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Reviewer: pureblood_queen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/10 09:16 pm Title: Prologue

*squee* I won't bother asking any questions because I have a feeling that they will be answered later on in the story. I love the direction you are taking the story. POST MOAR! :D

Author's Response: thanks! : D yeah, they'll be answered ^^

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/21/10 08:16 pm Title: Flowers

I really wanna hug Bill because he's simply adorable!

And I have a feeling that Tom should be paying attention to his dreams a bit more, because seeing this horse IS A MESSAGE OF SOME SORT! *shakes him*

Author's Response: *shakes him too* Thank you <3

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/10 08:02 pm Title: Flowers

omfg. luka? whos that? plz more i need more bill and tom damn it haha

Author's Response: You'll see ^^ Thanks for reviewing:D

Reviewer: bobbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/10 07:51 pm Title: Flowers

Gasp. DONT HIT HIM TOM! That boys aboosive O_o lol jk. But Bill is so sweet! Simone is the only intelligent one there, clearly, because she can see that! Kiss him again, Bill, kiss him! XD Updaaate

Author's Response: hahahahah go Simone :D Thanks for the review! <3

Reviewer: JumbieLuv Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/10 07:46 pm Title: Flowers

OH YEAH!! Bill and Tom sitting in a tree. K-i-s-s-i-n-g!!! Sry but i'm just uber excited right now :D

Author's Response: Wooo : D thank you!

Reviewer: TouchoftheWind Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/10 06:53 am Title: Cold Showers

Poor Bill getting his hand slapped- and poor Tom for having to deal with all this...since Bill was able to buy that jacket and buy coffee at school I am thinking that his parents are dead but were wealthy leaving him alone but with money...I think he will probably live in a big old house in the woods on his own...

You really should have Gordon meet Bill now- maybe Bill is at the mall wandering and singing outloud and Gordon hears his voice?

Author's Response: Hmm, yeah, that's not aaaaall that far off :) Thanks :D

Reviewer: bobbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/10 05:11 am Title: Cold Showers

Aww. Dont slap his hand, Tom! Stoopid betch! POOR BILLLAAA. He didn't meaaaaan itt :(

AHH IM SO IN LOVE WITH U FOR UPDATING! *hugs* Thank u thank u thaaanku

Author's Response: Awwww :') No problem! Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/10 09:08 pm Title: Cold Showers

plzpzlpzlpzzlp omg...y plz more=]

Author's Response: yup ^^

Reviewer: Kina Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/10 06:46 pm Title: Cold Showers

Whoa... Intense chapter. Sigh. And now even more questions have sprung up! Where did Bill get the money? How did Bill know about Tom's sister? (Cos I'm not convinced he was just guessing.) Why the hell does Bill shower only in the rain or the lake? And so many more questions. Haha. You do a fantastic job of confusing me and making me so irritated, because I don't understand, that I just want to read more, more, more!

I loved the chapter. I kinda wish Tom would have excepted the jacket, but I understand why he didn't. And is it strange that I find Bill reading the dictionary adorable? (There's another question: WHY does he read the dictionary?) Hmm... and I wonder about what Georg said. Is it possible Tom has a crush on Bill? Humdihumdy, humdidumdy. I guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter, ne? I can't wait to see what happens next! (How shall Bill apologize? Hmm...) I shall be patiently awaiting the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Those questions will be answered soon! : D He did expect the jacket, he just didn't except something that expensive ^^ Thank you! I'm glad you like it :D

Reviewer: lostmymind Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/10 06:11 pm Title: Cold Showers

mfdsjfrekjfkjjjfkcd9foomfgSKI. fucking hell anette jeg dør. Bill is too awesome and Tom is just..... eh

And I love this story so fjsfie much and I wanna watch bill take a bath in the lake or shower in the rain :O I wanna watch thaaaat... *whine*

And.... btw skulle det der som var i jeg-person være kursiv enkli? det ble litt confusing. Men årner seg! 8D
Så lenge Billka & Tomski tar på seg dress og brudekjole og gifter seg såååå årner alt seg ^^ Or something XD

Well I can't wait for another chapterrrrrr *u*

Author's Response: hahaha takktakk : DD Og nei, det skulle ikke være i kursiv ^^ XD

Reviewer: AmyJean76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/10 05:59 pm Title: Cold Showers

Awwwww. :( Poor Bill. Poor Tom. =/ I have no words, really. But I do love this, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
I also can't wait for some answers! But then again, the more questions, the more I'll be giddy when I get answers. Even if it takes a long time. Hm, that didn't make much sense.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D

Reviewer: JumbieLuv Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/10 05:54 pm Title: Cold Showers

I can't believe this story doesn't have like a million reviews!?! What's going on guys geez! Haha but anyway loving this story and can't wait for more! I'm determined to get more people to read this story because seriously they don't know what they're missing!! Next time someone asks what story they should read im totally going to say this one! Can't wait for more!! Love Love Love this story! ok im going to stop talking now before I go over the limit or something.. :D

Author's Response: Thank you! :'D Aww, your review made me so happy! *dances*

Reviewer: anachan87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/10 05:30 pm Title: Cold Showers

Next chapter: Bill apologizes in his own way.


