Date: 12/14/09 09:52 am Title: 2 - Lubricant
"Astroglide?" Georg whistled. "That stuff could get a Cadillac into a dog house." That's my favourite line! Hahaha XD
Oooh this story is so cute. And is this Catholic!Tom? So cute!!!!! ;D I love it. Partially cos I'm Catholic too XD but yes, it's awesome to read about an innocent and holy Tom every once in a while. Loves! More to come soon? ;D
Altar Boy! :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the line, it made me happy. Catholic Tom is so one of my favorites so far :D
Date: 12/14/09 04:29 am Title: 1 - Welcome
Love this story. I love all the characterizations, especially Tom's. I love how you're making Tom win his pendant back. :P
I just realized how many times I said "love" in this review. It's 3:30 in the morning and I need sleep. ;)
Author's Response: Love is a good word though. And I love that you love this XD
Date: 12/14/09 01:42 am Title: 2 - Lubricant
I absolutely love this so far. I feel bad for Tom, even though the way you've written him and how easy he is to pick on is making me laugh so much. XD Definitely looking forward to the next part! :3
Author's Response: He's so incredibly easy to make fun of in this story, isn't he? XD
Date: 12/14/09 01:41 am Title: 2 - Lubricant
Bahaha.. sneaky Bill. ;) I wonder what the ticket lady said by "He's at it again". :D Very excited to read the rest of this! :D
Author's Response: Oh, you'll soon see. I promise.
Date: 12/14/09 01:39 am Title: 2 - Lubricant
*grins* this is getting better by the second, love. god i've got to stop being so old and calling people love. ANYWAYS, this was amazing, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Oh, I call people love all the time. No prob. I'm glad you like it!
Date: 12/14/09 01:26 am Title: 2 - Lubricant
I have a feeling that Bill will cause Tom to take the lord's name in vain more than one time. XD
Author's Response: Oh, you just wait, sugar. You just wait =]
Date: 12/07/09 05:51 pm Title: 1 - Welcome
That was really cool! I defiantly cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 12/07/09 01:34 am Title: 1 - Welcome
*sqeaul* Oh my god finally!!!!*happy dance*
Awesomest freak show ever except for the clowns they were cool but creepy as heck!!!=D
The performances were so epic and amazing especially the last one. Go Lady and the Lizard!!
Tomi is such a goody two shoes it's cute!=P
Author's Response: Oh, you know you love Tom as a goody two-shoes. It's so OOC but I love it :P
Date: 12/07/09 12:19 am Title: 1 - Welcome
Ooh, this is fascinating so far. So much beautiful and disturbing mental imagery - I think I'd enjoy that show, if I could make it through the clowns without fainting in terror. Love it, and I can't wait to see whether Tom gets his pendant back!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you so much! Oh, I know, the clowns are scary X[ I tried not to dwell on them but they were so gruesome I had to write them.
Date: 12/06/09 10:57 pm Title: 1 - Welcome
I love it! It's so interesting but kinda creepy...not too creepy but just enough to have you subtely moving closer to the computer screen...thumbs up!
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words!
Date: 12/06/09 10:31 pm Title: 1 - Welcome
This is really interesting! the way you describe the acrobats made me think maybe you had written it from a video you'd seen or something and I thought you'd have one attached. So good! I can't wait for the next part. :D
Author's Response: No, no video. I was just thinking about all the cirque du soleil stuff I've seen on TV. I'm really glad that you like it ^____^
Date: 12/06/09 09:27 pm Title: 1 - Welcome
i enjoyed this GREATLY. i usually enjoy circuses sans the animals and clowns, but this made me smile and call Tom a pussy, and i can't wait for the rest ^_^
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Awww, Tom's not a pussy! He's Catholic! He can't help it! XD
Date: 12/06/09 09:19 pm Title: 1 - Welcome
dude you amaze me every time and damn it tom shouldnt be so goody goody
Author's Response: HE IS GOODY GOODY FOR A REASON. ROLL WITH IT MUH BRUTHA!
Date: 12/06/09 09:14 pm Title: 1 - Welcome
I saw the pendant eventually getting stolen if that's what you mean!
I love it so far, and you're such a great writer too!
hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Hahaha, of course. Thank you so much for the kind words!
Date: 12/06/09 09:06 pm Title: 1 - Welcome
Haha, this is great. I like it a lot. Making Bill the Lizard [I'm assuming that's who he is, since if he's not I'd have no idea who he was] was pretty cool, and I'd like to see where this goes. Your writing is very descriptive, too, and I could see everything that was happening :]
Can't wait for the other three parts x]
Author's Response: Yes, you are correct in your assumptions ^__^ I'm glad you like it, especially since I cranked it out in like... four days XD