Date: 02/15/10 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 12
Omg! I can't wait for next cap.! This is like my favorite story, and every day its not a new upload, my hart smashes like a watermelon under a piano:/!
Author's Response: Wow, it's so amazing to be someones favourite story's writer :P Sorry for slow updates, I have a lot in my life right now :( But hopefully they'll be another update soon :D That is an awesome simile by the way ;) I might just have to steal it and put it in my story somewhere, look at it as a dedication, not a robbery, right? ;D Thanks so much for the awesome review, once I finish replying to reviews I'm going to continue writing the next chapter :D xx
Date: 02/15/10 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 12
i knew it! knew it, knew it. lol i knew she wasnt the real raven :D
this story is Awesome!
Author's Response: Did I give too much away? lol XD I thought that a few people would have realised with the many mentions of her mark being a tattoo, but others were really shocked, so I'm happy with the response :) Well done you! -pats back- you're clever :P Thanks so much for the awesome compliment, I started out thinking it was really crap, but then sooo many people compliment it that my confidence in it has skyrocketed XD My other stories are pretty crap (started them ages ago when my writing was poorer) so this is my baby that I work on ALL the time, so hopefully they'll be another update really soon :D Thanks for the review :D
Date: 02/15/10 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ahhh no!!! More more more :D
Author's Response: -evil laughter- I'm so glad I got this response, I was worried that I wouldn't shock people :S I'm writing the next chapter when I get back on my laptop, it will hopefully be up by Friday, but half term is going by too fast :( I have to actually do WORK tomorrow as well :O Stupid setting work over the holidays :( Anyway, thanks for the awesome review, hopefully more will be up soon :D -hugs-
Date: 02/15/10 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 11
I like it :D (y)
Author's Response: Glad you like it :D Hopefully chapter 13 will be up by Friday :D Thanks soo much for the awesome review - even the short ones make my day :D -dances around room- xx
Date: 02/15/10 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 12
WHAT.THE.EFF. O.O
noooooooo. dont let Bill get rid of Raven one D:
Author's Response: Lol, glad this chapter got that effect :D I had the end of this chapter in my head since... well, since I started writing this fic XD 'Raven one', I'm loving it :P That is awesome XD Seriously though, I'm not giving away any hints as to what is going to happen XD It's sooo confusing writing with two Raven's though, my head hurts :P Thanks for the awesome review :D xx
Date: 02/15/10 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 11
"Plus, I removed that funny cotton thing when it started to smell bad", sorry but this was hilarious :DD I love this chapter... just like the other chapters... and I would love another chapter :) take your time
Author's Response: I already added chapter 12, but it hasn't validated yet :( I love that line, I have NO clue what made me think of it, but I love it all the same - glad you liked it too :D Wow, glad you loved... my whole story XD That's just amazing :D Hopefully chapter 12 will be validated soon, I added it hours ago :S Thanks for the review :D
Date: 02/15/10 09:56 am Title: Chapter 11
ooh Billum's gonna explain! O:
lets see how this folds out XD
Good work, can't wait for the next chapter! ^^
Author's Response: I added it :D I'm guessing it didn't get validated yet or got rejected :O -runs to manage stories to check- Glad you liked it and thanks for the awesome review :D x
Date: 02/11/10 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 10
Gahhh nuuuu i just found this fic and i love it and i was reading then i get here and CLIFFHANGER then try and click next but NOOOO no more chapters!!! You HAVE to put another out soon O_O -tries to hypnotize through text- You will put another chapter out NOW =D?
Author's Response: wow, I hate it when that happens (the try to click next but there isn't on thing), but that only happens when there is a majorly amazing story (for me anyway) so that is a huge compliment! -hugs- I'm just about to put the next chapter up, but I'm afraid that it won't be worth the wait - it's just a filler, but read the chapter notes for a small piece of information :D Your hypnotization definately worked because I only just managed to get on here for the first time since you reviewed (hence the late reply, sorry about that) and I'm putting a new chapter up :D -applauds- Thanks for the awesome review! :D xx
Date: 02/08/10 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 10
I just started reading this story today...and let me tell you...FUCKING AMAZING!!
i cannot wait until you update it!!
like i am seriously sooooo friggin' excited for the next chapter!! *laughs*
keep up the wonderful work!
^_^
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you SO much! I'm about to start work on the next chapter round about now, when I stop listening to awesome songs by our beautiful band (A) So you shouldn't have to wait TOO much longer :D It is such an awesome compliment for you to review like this ^^ Hopefully the next chapter won't disappoint you -worries- -laughs- I'll try my hardest to keep my work up to the standard you enjoy :) Thanks soooo much for the review :D YOU'RE AMAZING :D
Date: 02/08/10 10:37 am Title: Chapter 10
I don't care about splitting up, I just want more :}}
Author's Response: lol thanks :D I'm hoping that I get time to write more soon, and I will be splitting it up just so you know, because that's what people seem to want :D Thanks soo much for the review - it means so much :D
Date: 02/07/10 03:16 am Title: Chapter 10
Omg, i cant wait for next chapter :D
And i think the splitting thing would be cool :P
Author's Response: Ok, seeing as so many people want the split - I shal split it :D Thanks for your feedback on that :D The next chapter should be coming relatively soon, but I am pretty busy right now, so updates aren't as frequent as normal - but they do come eventually :D
Date: 02/07/10 01:22 am Title: Chapter 10
aah, i was mentioned in dedication! woot woot! *does happy Georg dance*
i think splitting it up would be awesome and please have mercy and update asap. :D
love,
TL89
Author's Response: Of COURSE you were mentioned! Duh :P Your reviews are awesome :D I decided that I will split it because everybody has told me that would be great, so that made my mind up for me :D I will try my hardest to update soon, but as I have already mentioned, I am pretty busy so it may take a week :( Thanks for your constant support through reviewing :D Thanks!
