Date: 03/01/20 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story!
you should do a sequel to this!
Date: 06/22/10 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow... sick little perv, Tom. I love you :D
i mean, rubbing against Bill while he ASLEEP? gorgeous :)
Date: 12/19/09 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have a feeling that Bill knows and enjoys it
Date: 12/10/09 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Finish it, finish it xD
Date: 12/09/09 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't usually read anything that is less than 1000 words, but this one was good. Tom's guilt is ... Hot. Lol. I really do wish you'll write out the rest. I can see this turning into a 3-parter... First what Tom does, then how Bill finds out, and then how they deal with it. It doesn't have to be long- you've already proved you know how to capture a moment very well.
Nicely done. Please write more!
Date: 12/09/09 06:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Hmm, that was awesome. And Georg's blush! Haha. Tom is SEERIOUSLY horny. Though i wish you'd write more. And Tom'd do it, while Bill is only pretending to be asleep and then they'd have hot Kaulitzsex ^^
Date: 12/08/09 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I would really rather prefer you tell me. I can only imagine Bill eventually waking up one time and reciprocating in kind. But that's the happy ending.
I really like it. It's non-con, but it's not so non-con as to make me want to throw up. I definitely approve.