It made my day :D xx
Date: 03/07/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 15
Update please :) It was good!.. confusing, but good xD
Author's Response: I was working on the new chapter at school today (A) Hopefully that means they'll be another update by the end of the week :D Sorry about the confusingness of it, but that hopefully will keep the next chapter (the end of it anyway) a BIIIIG surprise :) Thanks for reading and reviewing, I LOVE YOU!! xD xx
Date: 03/07/10 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 15
omg omg omg omg can u update faster?
Author's Response: Well, you'll be pleased to know that I am trying :D Today, while I was supposed to be doing coursework at school, I was actually writing the first part of the next chapter :D This is how little time I have right now xD Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, glad you're enjoying the story :D xx
Date: 03/03/10 05:29 am Title: Chapter 14
wow it's amazing, please update soon, i love this fic
Author's Response: Aww thanks! :') I'm hoping to have updated by sat or sun, but I'm about to start writing so who knows ;) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! xx
Date: 03/03/10 01:58 am Title: Chapter 14
Umm I'm really tired and was trying to catch up on my favorite fic updates so I'm not sure how much of a review I can give but I really love this story so please don't stop xD
Author's Response: Aww, that's ok :D Not only did you review, but my story earned a favourite slot? :O Thanks! I'm about to start writing the next chapter, but I've been really busy lately, so maybe I'll update by sat or sun :D Don't worry! I won't stop! Thanks soooo much! xx
Date: 03/01/10 04:26 am Title: Chapter 14
omg noooooooo i started reading the story to early... i love reading a story when there r lots of chapters up but i dont like when i have to stop reading a good story please please please god update this now before i die.. this story maybe the most confusing and greatest story i ever read... update now please.
Author's Response: hehe, well I'm really glad you decided to read it anyway xD there's only six chapters left in this half of the story :O I'm hoping to update again really soon as soon as I have time to writ :D Thanks so much for those compliments! 'confusing and greatest' really made me smile! I hate stories becming predicatable, so confusing is good, and great is just... amazing :P Thank you sooo much for reviewing and reading! I LOVE YOU! xx
Date: 03/01/10 03:57 am Title: Chapter 14
Why is that Raven so powerful compared to the twins? And yes, Tom is a jerk!He should let Bill sort things out! Need to read more, you hear? And it's wonderful news that you're planning more excitement for us!
Author's Response: The new Raven? You'll find out in time, but probably not until the second half of the story :) How right you are about Tom! But that means he'll be in trouble, so that should be fun to write :) Someone else getting into trouble instead of the original Raven for once XD I'll hopefully update again soon, glad you're looking forward to the next part! Thanks for the review! xx
Date: 02/28/10 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 14
Okay, so this time, my mouth isn't numn, so my smile was full and normal!! Yay! This story captivates me with every single chapter and I freaking LOVE it. Post the new chapter sooooooon!! -hugs-
Author's Response: -bursts out laughing- I remember your half stroke-like smile xD Glad you have your smile back :D Which reminds me, I have the dentist on thursday :/ Aww thanks soo much :D I'm hoping to update again soon! :D Thanks for the review!! -hugs back- xx
Date: 02/28/10 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 14
What do you mean it wasn't amazing?? I absolutely loved it. I dunno if I'm just strange but I loved the way you set up the scene...I could almost see each move being played out in my head as if it were a movie. The darkness, the wet, the cold, the pain...and not just physical...but there also seemed to be a lot of agonizing emotional baggage that went along with this scene. It was absolutely lovely
Author's Response: Aww thanks :) That's what I was aiming for! :D -gets excited- Thankyou so much for that awesome compliment ;) Hopefully I'll be updating again soon! Thanks for the review!! xx
Date: 02/28/10 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 14
YAY!!! AN UPDATE!!
i have to admit...i really kinda wanna castrate Tom for doing what he did.
and i give Phoenix a round of applause for standing up to Tom and telling him off...YOU GO GIRL!! :P
and once again...i feel terribly sorry for Raven...
*sigh*
she was raped twice, beaten up immenseley (i think i spelt that wrong)...and NOW...the evil Raven has found the damn room!!!
>_< evwything is gowing wong!!!
i gonna kill the evil Waven myself!!
please update soon luvvie!!
