Date: 04/03/10 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 19
please update as soon as you can. i
Author's Response: I will update as soon as I get time to write the new chapter! I'm so busy right now, but I'll get there soon! I'm hoping to be able to write later to day, but I will do my best to update! Thanks so much for reviewing! Loves xx
Date: 04/02/10 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 19
omg, WHY CANT SHE BE A VAMPYRE YET?! WHYWHYWHY?!?! and by the way...
WHO THE HELL IS RILEY?!?! THATS SO RANDOM! :D
I'm also fifteen, btw! *high fives the way only fifteen year olds could* YEAH! :D
Author's Response: She'll be a vampire SOON (ish) so don't worry xD No clues about Riley I'm afraid, just go back a few chapters and see if you can work it out :D It shouldn't be random after the next chapter (the last one in this half :(), because then hopefully it will all make sense then :D Oh yeah! When are you sixteen? I am in may :D Near the end of may xD -high fives back in the awesome 15-year-old-way- We are AWESOME! Woo! Loves :D xx
Date: 04/02/10 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 19
Okay so, me likey the sex with Bill. Mmmm. Um Bill should have just strapped her down and forced his venom in her. She's stupid lol. Annnnd WHO IS RILEYYYYY???????????? Rawrawrawr. I love youuuu =]
Author's Response: haha, glad you liked the sex, I was worried it would be crap seeing as I've never written that before xD so yeah, that's good news :D And no he shouldn't! It turns out to be very important next chapter, unless I change my mind about what will happen, that she is still human :D No clues about Riley I'm afraid, just go back a few chapters and see if you can work anything out :D Hopefully it will all make sense after the next chapter :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I LOVE YOU BACK! xx
Date: 04/01/10 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 19
oh lord... and omg the sex scene was hot
Author's Response: lmao, thanks xD I had to read some stuff before I could write it, so I'm glad it was acceptable xD I've never written anything like that before so it means so much to know that you enjoyed it :P Thanks so much for this review, it was really great :D loves xx
Date: 04/01/10 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 19
OMGOSH, does this mean that Raven is alive?! I don't want to get too ahead of myself since you said that you were pressed for time and then you edit something and it's completely different. Whatever though, it was still pretty exciting! The part where Raven said she felt the same was pretty anti-climatic. lol Nothing's been going right for Raven though. At first I thought she was scared of havnig sex with him but she's been raped twice in the past already so it's not like she's a virgin. =/ It's the vampire turning thing. aww
Oh yeah,
WHO THE HELL IS RILEY?!?!?!??!?! x)
Update soon dear.
Author's Response: Oh no, Raven most definately isn't alive, don't worry, it wasn't a mistake or made too similar, maybe if you go back a few chapters you'll get what I'm getting at ;) Hopefully everything will make sense after the next chapter though - well, the most part anyway, there might still be a few loose ends, but they lead through to the SECOND HALF!! -gets excited- Sorry for the anti climatic bit, but I'm not going to make it THAT easy now :P I just gotta work out how to turn her without it becoming too much like twilight :/ I can do it though :P I have an idea :D Yeah, she'd been raped, so she was just scared of the pain, sorry if that wasn't clear at first :/ No clues coming about Riley apart from the thing a few chapters back, I wonder if you can work it out :P Hoping to update as soon as I get chance to write it, I'm looking forward to the drama of the next chapter :) Soo glad your reviews have returned, they are so awesome! I LOVE YOU!! :D xx
Date: 04/01/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 19
i am so curious as to what is going on now...
Riley????
well...i'll just have to wait for the next chapter...*sigh*
:P
update soon!!
btw...the sex scene was perfectly fine...don't worry.
:D
Author's Response: Haha, glad I seem to have gotten everyone wanting to know what happens! No clues being given here I'm afraid! -manical laughter- There's only one chapter left :( until the second half :D yayyyy! I actually can't wait to find the time to write it :D So I'll be updating as soon as possible :) oh, and thanks ^_^ I was SO worried about the sex scene because it was essential, but I have no experience (I'm 15) and I don't really read it, so I had to go and read some PWP to give me some ideas xD You don't know how happy that makes me to know that people thought it was a success :D Thanks soooooo much for reviewing! Loves xx
Date: 04/01/10 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 19
Haha yeah the ugly freaking pink color!
Ugh why oh why is bieber on this site?
Nice chapter :)
Author's Response: haha, it was a GREAT april fools joke xD I used to like Bieber before everyone started going mad about him :/ Yeah, that phase is OVER! Glad you liked the chappie, I was worried about it xD Thanks for the review! Loves xx
Date: 04/01/10 10:35 am Title: Chapter 18
LIKE! EXTREME LIKE :D
Author's Response: Haha, thanks :D I almost have the next chapter ready :D Its written, just not edited, and this april fools joke is burning my eyes, so I doubt I'll actually upload today xD I will tomorrow though! Loves! xx
Date: 03/27/10 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 18
Naww, so cute :D
Author's Response: Aww thanks :P I was worried that this chapter might become a little boring, but glad you liked it! New chappie up as soon as I get time to write it! Sorry for the loong reply wait, but I'm so busy right now! -sighs- Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Loves xx
Date: 03/27/10 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 18
Sorry, I had to delete my other review...it sucked so much! XD I just wanted to thank you so much for the nice reply I got to my review! It's not too often that those who review get such a nice response back XD Anyways, I wanted to let you know that the vows were wonderfully set up. I loved the fact that Raven had to promise Bill that she will obey him and do his every command essentially. I can only imagine what kind of trouble that'll get them into since your charrie has such a free spirit and sort of a rebellious one at that! lol... Reminds me of a character that I used to play with when I rp'd online, on a site called avidgamers...dunno if you've ever heard of it. It got shut down a few years ago and since there have been very few good rp sites up. Ironically enough, her name too was Raven.
