Date: 12/05/09 01:42 pm Title: [1]
I love all your stories.You are one of the best authors here.Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I am incredibly flattered that you think so! ♥
Date: 12/05/09 09:04 am Title: [3]
Who would've thought that Tom would be a night in shining armour, saving Bill! I'm glad to read that they're getting closer, it's all very cute. Gosh, it feels like Tom is the oldest person on the boat, with his thinking.
Author's Response: Tom would not have thought it! :D Yeah, Tom definitely has a curmudgeonly set to his thinking, he needs a Bill in his life. I'm so happy you're enjoying this, thank you for your review!
Date: 12/04/09 10:52 pm Title: [3]
Persuasive? Like...persuasive enough that Tom will let go of his heterosexuality? I sure hope so!
The UST here is so delicious *_* I was half hoping that Tom would curl up with him there, haha.
Author's Response: Bill is so, so persuasive. ;D
Thank you! I enjoyed upping the UST and I think Bill's feeling it, too.
Date: 12/04/09 07:37 pm Title: [3]
bill and tom here could be the angel and devil over the real twins' shoulders. very poignant.
Author's Response: Thank you, I like that comparison!
Date: 12/04/09 07:09 pm Title: [3]
Awwww. :3 Drunk Bill is so cute.. and way too trusting.. but it's a good thing Tom is more trustworthy than he seems. ;) Very cute chapter.. I enjoyed "hearing" Bill's opinion on Tom. :D Can't wait for the next chapter! ;)
Author's Response: I like to think that drunk Bill has good instincts. ;D He sent that creep packing, after all. And he was pretty blunt to Tom, but I think Tom needed to hear some of that! Thanks, I'm so glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 12/04/09 06:25 pm Title: [3]
awww love this story so much ! Cant wait for Sunday morning !!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I posted a little early for you guys. ;D
Date: 12/04/09 04:47 pm Title: [3]
Ohhhhh, it's so good! I'm so glad they had an opportunity to get to know each other a little better :) I'm still dying to know what Bill is doing on this cruise, especially now that I know he's alone, too. I love how Tom said "What about changing teams?" LOL! I wish Bill had been awake to hear that! Anyway, can't wait for the next update :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah, they definitely needed a little talk to break the ice. And Tom finally gets up the curiosity to ask Bill what he's doing there, next chapter. ;D *is behind on review responses* Tom was buzzed and sort of thinking out loud there, I'm not sure myself what would have happened if Bill had been awake!
Date: 12/04/09 04:44 pm Title: [3]
haha, I can totally see Bill holding fast to Tom's dreads. This was such a lovely chapter. Keep updating!
Author's Response: They're like a security blanket, so soft and touchable. ♥ Thank you! I'll keep updating, you keep reading! ;D
Date: 12/04/09 04:03 pm Title: [3]
*clapshand* Yay!!!
Another update!!! Could you spoiled us more? Wow. The description of Bill's nails really got to me, as in, I never thought of it as a French manicure, you know, just as him having black with white tips. Oh-oh, Tom's falling in LUV. I would like to say that the unknown guy somehow reminded me of Bushido. O.o
DON'T ASK ME HOW
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed! :D I've seen it referred to as a French manicure and I think that's pretty much the way we Americans refer to anything with one base color and a different tip color. Though the "classic" one is a neutral base with white tips. Tom is terrified of the "L" word, oh my! (...Maybe it was Bushido, maybe not.)
Date: 12/04/09 03:37 pm Title: [3]
This was such a great chapter. I loved the insight into Tom's motivations. I've felt that way, too, sadly. And I could honestly see Bill sitting there telling Tom those things. I also really enjoy how you write Tom's struggle with his attraction to Bill. I don't want the weekend to be over but I definitely look forward to Sunday! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah, Tom definitely has some issues to work through. And I've observed that sort of thing in human behavior and learned about it in training workshops, so it's fun to slip a little of Tom's armchair psychology in there. And Bill can have fun teaching him another perspective. ;D I wish I could post faster, myself, but a two-day gap isn't bad. :D
Date: 12/04/09 03:22 pm Title: [3]
It's freeeezing here, too! I love this fic and I can't wait to see them become closer and closer. *warms you*
Author's Response: Oh god why is it cold everywhere. *huddles into blankets* I like working on this because it reminds me of the Bahamas. ;_; And they will indeed become closer and closer! :D
Date: 12/04/09 03:02 pm Title: [3]
You go, Bill. XD Frosty will melt eventually and besides, he loves the sun more than he thinks he does. XD
Author's Response: Good call. ;D Thanks for your review hon!
Date: 12/04/09 12:58 pm Title: [3]
i like how Tom is so attracted to Bill even if he's straight...for now
ohhhh Bill read him good
i wonder what is Bill?
more please
Author's Response: Haha, I like the way you put that. ;) What is Bill, you mean, what does he do? We find out in the next chapter! Which is now posted. Thanks for your review!
Date: 12/04/09 12:15 pm Title: [3]
It's freezing here, too...but seeing an update made me feel all warm and fuzzy.
Author's Response: That makes me extremely happy to hear. ♥
Date: 12/04/09 11:04 am Title: [3]
"Scene" not "seen". *sorry for the double post*
Date: 12/04/09 11:03 am Title: [3]
Oooh, this was wonderful! I loved the seen with Tom watching Bill through the screen and then Tom coming to his rescue. *_* You describe Bill so well too--it's clear to see why Tom is falling for him. Can't wait till Sunday!
Author's Response: Thank you thank you! I enjoyed that visual. ♥ Yup, Tom is definitely falling for him; it's only a matter of time... :D
Date: 12/03/09 08:56 pm Title: [2]
I'm still stumped about the double warning but I'm sure it will be incredible as usual. But do I see a white suit in our future?
Author's Response: I can't say! What do you mean by white suit, though? Happy you're reading and I hope you continue to enjoy - next chapter is up! ;D
Date: 12/03/09 08:26 pm Title: [2]
Ohhh, another one of your AUs :D I'm in! I like the premise here, and I reaaaaaly want to see where all these hints about Tom's past and present are going.
Also, I love the fact that your Bill and Tom still have long hair and dreads *loves*
Author's Response: Yep yep! I hope you enjoy, and those will definitely come in to play! Ahh, I miss their hair so much. I've become accustomed to the 'rows but the dreadlocks were pure Tom. ;_; I'd just gotten IN the fandom and he ditched them, it was traumatic! ...enough about hair; the next chapter is up for your (hopeful) enjoyment!
Date: 12/03/09 08:05 pm Title: [2]
I've been having such a busy time at uni,discovering this story totally made my day.
I love how Tom's such a bitch, (so sexy-hexy!) and it's a good change since it's always Bill who's the bitch.
Can wait to read more of this. :D
Good job.
Author's Response: I'm so glad! Oh yeah, he's definitely a bitch. I hope you continue to enjoy it; the next chapter is up! ;)
Date: 12/03/09 04:32 pm Title: [2]
okay, so i FINALLY get to finish this and OH MY GOD Tom's such a depressed, annoying, soon-to-be-thirty asshole and i LOVE it. and i love Bill, but cause even before i read your end notes i was like HE IS GONNA FUCK YOU UP BOYYYYY. so anyways, i would greatly appreciate more of this!
oh and what pairing should i make the awesome xmas one-shot i'm writing you? you know, the one i didn't tell you about til now LOL
Author's Response: He is definitely getting his midlife crisis ON! And yes. Yes, Bill is gonna fuck him up somehow. Maybe a few different ways. >_>
OMG, do you even need to ASK!? :D :D :D