HEILIGSCHEIßE!!!!THATS WHAT YOU MEANT WHEN YOU INPLIED "TWINCEST, TWINCEST-NOT REALTED!!!!*GASP* Fyredancer, what tricks you have up your sleeves?
The makeout scene, Oh. Was the most gratifying scene EVER!!!! So Fucking detailed and descriptive!!!It makes me jealous and I yearn for Bill. The hat falling, XD. I bet you Tom would have gone after it in real life!!

Changing teams was no longer an issue, so long as Tom's libido was concerned. There was only Team Bill.

FUCK YEAH THERE'S ONLY TEAM BILL!!! Forget Jacob, he's long dead gone, It's only Team Bill!! :D

Author's Response: Well, it means there's one or the other, but not both; just both for now until we figure out which one...

Wonderful, I'm glad you think so! Bill and Tom are lucky to have each other. ;D And I bet Tom WOULD have gone after it in real life.

GO TEAM BILL.

uhhhhhhhhhhh *________* I love kisses the most *____*

This is so incredible, thank God you didn't split the chapter *_* ooh *_* that was SO GOOD!

I can't wait to see how Tom blows it! *grins* ♥

Author's Response: Yay, I'm so pleased you enjoyed! And I'm glad I didn't split the chapter, too. ;) Thanks for your comments and the next chapter is up - hope it fulfills your expectations!

Tom, you dork! Buffets are the absolute BEST thing about cruises. Or maybe I'm wrong; after all, I've never been on a cruise with Bill. I really hope you meant sexy deeds and not messing things up when you said Tom might blow it. I love this story, you're doing a great job with how smoothly you're changing To from a grumpy jerk to a feeling, caring person. Bill is impossible to resist, everything about him just feels so sunny and right and like a breeze of joy. I'm glad they're getting to know each other. Gosh, all that kissing and groping... umm sorry, grape-eating, was very sensual and sexy. You're giving hints now to where this is going, and have to say I don't mind, I just hope these two darlings will be able to make the right decisions when they get to the fall-down. Amazing work, as always :)

Author's Response: I know, right?? They are so tasty. But, yeah, if you're on a cruise with Bill, hopefully HE is the buffet. :D As for Tom...well, he is a silly boy. Alas. And it's not possible to change that grumpy jerk to his feeling, caring self overnight...or even a couple of days! Thank you so much, I'm glad the transformation is coming across as believable! And I'm hoping our boys will work it out without hurting each other too much. =x Thanks for your review. :)

Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh. *faints*

That was so hot! Especially when they were kissing there... omg.

It took me nearly two hours to read it. XD Just because I wanted this chapter to never end and so i read a little, did something else, then read some more... Too bad that the chappie ended at all...

Now I beg you! Please update like... IN THE NEXT SECOND! *faints again*

I fell in love with this story and I need more! PLEASE! *puppy eyes*

Okay, I stop my whining here. But really, this story is sososoooooo fucking good!

Author's Response: Hee hee, thank you! They definitely enjoyed their kissing, got into it quite a bit. Ahh, I'm so glad you liked it so much you wanted to dole it out like that. ♥ I've done that myself.

Alas, I have to space the updates out to make sure I stay ahead and keep posting to a regular schedule! I'm sooo glad you're enjoying it so much though. :) Thank you!

Loving this.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) Next chapter is up, I hope you continue to enjoy!

omg, lovely. So, so, so much goodness.

One thing that confused me, though. Are you sure you mean 'New Deal'? IRL Tom wears New Era caps.

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! You see why I didn't want to split the chapter up. ;)

AUGH I KNEW THAT. *goes through everything; fixes* Thank you. =_= Slinking off to hide now.

Once I started reading this-I could not stop! I'm so ready for more...

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you're enjoying. :)

Awww! Haha.. XD Tom's last thought.. this is adorable, and Bill seducing Tom with grapes was just too fantastic for words. :) I am muchly obliged that you kept this chapter as a single piece instead of splitting it up. :) I also love the banter, and the way you described Michael's behavior as they left. XD

...and what is this remarking on their similarities? Foreshadowing or simply coincidence?

Author's Response: Hey, Tom did his best to resist, but a man can only take so much! ;) I thought it worked better as a single chapter and I'm glad you think so too. Michael is fun to play off of. :D And their banter is just love to write.

We shall have to see! Next chapter is up. ^_-

The kissing with the grapes was so sexy,I almost held my breath.You are such a good writer.Moore soon!

Author's Response: That was such a fun scene to write, as you can imagine. :) Thanks, I'm happy to hear it, and definitely more soon!

Tom, seriously now, stop using the escorts. Two strikes already, ok? Give it up! At this rate, you'd have better luck with Bill if you stop being a prude about things. Yes, a lifetime of hettitude cannot just be ignored over night. I get that, but why not just show that deep down, you're not really an asshole and just...go with it. Live a little. It's YOUR vacation after all!

Author's Response: He should learn, right?? We all know he's going to be more compatible with Bill! ;D And I think he must have heard you, because he took your advice in chapter four. XD