Date: 05/18/10 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 14
I can't leave a long comment because I have to study for two tests.
:):):)
LOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEE IT!!
And youuu of course :D
But... but do we get sexy shirtless Tomi next time??? *grin*
Author's Response: Maybe *winks* thanks for the review Anouk!
Date: 05/18/10 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 14
Gosh I love the interaction between Bill
and Tom in this fic. The dialogues are
awesome, they appear so real but still every
word seems to be carefully placed to give us
the right mood of how things are being said
without using too much of description.
Please update soon I love this
Author's Response: Wow, what a kind and amazing review! Thank you :) I'm really glad you like the dialogue, that's definitely one of my main worries, I never think it sounds genuine, so it's a wonderful boost to hear such lovely things from you ^___^ I should update soon enough :) I have about half of the next chapter written out. Really, thank you so so much for such lovely words :)
Date: 05/18/10 11:13 am Title: Chapter 14
sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^
Date: 05/17/10 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 14
I'm a total fluff fan too so of course it was okay ! I was really happy to see a new chapter for this fic ! Can't wait for the next one ! =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) It should be up A LOT sooner than this update was o__O Thank you hunny!
Date: 05/17/10 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 14
wow, that is an lovely and funny chapter. I wonder what will happen next between the two love birds.
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it ^___^
Date: 05/17/10 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 14
Aw the whole paint scene was really cute. And im so happy that you updated.
And what movie are you thinking of letting them watch?
Your an awsome author, and I really, REALLY enjoy your writing.
And poor Tom believing Bill would actually let him have him, and then just walk away. 8
Author's Response: Aw woow what an absolutely LOVELY review, thank you so much ^__^ Well I actually don't know, I should have done an "ask the audience" type thing, I guess I'll have to see what movies are on xD Woow really, thank you so much for your kind words, take care :)
Date: 05/17/10 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 14
OMTH ONLY TWO CHAPTERS LEFT? :O
its going to be so sad seeing this one go. especially because ever since ive started reading this, the thought of a construction working Tom:
d e l i c i o u s o (:
& You already know how wonderful fluffy stuff is, so i won't repeat that some more xD
Bill = BIGGEST TEASE EVER.
I dont think he should have accepted to prove Tom wrong, he has an upperhand with his flawless breathtaking beauty.
I automatically award one point to Tomi lol.
Im definitely looking foward to the next chapter, i wonder what type of Movie Bill & Tom will see. & will Bill finally go all the way with Tom? o.o
Wonderful Chapter Hunny (:
-----Samantha
Author's Response: Hmmm yummy, no? I think I may have to return to these characters, topless Builder Tom is rather tasty. Haha you and me both love a bit of fluff ^__^ Damn straight Sammi, you said it. He's a sinfully goodlooking guy! Thank you so much darling, I'm glad you liked it. I hope to get the next part up soon. I do so adore your reviews, thanks love. Take care! Xx
Date: 05/17/10 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 14
I LOVE FLUFF!!!! :D it's a nice word too...fluff. hahaha. I knew Tom was going to wipe paint on Bill's nose XD
Author's Response: Aw I'm glad you share my love for fluff ^___^ it's a fabulous thing, no? Hmm you do? What dirty minds we all have xD Thank you and take care :)
Date: 05/17/10 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 14
AAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA!!!!!!!
YOU NEED TO RIGHT MORE! FOR GOODNESS SAKES THIS IS SO GOOD EMILY! YOU HAVE COMPLETED MY NIGHT!!!!!! :)
AH! AH! AHHHH! BILL AND TOM ARE SO CUTE!
and your teasing me again : I WANT THEM TO...AGH! :D THEY MUST BE SMUTTY! I WANT SMUT SMUT SMUT!!! :)
I love this.
I love you.
I would LOVE more soon?
I'll keep motivating if I have too!! :)
I LOVE YOU. YOU ARE MINE! YOUR LOVE IS MY DRUG :)
Author's Response: Haha I'm glad you liked it, I thought it was a bit weak but eeeeh if you're happy, then so am I :) I shall have more up ASAP. Which depends for me xD but only two more parts to go :O SMUT SHALL ENSUE. Don't you worry :) You are mine Xx
Date: 04/17/10 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 13
Can't wait for the next chapter!I love this story.And all the others!Excellent job.
Author's Response: Aw thank you so so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm lacking inspiration or motivation to write anything atm but hopefully the next chapter should be up soon ^___^ Take care :)
Date: 04/04/10 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 13
lol more!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :)
Date: 04/03/10 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 13
YES YES YES!! EMILY. I LOVE TO DEATH!
Tom .. shirtless! That's what I've been waiting for... Was he sweaty too? xD
:o that sounds like a nice colour for his bedroom! It's so Bill like haha. I wish I had a bigger room so I could paint mine dark purple. But mine is pretty small so it'll look extra dark. I don't want that.
Hahahahaha Nathalie always asking him about his sex life. *shakes head* so curious :P
Awee, poor Tom. I have no idea what exactly he was doing and why... because I just don't understand the electical thingies.. But he seemed to be having problems which is why I said "poor Tomi" hehe. Anywayy...
*drools* shirtless Tom...... :D
Lucky, lucky Bill! Not fair haha.
Yaaay. Tom is painting tomorrow! With or without a shirt? (hint: without, please) Awee, Bill fell :'(
:o.... stay the night.. does that mean sexy time? :o :):):) hehe.
LOVE IT! and you.. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one :D
Xoxoxoxxo
Author's Response: Haha thank you darling! I'm glad you liked it ^___^ Tom may or may not have a shirt... you'll have to read and find out when I post :D
Date: 03/31/10 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 13
Haha I just imagine Bill painting and it's a really funny mental image ! They are so cute together, can't wait for more !
Author's Response: Haha sweet ^.^ Thank you for reading & reviewing! :Drnrn
Date: 03/31/10 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 13
sweet story. i'm puting popcorn in the microwave for the next chappie!
Author's Response: Hehe thanks! ^.^
Date: 03/31/10 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 13
That was awesome...
Ahh wow sex is gonna happen isn't it? Yaaaay!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! ^.^ Perhaps... :P
Date: 03/31/10 11:30 am Title: Chapter 13
Oooh! Is it gonna be sexy time?
Author's Response: Perhaps... xD Thank you for reading!
Date: 03/31/10 12:25 am Title: Chapter 13
Yay! Sleepover! Ha ha. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 03/31/10 12:08 am Title: Chapter 13
ahh! now you MUST update FASTER!!!! XD
Author's Response: Haha thank you so much! xD
Date: 03/30/10 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
Haha... I was probably one of the only people who know what Rugby is, cause I'm from Australia LOL :) I love this story sooooooooooooooooooooo much! Good job!
Author's Response: Haha awesome! I'm glad it made sense to someone! :D I'm so happy you're enjoying it, thank you so so much! ^.^
Date: 03/30/10 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 13
Ahh!! They are Tooo Cute!! I Love this!!
Looking Forward to more :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D