Date: 02/06/10 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 10
ooohhh my gosh! i still dont know half of whats going on in the story, but i still love it. its certainly not dramatic irony, cause i dont know something the other people know. did tom kill phoenix?
Author's Response: Yes! My plan is working! The storyline is supposed to be a bit confusing, because Raven doesn't really know what is happening either :) Glad you like it that way :D You know something? -gets confused- YOU STOLED MA BRAIN! I DEMANDS YOU GIVES IT BACK! *collapses and cries* I can't belive you stoled it :( I can't writes without it so you better give it back :( And muhahahaaaa! You fell into the trap :D No, Tom didn't kill Phoenix but... nah, I won't tell you - You'll just have to wait :D -evil laugh- Thanks soooo much for the review :D
Date: 02/06/10 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 10
gosh! it seems like everytime raven gets close to saying her mark is a tattoo, someone HAS to interupt her! gah! but i love ur idea of making the story have 2 parts... update soon!
Author's Response: Ok, so I'll spilt it seeing as that is what everyone seems to want :D I'll try to update asap but I'm pretty busy, so it may take around a week or so :/ And there will be more times where she gets cut off, at least one, which is VERY important -evil laugh- man, I can't wait to hear what everyone thinks when the big bit comes XD Thanks sooooo much for the review -hugs-
Date: 02/06/10 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 10
gosh! it seems like everytime raven gets close to saying her mark is a tattoo, someone HAS to interupt her! gah! but i love ur idea of making the story have 2 parts... update soon!
Author's Response: I know I responded to your other review but I thought I'd reply to this one too because I hate seeing unanswered reviews so you're double lucky :P Thanks for the review... again :D
Date: 02/06/10 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 10
Wow... So I had to read the last bit a couple of times before I caught on to what was actually happening. Here we go again with this know-nothing Bill keeps doing to her. Even with how lovely the Tom/Phoenix relationship seems to be, they both were planning on feeding them the green potatoes! There's a twist. I'm lost again. lol What is going on?!?! *shakes fists above the head*
Welcome back! I waiting for the enxt update on this story and I'm not the least bit disappointed! I understand what you mean about being busy. It's affecting my writing too. x(
Can't wait for the second part! ^_^
Author's Response: firstly: -grabs wrists and lowers hands- your arms will get tired :D What is going on, well.. you'll have to wait for the next chappie to find out XD I confused myself writing this because I know what is going to happen but don't want to give it away XD But explanations will arrive in the next chapter :D Thanks for the welcome -waves much too quickly to be humanly possible, but this is the cyber world, right?- Glad you liked the update :D Sorry for it being a little rushed, but I'll be starting the next chap as soon as I have the time :D Busyness sucks... And yeah, I'm splitting this up because that's what everyone seems to want XD Well, once again, thanks for the review - hope you liked the dedications that I finally got around to doing :D
Date: 02/04/10 04:54 am Title: Chapter 7
I love this story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! That really does mean a lot to me :D Next chapter hopefully up today :)
Date: 02/03/10 11:24 am Title: Chapter 9
i love tis story soo much! i keep asking myself "when does bill finally learn the the mark is a tattoo?"i can't wait for the next chappy! plz update soon
Author's Response: Sorry for the slow reply, I haven't been able to do ANYTHING for a few days - I've been swamped with more important -if they exist- things to do :O Wow! That is such a compliment! I'm just editing the next chapter now - it isn't very long but it's all I have time to write and I can't leave you guys hanging much longer (A) And, it's in a few chapters time, when the plot thickens a little and there's a little surprise in store :D -hinthint- The new chap will be up soon - followed by an AMAAAZING next chapter (hopefully). I know I promised an amazing chapter for this one, but nearly no time mixed with a wall of WB is never good - thanks sooo much for the review! :D xx
Date: 01/17/10 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
ahhh! Bill is so oblivious to a girl's problems. why can't he just grab sme cotton balls and attatch them to string? or why doesn't she just put some toilet paper in her undies? that would be so much simpiler!
Author's Response: OK, I responded before but it obviously didn't go through XD LOL! I love that cotton ball idea XD When I was younger I made a necklace (if you can call it that) out of cotton balls and wool, no wonder my mom laughed XD And remember, she gets limited time in the bathroom and is scared to use Bill's things, so stuffing toilet paper in her pants would be too dangerous :P And wouldn't work anyway, considering how heavy she was bleeding due to the blood thinner :) Life isn't simple ;) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! :D
Date: 01/16/10 10:05 am Title: Chapter 9
Finally... Bill is acting nice and it's a nice thing :DD I'm not good at writing reviews, so just post another chappy and I will be the happiest girl in the whole world :)))))) Love you
Author's Response: aww, you don't have to be amazing at WRITING reviews, it the actual submitting of the review that makes my day :D Sadly, Bill may not be acting nice for too long, don't want to turn this story into a fluff fic (A) Wow, I'd LOVE to make you the happiest girl in the world, but I don't think my writing is good enough for that XD Another chappie coming soon, just as soon as I update a different fic - I cba with the others anymore so I have to force myself to write them XD This storyline is soo much better in my opinion :D Thanks soo much for the review, love you too xx