Anyways, enough about me. I just wanted to thank you again for writing such a good and fun story and if ever you've got the time or just want to chat, email or msn me at raven_dark83@hotmal.com I promise I don't bite :P
Have a good day and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: aw! NO reviews suck, they are all awesome in my opinion :D I always answer my reviews (sorry it's been a while, I've been very busy lately) so always make sure you check back! NO reviews are left un answered by the time I get the next chapter up :) Aww thanks :D I didn't want the vows to be too cheesy or anything, and with vows, I feared the chapter would be too boring :/ So I'm sooo happy to hear that you liked them :D -is happy- And -manical laughter- You're observant! Yeah, it MIGHT cause some trouble in the future, but no promises ;) Naah, never heard of that site :/ But Raven is an AWESOME name :) Aww, thank YOU for reading my story and giving me such awesome reviews to read :D they RULE! And my MSN is broken :/ Do you have facebook? Add me :) Becky stott :) My pic is me sat on grass :) Thanks so much for the review - new chappie will be us AS SOON AS I CAN WRITE but I'm sooooooo busy! I might just write all day monday instead of revising, and start tuesday (A) Thanks sooo much for reading and reviewing! You're awesome - I LOVE YOU!! xx
Date: 03/27/10 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 18
at first i was like "wasn't the supposed to be in a comatose state?" when thechapter started, then i was like "oh that makes sense!" once u showed the flashback. good job i really liked this chapter!
Author's Response: Oh! Sorry you got a little confused xD Glad you understood it when the flashback came though, I had that layout in mind for this chapter for AGES :P Glad you really liked the chap! Aww! Reviews like these are so awesome and make me feel all fuzzy and loved xD Hopefully the new chapter will be up soon, as soon as I get time to write it - not meant to be on here right now (A). Thanks sooo much for reading and reviewing! I LOVE YOU!! xx
Date: 03/26/10 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 18
O_O
i wanna know what's gonna happen!!!
*flails arms*
update soon!!
:D
Author's Response: haha, you and your arm flailing xD Cracks me up every time, I can just imagine it :P I'm busy until monday, so the new chap should be up next week sometime :D Thanks soo much for reading and reviewing! I LOVE YOU!! :D xx
Date: 03/25/10 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 18
Haha i wish someone would stab the father in the face with like ... a fucking wooden stick
Author's Response: haha :P Sorry to dissapoint there, there will be no stabbing of faces... yet (A) Thanks for reading and reviewing! Loves xx
Date: 03/25/10 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 18
i love this story more more more more more more more
Author's Response: Aww thanks ^_^ Hoping to get the new chapter started soon, but I'm pretty busy until monday, so it might be a week or so before the new update :( Loves xx
Date: 03/25/10 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 18
I meant missy lol
Author's Response: :O CONDEMN YOUR TYPOS!! -hits with fish- Nah, you know I loves all ma peeps :P x
Date: 03/25/10 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 18
Eeeeeeeek they're marriedddddd :D I'm so excited. I actually thought his dad was going to start some drama!!! Good thing he didn't though lol Anywho, loveeeeeee this mssy :)
Author's Response: You thought the dad was going to start some drama? HA! You're so naive (in a good way, the way I meant it to come across) - He just hasn't kicked up any drama... yet. NEXT CHAPTER WOOOOO! Glad you liked it, I was worried this heck of a long filler would bore my readers into death :O thanks for reading and reviewing! I maaay be starting the new chapter tonight :D If I'm awake (I've been ill) I LOVE YOU! :D xx
Date: 03/24/10 11:55 am Title: Chapter 17
This is so far from Twilight. Edward never hurt Bella. o.O But to be on the safe side, don't include werewolfs.....
Author's Response: Thanks so much for this review - very helpful :D And don't worry, I never intended to include werewolves.. I don't really like that part of twilight lol xD Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :D Loves xx
Date: 03/24/10 03:44 am Title: Chapter 17
This is an AMAZING story. I am thoroughly enjoying it. VERY well written. I seriously can't wait for next chapter! Tom's a dick. :D
Author's Response: -ROFL- I love your little comment there at the end :P Wow, I never thought anyone would say this was VERY well written :O It's my first fic that I've put this level of effort into so... WOW :D Thanks :) Hoping to update today or tomorrow :) Chapter's almost finished, though it'll be a filler, BUT the next chapter will be very interesting ;) Thanks so much for readign and reviewing! -hugs- Loves xx
Date: 03/21/10 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 17
Awsome chap :D
Author's Response: Aww thanks :D Hopefully the new chapter will be up on thurs or fri :P Thanks for reading and reviewing! Loves xx
Date: 03/21/10 11:40 am Title: Chapter 17
Love it, love it, looove it! :D I want you to update ASAP! And as an answer to your question; this fic is nothing like twilight! I don't get how it could be.. This is a lot darker! Don't you dear delete it, I would be really mad of you did xD Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much! I've written about half of the next chapter, so I might be able to update umm... thursday? I'm busy lmao xD I didn't really understand the comparison myself, but it got me worried anyway because I had been so determined not to let it get that way. Thanks for answering the question, and I don't think that I'll be deleting it after all of the feedback I have received so far; so don't get mad! -hides- Thanks so much for the review, it was so useful and awesome :D Loves xx