Date: 12/18/17 12:48 pm Title: Late
this sounds like a good story!
i hope you update it soom
Date: 12/10/11 12:22 am Title: Truth
I'm leaving a legitimate question here, so don't get too irritated.
Was Tom telling flashback type things to Bill? The ones of Jenny's death and his and Georg's sleepover? Or was he just thinking that?
Author's Response: Don't mind me, just replying to this review after a million months (hadn't seen it before, sorry) and it's probably not even relevant anymore but whatever xD I had to go reread it myself to remember, but yeah, he was telling Bill.
Date: 12/10/11 12:04 am Title: Late
HUHOH!
Guess who's still here?
Date: 10/05/11 12:59 am Title: Late
more more more plese i gotta know how this ends -camps out at lappy till next one is posted-
Date: 08/11/11 05:25 am Title: Late
Oh, hey. What's going on?
Since you couldn't see me, I was leaning up against a brick wall, decked out in 50s attire when I said that. It was cool.
Anyway, yeah. Still here.
Date: 07/05/11 02:09 am Title: Late
I...I just died with this story. I LOVE IT *____________*
Please please please, I need to read more or Im gonna die. Ok no, But I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!
Date: 06/21/11 06:51 am Title: Late
Please you should update this wonderful story! *__*
Date: 05/30/11 02:59 am Title: Prologue
Oh, snap.
Guess who's still here?
I am.
I refuse to give up.
Author's Response: Awww! Thank you for still being here, I haven't forgotten this story. I'll come back to it!
Date: 05/11/11 09:35 am Title: Late
pppleaaaaaaaaase write further D:
Date: 05/10/11 05:03 pm Title: Home
I realllyyyyyyyy loooove this story *_*
Date: 05/09/11 01:06 pm Title: Stuck like Glue
I think it's almost as good as 815 ;o but then again, you're a great writer! i just loooooooove you're way of writing! :D keep on going!
Date: 04/14/11 09:39 am Title: Late
Pretty pretty please, update!
Date: 02/07/11 12:53 am Title: Late
wow...I have no idea how I missed thisbeing updated...*goes and checks the day it was updated*...OHHH I see...I was in the hospital for nearly two weeks and that would've been my second day admitted...no internet access there and once I was out it must have just gotten lost in the ekerfluffle of catching up on my reading and the holidays...very sorry it took me so long to read the update.
It was a super good chapter. I kind of liked Bill getting all upset and pissed...and him in class was cute.
I enjoyed how Tom was all guilty for kissing Bill. I think he might be blowing this "bill might be straight" thing a touch out of proportion. Bill said he knows why the kiss in books, so he must have some idea, even if it isnt terribly clear to him he knows Tom likes him, and he didn't want Tom to apologise for it, and in fact kissed Tom himself.
So, I think Tom should approach it as a question, like "Well, when you look at girls does your belly feel kinda weird?, like butterflies are flying around, or kinda tingly?" and whatever the answer is ask the same question about boys. He could even strategically and slip himself into the boy question.Whatever the answer to the first, let us hope the answer to the second is yes. Just an idea incase you needed some. I don't know if you did or not, just thought I would throw it out there.
that poor French teacher, i feel bad for him not having anyone really interested in his class. I would probably shoot myself.
I really enjoyed this update and I am terribly sorry it took me so long to get to it. I look forward to the next update! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Awww, that's completely okay! Don't worry about it :'D Hope you're okay, with the hospital and all D: Yes, Tom is definitely a very paranoid character and is blowing it out of proportion. And in fact, I've had the next scenes done in forever, and it goes quite similar to what you wrote here - he asks some other questions, but it's the same idea for the most part ^^ Thanks a lot!
Date: 02/07/11 12:48 am Title: Late
wow...I have no idea how I missed thisbeing updated...*goes and checks the day it was updated*...OHHH I see...I was in the hospital for nearly two weeks and that would've been my second day admitted...no internet access there and once I was out it must have just gotten lost in the ekerfluffle of catching up on my reading and the holidays...very sorry it took me so long to read the update.
