Date: 12/03/09 03:34 pm Title: [2]
Tom, you jackass! Are you going to tell more about Bill's date for the dinner in future chapters? I just really want to know if it is someone Bill is there with or what. You have me totally hooked already!
Loved all the descriptions in this chapter. I can totally picture the ship and the spa, etc. Oh, and I love the word 'plume' :) Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: I know, bad Tom! And, we find out about Bill's date, a bit. ;) (This is the problem with me responding to reviews a bit late...by now you've already found out.)
Thank you so much! I'm really happy to hear that it's coming across clearly. I may post a pic for visual aide for the next chapter. ;)
Date: 12/03/09 02:05 pm Title: [1]
I'm so excited about this story! Hope Bill will be at the dinner, too. I think it will be fun to see how Tom does on his little date with Mia!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Oh yes, Bill was definitely at the dinner. ;D Tom's not going to be able to avoid bumping into him! ...I felt kind of bad for Mia.
Date: 12/03/09 07:01 am Title: [2]
Lovely, so far. I can't wait to see where you take it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope very much it will satisfy. ♥
Date: 12/03/09 05:27 am Title: [2]
I THINK THEY ARE GOING TO DO IT.
Author's Response: Oh my god, they'd better. I didn't pound out nearly 40K to get cockblocked. :O
Date: 12/03/09 03:55 am Title: [2]
Ooooooh, I cannot wait for MORE. *_*
Author's Response: ME TOO. *_* ...I mean, thank you. *blush*
Date: 12/03/09 02:44 am Title: [2]
i'm absolutely sure that Tom's going to "break a near-thirty year streak of heterosexuality for one gorgeous boy"
so what is Bill doing on the ship? maybe he's on vacation too
Tom's sweet when he's shy and flustered
and Bill's a sex bomb on 2 feet
can't wait for Tom to get laid...
Author's Response: Darn, no one seems to believe Tom's commitment to his heterosexuality! I wonder why? ;D We'll find out what Bill's doing pretty soon. And god oh god, is Bill ever a sex bomb. :D Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/03/09 02:39 am Title: [2]
Whee, this is so entertaining, like watching an episode of Loveboat, but with better cast :) I hope Bill changes Tom's whole life, hah, that'd serve the grumpy guy right, a bit like Scrooge and all.
Author's Response: Yay, comment win. ♥ You've got a good idea where this is going! ;D
Date: 12/03/09 12:19 am Title: [2]
I really like this! The little details really make the story, and the imagery is amazing. I love how Tom isn't instantly falling for Bill, how he's attracted to him, but isn't going out of his way to impress him or anything. Or, at least, not yet? ;) lol. This story is so breathtaking. I can see everything in my mind so vividly because of the way you describe everything, down to the tiny details, something that I've always loved about your writing.
You have such a unique style, and I just can't get enough of it!
I look forward to reading the next chapter. :D
Author's Response: I'm so happy the details are coming across clearly. It was such a beautiful experience so I definitely wanted to capture the feel of it in a story - with a sexy added twin story! ;D I hope you continue to love it and the next chapter is up for your reading pleasure!
Date: 12/03/09 12:11 am Title: [2]
I love the way you describe Bill in this--it's so clear how smitten Tom is even though he won't admit it to himself. I can't wait for the rest! :)
Author's Response: Even as he keeps trying to tell himself he's not attracted, the way he thinks about him makes it pretty clear, right? :D Thank you! I can't wait to post the next chapter, it's gonna be fun~
Date: 12/02/09 11:39 pm Title: [2]
Tom really likes that place called Denial. Bill seems sweet but is still so mysterious and he's sure not taking any crap. I love it. :D
Author's Response: He likes it so much he's swimming in it. ;) Ohhh no, this Bill definitely takes no crap! I can't wait to post again, the next chapter is one of my favorites so far~
Date: 12/02/09 11:37 pm Title: [2]
i simply adored the blue of desire and am so excited to have another story of yours to follow so soon. this is great so far, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Awesome, I am so incredibly pleased! :) And I'm going to try to stay on top of reviews for this one. Another chapter is up - hope you're still with me! :D
Date: 12/02/09 10:13 pm Title: [2]
"It wasn't as though he was going to break a near-thirty year streak of heterosexuality for one gorgeous boy."
HA! Oh but you are!!!
Interesting...
Author's Response: *grins* Yeah, I think we all know Tom's going to prove himself a liar...
Date: 12/02/09 09:48 pm Title: [2]
yes, please, Tom, I would love to see you go gay for Bill ;)
Am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oh god, don't we all. I think even Tom wants to see Tom go gay for Bill. ;D
Date: 12/02/09 09:43 pm Title: [2]
OH YES HE WILL. NO ONE CAN DENY BILL. NO ONEEEEEEE. Not even the angry rednecks from Bruno...
Can't wait for more. :3
Author's Response: Oh god, angry rednecks from Bruno...yeah, not even them. :D
And more is up~
Date: 12/02/09 09:38 pm Title: [2]
WELL, you managed to fuck up TWICE in less than 24 hrs. That has to be a record in someone's book, Tom. Really. However, Bill seems to be somewhat taken with you, but you're not being very open and inviting.
Might I advice breaking the streak regardless and take the chance? Might help with that tension you seem to have all over you, according to your masseuse anyway.
Can't wait to see Bill tell Tom exactly how it is now! WOOT!
Author's Response: Tom's a winner like that! I agree, it has to be some kind of record. Bill is destined to be Tom's combo breaker~ Next chapter is up - hope you like the "telling it how it is!" :D
Date: 12/02/09 09:23 pm Title: [2]
Oooh, Is Bill uhh, Untouched?
XD
Just want to know. Ooh, I love confusedcan'tgetwhatgenderhelikes!Tom
It turns at the end, He gets with Bill. Please upload!!
Author's Response: Ahaha, lol, no way. Well. In a certain way, but probably not the way you're thinking.
A good guess! We'll have to see where it takes us. =)
Date: 12/02/09 10:03 am Title: [1]
wicked chapter, hope you will post more soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you! More is up; hope you like it!
Date: 12/01/09 09:48 pm Title: [1]
i can't wait for this :D and ugh, tom shares my next birthday. crisis time.
Author's Response: :D I'm so pleased to hear it. Ugh, honestly, I'm still in denial that mine ever happened. 28 forever!
Date: 12/01/09 05:10 pm Title: [1]
WHOOH!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!! ANOTHER STORY!!! I love it!!! What the hell you mean, Twincest, Twincest-not related? Are you immplying that their somewhat related? O.O
YES YOU MUST POST EVERY OTHER DAY. HOW ABOUT 4 TIMES A WEEK?
Going on my tracker.
Author's Response: It means that the story will have twists. ;) You'll have to wait and find out! I'm definitely posting every day. Thanks for reviewing, I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 12/01/09 01:22 pm Title: [1]
Love it so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thanks for your review, next chapter is up. ;)