Date: 12/07/09 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 1: And It Begins.
Scary shit. Reminds me distantly of Orwell's 1984. I'm not sure if I'm in the exact target group for this, but I will definitely follow. I was actually a bit surprised about your writing style here, because it was so.. sci-fi. I haven't been use to it from you. It's good though. Nice job, interesting start... I'm curious to see, how this will turn out. After all, I always enjoy reading writings from you :)
Author's Response: I've read other stuff from Orwell, but not 1984, although I plan on going to the library and taking it out tomorrow morning. I didn't really have a target audience for this, tbh, cause I tend to be the type of reader that reads anything that looks interesting, so I hope that my readers do the same LOL.
I'm glad you like the writing style though. Dude, I haven't written like this in YEARS. it was hard to remind myself that I had to write almost clinically, but in the end, it worked. hopefully. And I'm glad you're gonna stick around with this one, I hope that it'll be a good experience for you.
Date: 12/06/09 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: And It Begins.
I haven't even read it yet but, I love that song!
...Now I'll go back and actually read the story. lol
Author's Response: LOLOL. i'm glad you love the song...now I just hope you love the story too xD
Date: 12/06/09 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1: And It Begins.
Mina loves.
Just so you know.
13,473,241,329,487,320,951/10 stars :D
Author's Response: i'm glad you do bb <3333
Date: 12/06/09 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 1: And It Begins.
This is interesting!
Author's Response: awww, thank you <33333
Date: 12/06/09 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 1: And It Begins.
I still say they're awesome and needed to be posted!
LOVE THIS STORY, BUT YOU ALREADY KNOW THIS!
Kicks MY nano's ass in any case!! Can't wait for the next part. You teased me enough with it! -__-
<33333 YAY MONSTER!
Author's Response: LOL. well they are, so YAY and yesh, I know, I'm just happy that I can post this for you ^_^ and noooo dude your nano is WIN. it just happens to be a bitch as well xD
Date: 12/06/09 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1: And It Begins.
*reviews* I read again, and it was JUST as good, if not better than the first time ^_^
Author's Response: *giggles and responds* YAY i'm glad you still like it. i made MINOR changes to it before posting it (the beginning was pissing me off LOL) but i just hope that the awesome will stay as we get further into the story lol.
Date: 12/06/09 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1: And It Begins.
O.M.G. I cannot wait to read more of this!
This looks like the start of an AMAZING AU.
And there's going to be Tom/Samy? I'm totally joining you in flutterclapping right now
Author's Response: gah the Tom/Samy was supposed to be a minor-pairing, cause this is all about Tom and Bill and their....weirdness LOL, but yea, a bit of Tom/Samy...back history, whatever.
but anways, I'm glad you like it and can't wait to read more. I'm eager to post more xD