It was a super good chapter. I kind of liked Bill getting all upset and pissed...and him in class was cute.
I enjoyed how Tom was all guilty for kissing Bill. I think he might be blowing this "bill might be straight" thing a touch out of proportion. Bill said he knows why the kiss in books, so he must have some idea, even if it isnt terribly clear to him he knows Tom likes him, and he didn't want Tom to apologise for it, and in fact kissed Tom himself.
So, I think Tom should approach it as a question, like "Well, when you look at girls does your belly feel kinda weird?, like butterflies are flying around, or kinda tingly?" and whatever the answer is ask the same question about boys. He could even strategically and slip himself into the boy question.Whatever the answer to the first, let us hope the answer to the second is yes. Just an idea incase you needed some. I don't know if you did or not, just thought I would throw it out there.
that poor French teacher, i feel bad for him not having anyone really interested in his class. I would probably shoot myself.
I really enjoyed this update and I am terribly sorry it took me so long to get to it. I look forward to the next update! Keep up the amazing work!
Date: 01/30/11 05:22 pm Title: Prologue
Nope.
Still find this story awesome.
Date: 01/29/11 07:20 am Title: Late
AAAW, please please, pretty please please, update? :3
Date: 01/08/11 12:24 am Title: Late
Oooh, man. Bill is like that bright kid that never comes to class out of boredom, but could like, be a rocket scientist if he payed attention XD only that, lol, Bill doesn't really get to pay attention in the first place. And you, you, you get my heart beating very irregularly with all this sweetness >: that's dangerous!
I understand why Tom might be worried about the whole sexuality thing, but meh, I guess I'm just one of those people who think "true love doesn't discriminate" XD, knowing Tom though he'll obsess over it until his brain fries. XD
I am still complete lost at Bill's source of income. Knowing he's not selling anything, and that he did not appear in his dead uncle's will meeting and hauled a whole fortune with him (did he? XD), where does it come from? I know he 'borrowed' books, but he also clearly stated the whole process of him getting the clothes, plus stealing from a brand store is no easy feet o.o Ohh, im curious.
This fanfic is seriously heartwarming ^^ I had so many things to say for each chapter but I didn't want to flood you with brain storming every 10 minutes XD and that stupid horse... oh, man. I mean, no matter how you look at it, it really does make Tom crazy. He even hears it. XD There are still so many things left unanswered! I can't wait! So I hope you're not slacking off on this gem, since you have so many of them. XD Thanks, till next time? ;P
oooh, P.S. Tom's parents seem awfully.. Chill and shiz during 'normal hours'. In my experience, if they fought off-hours, their shitty moods circulate for daaays at a time haha XD but meh ;P I especially seem to like his Dad here, he just seems really, really awesome. XD
Date: 01/07/11 09:27 pm Title: Stuck like Glue
I'm still in the middle of reading this, but I just had to comment. AGAIN XD
I am seriously in love with this. I very much love the Tom you created here, he has this gentle, very boyish attitude to him. Honestly, when I imagine Tom, he looks like a 12 year old to me. XD He's just so adorable. Bill is way older for some reason, I think I get why now, people who keep big secrets have this sense of maturity in them, even if Bill is as silly as he is XD And I am WAY curious about the horse, at first I thought Tom's eyes were playing a trick on him and it was Bill on that road, but that theory crashed once I actually stopped to think. This kind of fanfic is really my weakness, I am in love with Crazy!Bill and need as much as I need breathing. XD And with you writing one, it really couldn't have been better. I'll go back to reading now! XD Have a great day ;D I'll spam you again once I read Chapter 15. If I'll hold off until then. XD
Date: 01/07/11 06:48 pm Title: Prologue
The genius that I am(cough), I finally realized you would've wrote other awesome things, and BAM, I hit jackpot. I just read the prologue, but man, I am already feeling for Tom really, reeaally bad. I'm not sure what's expecting me at all, but even if there are no actual unicorns (Although damn, I would've loved Bill being one, like in 12 kingdoms ;D), I can definitely imagine Bill being one. XD
Well, now I'll go read the rest of it ;3