Date: 12/08/09 11:20 am Title: [5]
I think that Bill is mad because they were having a nice conversation and then Tom went and acting like an asshole...as always :D
Author's Response: Good point, I think you're right! It was the "fairy" comment that triggered Bill's buttons, though. D:
Date: 12/08/09 11:19 am Title: [1]
D'oh! Of, for crying out loud, couldn't Tom have blushed profusely, and said "SHIT! I did NOT mean that the way it came out!!!" - or something like that? Jeeze! Who has not referred to someone as their Fairy God something or other when they did something beneficial for them? I've done that before. It has nothing to do with anyone being an actual "fairy" - magical or otherwise!
Author's Response: Well, that would have been the polite thing to do, wouldn't it?? But Tom's so dense and kinda dumb. :P Hope you're still enjoying the story; there is lots more!
Date: 12/08/09 10:23 am Title: [5]
Oh, man! All your updates make ME flutterclap :)! And not only with this story! You're amazing! And this just makes me wanna win a ticket to your head just to see what will happen next! :) I just love it! ;)
Author's Response: Yaaaay, thank you! ♥ I really appreciate that. Steady updates for the past two days - don't miss 'em!
Date: 12/07/09 08:35 pm Title: [4]
oh...my damn. that was hot. and it was only kissing *_* i just read all four chapters in a row, and i think i'm in love.
my god. keep going.
Author's Response: ♥ Thank you so much, I'm pleased to hear it! No worries, this fic is definitely going places. Several more stops. ;D
Date: 12/07/09 03:21 am Title: [4]
I love port ~sexytiems~. I wish they'd dock there and never leave. =D But of course, there are other places to see, and I can't wait to read where else you would take us.
Author's Response: I think the ship should have stayed at port sexytiems, too. ;D Thank you, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! And the cruise definitely continues - next chapter is up!
Date: 12/06/09 09:16 pm Title: [4]
Team Bill ftw YAY!! Loved this chapter where we get a little action!
Author's Response: Team Bill indeed! :D Thank you, I'm glad we got a little action, too. ;D
Date: 12/06/09 06:16 pm Title: [4]
plz more=]
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 12/06/09 06:01 pm Title: [4]
Well, LOOKIE HERE! Someone FINALLY put one step forward rather than back. Amazing how not even 48 hrs of knowing Bill, he's caused so much change in Tom already!! Ok, so, can like, this cruise never end then? XD
Cause they are like, perfect and steamy and all kinds of public indecent but I love it!
Author's Response: It is the power of Bill's awesome, I am convinced! Mm, never-ending cruise sounds pretty good to me. XD So pleased you're enjoying them - and they're enjoying each other! ;D For now...
Date: 12/06/09 03:08 pm Title: [4]
Oh fuck, I totally forgot the twincest-twincest not related thing!
I am SO curious to how you're going to go about this and I cannot wait to see!
Author's Response: I'm sneaky like that. ;) We shall have to see! I won't make you wait too long. Next chapter is up!
Date: 12/06/09 02:53 pm Title: [4]
I don't even know what to say. You already know that I have nothing but love for this, and this... THIS was no exception, not at all! I know I must've said this a thousand and one times, but I love, love, LOVE the imagery. You have such a way with words, and gah! It just bears to be repeated over and over again.
And that... ohhhh, that kiss! LOL I'm so speechless that I'm not even going to TRY and make a coherent comment, or I'll end up making a fool of myself, lol.
But seriously, excellent! I've probably said this before too, but again, it bears repeating: You are an amazingly talented author, and I love reading what you write. Please, please, PLEASE don't ever stop writing; I don't know what I'd do with myself if you stopped.
Author's Response: ♥ ♥ ♥ Thank you, thank you! I'm so happy it's coming across vividly for you.
The kiss was definitely fun to write. ;D
I'm blushing and I appreciate your compliments very, very much. Thank you.
Date: 12/06/09 01:46 pm Title: [4]
I've only just got around to reading this, and, and! *flutterclaps* Oh my goodness. Bill's really bringing his Tomi back to life here, and I love it. And of course I also love the making out. Clearly catching up with this fic at this chapter was an excellent idea!