^_^
and let's have some more Bill!!
*licks lips*
*giggles*
Author's Response: :D Alot of people want to castrate Tom or injure him in some other sense for being stubborn and stupid towards Raven when she wasn't doing anything remotely wrong xD I was trying to make people like Phoenix a little better and to feel more attached to her, so glad to see it worked :D I feel sorry for Raven too :( I don't want to keep writing these bad things, but I know that it's what keeps people reading so I must :'( Soo many bad things have happened to her! All the things you listed (I dunno if you spelt that right either :P) and the cyanide drug thing... wow :/ The whole world is against her... But is there a reason? Hmm? -manical laughter- I love having this power xD I'll update as soon as I can, I'm planning on starting the next chapter after I've finished answering reviews, so it shouldn't be too long - and there will be ALOT more Bill! Thanks ssoooooo much for reviewing :D xx
Date: 02/28/10 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 13
Okay, so I did read the last chapter but I skipped this one AND eleven. Weird... Anyway, now I get's what going o more than I did before with chapter 14. Gosh, I can't believe I skipped the chapters. -___- Tom's getting on my nerves with his stubborn attitude and this only makes me happy that he's got it comin' from Phoenix. I think she's slowly becomming my special character. ^_^ Sorry again!
Author's Response: Heheh, I forgive you :) I explained in your last review why you might have skipped some :) Tom seems to be getting on alot of people's nerves lately :P But it's supposed to be like that so that they can side with the others later on :D Aww, glad someone really likes Phoenix, I get a little paranoid about people only being interested in the main, MAIN character, so this is good news :D It's ok, you're forgiven now :) Thanks for the reviews!! :D
Date: 02/28/10 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 11
OMGOSH. DUDE. I think did skip this chapter and the ones after it (except 14). @_@ *fail* Wow!!! No wonder I was totally confused but I'm usually confused and was hoping I'd get an an explanation later. lmfao, I can't believed I totally skipped over them! =O I think it's totally crazy that Bill took it upon himself to remove her tampon. :O Now you know he's really NOT human. xD On to the next chapter!! Gahh, I'm sorry! =x
Author's Response: :O!!! Ok, I forgive you for not reviwing then xD And you're not stupid, I double updated on the day I updated 11 and 12, then the next day I put the chapter before the last up, so they must have all looked pretty close together xD Glad it cleared everything up a little :D And lol, Bill IS crazy! But it shows that he's beginning to care for her now :D Hope you have fun reading :P And eh, I forgive you ;)
Date: 02/28/10 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 14
lol @ She's found us. I don't know why that was humorous to me, but it was. xD Why do they keep raping Raven?!?! Sooner or later she's going to get pregnant and what will they do then? lol @ he broke my face. Yes, Raven is a true teen. lmao Even though Phoenix is a human, it's nice to see her put her foot down and tell Tom when he's wrong! OH YES. ;D One question: WHERE ON EARTH IS BILL?! I hope he's not with the new Raven. :( Follow up soon! ^_^
Author's Response: first off, WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN? I have missed your awesome reviews ssoooooo much on the last two chapters! I had a breakdown and ALMOST threw myself out my window! And I am glad you realised that the rape was a common occurance! Other readers are just like: yay! sex!! But yeah, they do, and it's wierd, right? :P It will be explained in I THINK two chapters time, I actually had that as something to explain, so glad you picked up on it :D But will she get pregnant? Or won't she? Will there be a reason? -manical laughter- you'll just have to wait and see :P And I lol'd at the breaking face thing too :P I had to put that in just to make her seem like a normal teenager XD I say things like that ALL the time :) And where is Bill... well. That is a question :P He is the one in the next chapter, and he IS with the new raven, but why?? what are they doing?! :O -is shocked- Guess you'll just have to wait, right? -feels powerful- I'm hoping to update again by Friday or saturday, so not SUCH a long wait this time xD Thanks sooo much for returning and reviewing and therefore saving my sanity! Loves!! :D xx
Date: 02/28/10 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 14
poor Raven. And update asap please :}
Author's Response: I shall, I shall :D Glad you're feeling a little sorry for her there xD I have alot on right now, but I am working on the next chapter in every spare moment I get starting tomorrow :D Thanks soo much for the review xx