Date: 12/02/09 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol oh dear, what is tom to do? i love it XD
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 12/02/09 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this. There were a few grammatical errors (or they could have been typos), but otherwise it was fine! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I'm not too hot with my grammar (and typing) I'm sorry about that! Thanks for reading though ^_^
Date: 12/02/09 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this!
Please don't make me wait to long, I must have more! lol
=)
Author's Response: Thank you! rnDon't worry, it's almost done so it'll be up soon ^_^
Date: 12/02/09 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this! It's very well written, and DAMN, that was hot, lol. I can't wait to see what happens next! I'm tracking this gem. :)
Author's Response: Ooh wow thank you so so much :D rnI'll be getting the next part up very soon! rnAw thank you so so much, you put a smile on my face ^^
Date: 12/02/09 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it! Pretty stupid thing for Bill to do though. Some crossdressers get seriously beat up or even killed for that! I can't wait to see Tom's reaction, and I really hope he isn't mean to Bill.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review ^^
Date: 12/02/09 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think it sounds nice and I would like to read more :)
xx
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 12/02/09 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol that was great, I can't wait to read what would tom do?
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 12/02/09 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
uh-oh...I'm sitting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! It'll be up soon ^_^
Date: 12/02/09 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohhh!!! Good story. And on my birthday! :D lolz
Update soon pretty please?! I'm excited to know wats next. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so so much ^_^ rnOoh HAPPY BIRTHDAY! I hope you have a good one! rnI'll be sure to. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 12/02/09 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Damn! That was fast but so freaking good! I hope Tom doesnt push Bill out! Oh my goodness i cant wait for the next part! SOON?! lol!
Author's Response: Ooh thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it ^_^ rnI'll update as soon as I can, I hope I manage to get it right! Thank you :)
Date: 12/02/09 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
cool please update this story was awesome
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 12/02/09 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Uh oh, this can't be good.
WHAT A CLIFFIE!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading :)
Date: 12/02/09 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
yes thats what u get...i tried warnin u bill...bt wud u listen NOOO u jst let ur desire take over
hey man i cant wait 4 this to continue...it will be amazin to see hw tom reacts later!!!!!
Author's Response: Haha thanks for your review, it made me chuckle xD rnI hope I get Tom's reaction right, I've never written anything like this before o.O
Date: 12/02/09 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
LMFAO!!
Cant wait for more! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much ^_^rnI'll update ASAP!