Date: 02/13/10 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.. I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT..Okay I'll stop. But I do mean it. Even though I always say that I do -.- I just can't think of another way to tell you...:(
I love it as much as I love you.. And that's A LOT! Trust me
Author's Response: Hahahah and I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE YOU! :D Thanks again!
Date: 02/13/10 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 11
Just give me a minute to scream: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.... Thank you :)
Ohhh OUCH! I spilled hot chocolate on my arms once. It hurt really bad! The next day I had blisters on my arm :( So I don't recommend that you try it.. okay??? I wouldn't want you to hurt yourself. LMAO! Bill and Nathalie's convo was just hilarious... The sex talk. I love how Nathalie is so enthusiastic about it all. Bill and Tom are perfect together :D.. Ohh yes! They should really consider a double date haha.
I wonder if Tom and Nathalie are planning to fill that empty spot in the boutique with one of Bill's designs. That would be AMAZINGG!! I don't think there would be a way to describe how Bill would feel if he found out about that hehe.. xD
OH MY GOODNESS! Poor Bill. That would be so embarrasing. Stupid Georg and his comments! Good thing he left because I was about to punch him ....
-.-.. yes you read it right :D *punch* hehe.
Awee, that would've been so awkward for Bill. Trying to ask Tom if they should have sex. Tom was all confused xD
“Bill, you’re making no sense.”
Bill exhumed harshly before blurting, “Do you think we should have sex?”
LMFAO! I totally LOL'ed when I read that. PRICELESS! :D .. Yaaaaay, Tomi's so understanding :)
Author's Response: Just give me a minute to HUG YOU! I love you, I love your reviews, they are long and kind and yummy! THANK YOU! Haha poor Bill, I agree! I felt mean putting him through such tirture, he's already opened the door nearly naked to Tom right at the beginning! *hugs Bill* Aw thank you my darling, I love you, you know I do :)
Date: 02/13/10 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 11
awww...poor bill but i laughed so hard...rofl
Author's Response: Haha thanks ^^
Date: 02/13/10 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love the camaraderie between Natalie and Bill, definitely enjoying your story so far. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^__^
Date: 02/11/10 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
LOVE to you darling. haha update?
Author's Response: Eee thank you so much! ^____^
Date: 02/10/10 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 10
*pout* update???
Author's Response: Haha it's coming :D Thanks for reading and reviewing ^_^
Date: 02/10/10 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 10
WOOT, motivation! loved this chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 02/09/10 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ugh, why do I keep doing that! It's supposed to be chapter 10, not 1 -.-
Author's Response: I dunno why it does that o___O Silly THF!
Date: 02/09/10 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
EMILY... I LOVE YOU! I hope you know that. This chapter wasn't horrible at ALL. How could you say such a thing? :o I'm shocked haha. Anything you write is absolutely fabulous.. ALWAYS! Anyway, on with the story :)
AWW dang it! Bill found his design. Even though I have no idea what exactly Tom and Nathalie are up to (although I do have an idea) I didn't think it was planned that Bill would find them.. :o Tom without a shirt on :D We all know what that looks like. *heads off to dreamyland*
Okay I'm back. NEIN! Bill's got the wrong idea. Don't think they have a little something something behind your back! Cuz they're not!... Poor Bill, don't cry :'( He's gonna make me cry too! WOW! THE END WAS.. WOW ... :-) hehe.
I think I should come up with something new than always saying that I love it. Even though it is true, it's getting a bit old. Don't ya think. Let me just think of something......................................................... Okay I got nothing -.-
LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ITT!! Once again haha. If you're getting tired of reading the same thing in my reviews over and over again, just let me know and I'll do my best to put it in other words lol. FANTASTIC, AMAZING, WOWIE!! (those words describe you as well) LOVELY, AWESOME, MARVELOUS! (those do too) :D Yeah so I'll stop.. Otherwise this review would be l-----------------------------------------------------l HUGE ... :)
Great chapter my cupcake with yellow sprinkles!
LOVE YOU
Xoxoxxoxoxo
Author's Response: Hahah basically, you're the most lovely girl in the universe xD
Date: 02/09/10 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 10
This chapter wasn't horrible at all. I enjoyed it :) I think their relationship is developing hahaha. But I wouldn't exactly know since I've never been in one xD but it just seems like it's developing.
Author's Response: Haha thank you very much ^__^ (p.s don't worry, I'm not writing from experience, I've never been in a relationship either >___<)
Date: 02/09/10 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 10
urgh this story is so sexy, i just love Tom in a job that he's working with his hands. builder, handyman, mechanic. Mmm. Nomnomnomnom. *goofy smile* every time you add a new chapter i swear to god i read the whole thing all over again.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Haha I like imagining Tom as a builder. Very fun to write haha. Aw wooow you have no idea how much I loved reading that, thank you so much! *love*
Date: 02/09/10 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love this story! I just found it. Your Tom is completely wonderful. And I love the care they take with each other. I don't think this argument came out of nowhere, it sounded completely authentic to me. I could just feel the dread that Bill had pooling in his stomach. Ahhh! And how scared he was, and then Tom trying to make it better and guh! They are so wonderful together. Love it, two thumbs up.
Author's Response: Aw thank you so so much! ^_^ I loved your review, it made me beam :D Thank you very much!
Date: 02/09/10 10:55 am Title: Chapter 10
Lovely chappie. Even though I was a bit scared when they fought.
moremoremoremoremoremoremore! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so so much! ^_^
Date: 02/09/10 09:13 am Title: Chapter 10
A little bit of drama and a little bit of lovin'---loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much ^_^
Date: 02/09/10 08:06 am Title: Chapter 10
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! *dances* Chapter 10 is up :D:D
As much as I would love to read it right now.. I can't :( School is ... UGH! yeah I have to go to school. But I'll read it as soon as I get home okay???
Love youu
Xoxoxox
Author's Response: Hahahah aw I love you xD
Date: 02/09/10 06:08 am Title: Chapter 10
it was different but good. and the ending was sweet and hot. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much ^_^
Date: 02/08/10 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
Please write more soon! Luved this chapter
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 02/08/10 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 10
PLZ darlng more
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing ^^
Date: 02/08/10 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 10
I think the argument was fine and easy to relate to. It didn't seem like it came from nowhere like you feared, because you showed that Bill was having a bad day and was stewing over it the whole time, and then he was just set off and blew up. But the ending scene...two fingers without lube is not sexy--it's PAINFUL.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yeah, I know not to do that again, thanks for telling me ^^
Date: 02/08/10 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 10
is tom trying to get bill's designs noticed????
Author's Response: *mouth is shut* thanks for reading ^^