Date: 12/09/09 01:25 am Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
Ohh, girl. Damn! Okay, first, because you melted my brain, that was damn hot! And besides that...okay, no. Go back to that. STEAMY. It warranted repeating.
I love Bill all confident and knowing what he wanted and trying SO damn hard to get it. I enjoyed Tom's attitude, sounding just very matter-of-fact when he gave his reasons why this one or that one wasn't right for Bill. The reader had to know that only Tom would be right for Bill and damn, it took Bill a long time to get it. I'm so glad he did! Really, really good. *___*
Author's Response: LOL Didn't mean to melt the brain. Like I was saying to sweet dee...it was originally not even supposed to be Tom, but Tom was just relentless and ALWAYS there, so Bill and I were both frustrated with him. And Bill figured out the perfect remedy. =D Thank you so much for the review. ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 12/08/09 11:09 pm Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
i love the little in betweens where tom disapproves of everyone. very sexy. the end leaves me wondering, of course.
Author's Response: haha Thank you. I liked those little bits, too. It was originally NOT going to be Tom that Bill ended up getting with, but Tom just wouldn't let up, so. I was as frustrated with him as Bill. lol <333
Date: 12/08/09 10:51 pm Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
This is freaking brilliant. I love the dynamic between the twins here, and the final scene is insanely hot.
Author's Response: Thanks! I love that you love it. <3
Date: 12/08/09 10:21 pm Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
Very very hot. :) I can't believe I've never read anything of yours! I'm definitely going to change that. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you SO much!
Date: 12/08/09 09:12 pm Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
I love that it was such a beautifully sexually-confident Bill being cockblocked by Tom, this time. Ahh, Tomi, you had no thought as to the future consequences of your actions. XD OR DID HE. *_*
Love this, it was so deliciously sexy.
Author's Response: haha I think maaaaaaaybe he had an idea. Or maybe he really was clueless. =p Thank you so, so, so much for your review! ♥ ♥
Date: 12/08/09 09:07 pm Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
that was so awesome in so many ways...
I totally loved it =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <3
Date: 12/08/09 08:42 pm Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
Hot! *_*
Author's Response: Thanks! ♥
Date: 12/08/09 07:37 pm Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
Lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you! ♥
Date: 12/08/09 07:31 pm Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
That buildup of sexual tension... so hot. All of it, so hot!! Very well written also. I wish I could have kept reading, because that just leaves you wishing for more, in a really good way. It doesn't feel unfinshed however. Idk, I think u just made me horny right now, lol. Really good story, love the twins interaction in it.
Author's Response: Um....I'm sorry for making you horny? Or should I be sorry? Haha I don't know, I'm conflicted. I don't know that anyone has ever said that to me before. lol I'm really glad you liked the story, though! Thank you so much for your review. <333
Date: 12/08/09 05:36 pm Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
oh awesome babe! i hope you write another like this! well, just as long and with the twins screwing each other senseless! i love you for writing it!
Author's Response: lol So, basically you want some wordy smut? Hmmmm. *taps chin*
Date: 12/08/09 05:03 pm Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
oh wow, that was hot!)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 12/08/09 04:55 pm Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
WOOOOOT. awesome. loved it.
Sequel? : D I want more. LOL.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you. But no, no sequel. haha <3
Date: 12/08/09 04:36 pm Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
stupid Bill...
Author's Response: lol...is that a good thing or a bad thing??
Date: 12/08/09 03:56 pm Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
Damn, was that complicated relationship or what? But hot :). I don't know, I was a bit annoyed of Bill... I guess I just wanted to say that stop fooling around and fuck your goddamn brother! :D Anyways, wonderful fic.. even if I think that Bill needs to be spanked (hah!)... and I might be the only one thinking of it.
Author's Response: haha Yep, it was pretty complicated. But at least they got it sorted out, right? =p The idea of Bill being spanked just uh....yeah. haha >.> Thank you so much for your review. ♥
Author's Response: haha Yep, it was pretty complicated. But at least they got it sorted out, right? =p The idea of Bill being spanked just uh....yeah. haha >.> Thank you so much for your review. ♥
Date: 12/08/09 03:44 pm Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
Mmm, that was hot. I loved the playful element towards the end, as well. Nice job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I had no idea how I was going to end it, and that just came to me. I'm glad you liked it! <3
Date: 12/08/09 03:43 pm Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
this was LOVE. i should be writing but I had to stop for this and playing for keeps and GOD WOMAN this was amazingggggggg.
Author's Response: lol THANK YOU SO MUCH! <3333
Date: 12/08/09 03:09 pm Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
OMG!! Tom, you cockblocking twit. This HURTS, cause all poor Bill wanted was to be fucked and satisfied! But aww, then you gotta go all sweet and cockblock yourself so that Bill didn't feel alone.
I wanna be mad at you on Bill's behalf, but now I can't. XD
THIS is going on my faves for sure!
Author's Response: LoL I can't really be mad at him anymore, either. Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. <3333
Date: 12/08/09 02:47 pm Title: Bill tested, brother approved.
lol
i love this Tom
cocky
Author's Response: Thank you! Tom was cocky in this, wasn't he? haha <3