Although, hrrrrm, are the two of them brothers indeed. I was wondering all the way through some of the earlier chapters, and now, well, gosh. But then I read your "No matter what you think is going to happen, it's probably not that," and I wonder! Unless the- and the- you're leaving me guessing, anyway! Though I do know your fondness for twins, so there's that. ;)
Author's Response: Yay, yay! *claps back* I'm so pleased you're enjoying it! And you picked up a good time to catch up, yes. :D
Oho, you caught that! Would love to hear some of your guesses. And you do know my fondness for twins...BUT AM I COUNTING ON THAT. ;D Hope you, um, enjoy the next chapter! :D
Date: 12/06/09 01:21 pm Title: [4]
That grape scene was hot! I'm glad Tom has accepted the inevitable and isn't fighting it anymore.
Well, it looks like they are really brothers... or twins. I can't wait to find out how they figure it out. Hope there will be some yummy sexing in the near future, now that Tom has stopped being a douche.
Author's Response: Yay, thank you! I enjoyed writing it. Well...Tom may not be fighting, but he's not above, um, spoiling things for himself?
We'll have to see! :P Nothing's for certain yet - a good 1/3 of you are jumping the gun on that, lol. And we'll see when the rating changes. :D Thanks for your review!
Date: 12/06/09 12:36 pm Title: [4]
I totally love this so far, can't wait for you to continue!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Next chapter is up, and I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Date: 12/06/09 12:22 pm Title: [4]
I've caught up, yay!! Love this, seriously ♥ I like how you got the first suggestion of the brotherdom in there, lol. Cute.
Author's Response: Yaay~ Have posted more already because I'm a brat like that. ;P OMG, everyone's instantly assuming they're brothers. >_> Must be something in the water.
Date: 12/06/09 11:23 am Title: [4]
ohhhh, the plot thickens :D
This was fun! I like the mental images you gave me of Tom just kinda cruising through the water and Bill splashing around making a ruckus :D As always, can't wait for more!
Oh, and ppsssst, it's New Era, not New Deal :) New Era is a ball cap/clothing line, New Deal was a political campaign by FDR :D
Author's Response: Yes indeed! :D Thank you, I'm so pleased you enjoyed this chapter! Next chapter is now up, don't miss it! XD
I'm so embarrassed, I knew that. New Deal is a hilarious misinterpretation, though.
Date: 12/06/09 10:33 am Title: [4]
LOVE. That's all I can really say to this fic, due to my brain melting at the grape scene xD
Author's Response: Thank you. :) So glad to provide your brain-meltiness!
Date: 12/06/09 10:33 am Title: [4]
Aaaahhh! I'm pretty much incoherent between the sunscreen application and the making out. And they ARE brothers aren't they! This chapter left me smiling so big! :DDD
Author's Response: *sigh* Good times, right? Ohhhh...we'll have to wait and see, Remy. ;D Thank you, I'm so excited you enjoyed it!
Date: 12/06/09 10:14 am Title: [3]
Sometimes I think I need that talk on a daily basis, and for that reason I adore this. Also loving poor Michael LOL.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. ♥ I think we all need that talk, sometimes. It's good to get the reminder. Poor Michael is like a recurring joke but he's a good sport about it! ;D
Date: 12/06/09 09:38 am Title: [2]
Oh Tomi; he does love to make things difficult for himself. Poor baby needs to chill big time.
Author's Response: He DOES, he absolutely does. And it's only gonna get worse. :P
Date: 12/06/09 09:09 am Title: [1]
Okay, just getting into this and I love pissy Tom. I also love him getting all wrong-footed by Tom. Buuut... you might want to revisit the opening line, most people don't shade their hand with this eyes ^_~ I can tell I'll barely write at all today now >.>
Author's Response: Pissy Tom is fun to write. ;D And he definitely got wrong-footed. AND THANK YOU SO MUCH, OH MY GOD, I can't believe both my beta and I didn't catch that opening line! 9_9 I'm so pleased you got off to a good start with this!