...can I haz it nau? *puppy eyes* Seriously, NOW I'M REALLY INTERESTED INTO THE STORY. Yes, the caps was needed.

Author's Response: You can haz it soon! :D Thank yoooou <33

Reviewer: bobbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/10 02:02 am Title: Stuck like Glue

Im so shocked that this isnt one of your more popular stories..this is seriously one of THEE best that I've read. I'm completely hooked!!!

Aww, poor Billa! The last chapter had me wanting to bang Tom 'Thomas' upside the head for his blindness. HE SHOULD BE MORE OBSERVANT. TO BILL. YEAH.

AND MORE FRIENDLY. Like whut the eff. I'd stuff Bill in my closet and never let him out if he was in my bus (if I RODE a school bus). And not because he's Bill Kaulitz or anything. If there was a kid like your Bill in this story I'D TOOOOTALLY befriend him. And force him to look in a mirror, haha! xD But I guess I know where Tom --excuse me, Thomas is coming from.

Okay, end of rant. Sorry. Just totally into this story. *SQUEE* IM LOOKING FORWARD TO THIS STORY AHH!! You're my favorite author. Hands down.

Author's Response: Thank you!! <3 So so much! :'D Awww. I hope you like the next chapter, and the rest of the story :)

Reviewer: lostmymind Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/10 09:38 am Title: Dictionary Guy

“Come on,” Georg teased. “I know you liked it. You play for both teams, that one must be perfect for you! It’s like a mix.”

“It? That’s mean, even for you,” Thomas said and frowned.

“Yeah, I realized, but I didn’t mean it like that, sorry Dictionary Guy,”

heeeehee :'D *lese det beste pånytt*

Author's Response: hahahaha awwww :'D

Reviewer: AmyJean76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/10 09:26 am Title: Stuck like Glue

I like this alot. It's just confusing right now, which could explain the lack of popularity.
I look forward to the coming chapters! And some answers. XD

Author's Response: yeah, I understand that ^^ Answers will come, I just had to write like this (slow) so I wouldn't run out of things to write before I got to 50 000 words, since this was NaNo xD

Reviewer: Kina Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/10 02:32 am Title: Stuck like Glue

So many questions! What's up with the horse? With Bill? Where does Bill live? Why doesn't he want Tom to see where he lives? Who, or what, is Luka?

I loved this chapter. I can't really describe why. It was just so... real. Like I could see it playing out in my head.

I'm really loving this story, and I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D All of those questions will be answered in a few chapters ^__^

Reviewer: ReadyxSetxGoxTHx13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/10 06:59 pm Title: Stuck like Glue

I don't really think those are the reasons why bill is mad at tom but it's just a hunch. Poor tom must be so confused with bills sudden mood swings. Oh well I can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you, will update soon :D

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/10 06:04 pm Title: Stuck like Glue

Im feeling bad for Bill. I really want Tom to be a bit more friendly to him.

I really like this! Update soon!

Author's Response: Awww, but Tomi's got issues, he can't help iiit :'''D haha xD Thank you!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/03/10 03:08 pm Title: Stuck like Glue

It may not be popular but I quite happen to like it! ^^

I am so intrigued by Bill and this is the first chapter where Tom doesn't see the horse, which of course, now it has me thinking about it more and with the need to go back to read earlier chapters, just to find a coincidence somewhere. But I do love it!

My own NaNoWriMo fic is still a point of contention with me and it. It's a love/hate relationship and clearly not everyone is going to read it/is reading it. But I'll continue to post it, because there's people that DO want to read it and liked it. So I implore you to continue posting on this one! I really like it. XD

Author's Response: Wow, thank yoooou!! *_____* There should be a connection somewhere yes, if I haven't messed up x_X And yeah, I know what you mean about the love/hate relationship, I feel the same way. This was a pain, and it's still not finished, but almost. Yeah, I'll continue to post this, because I rather like it myself and I'm quite proud that I made it to the finish line :D

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