Date: 12/10/09 08:46 pm Title: [6]
*jaw drops* Oh my goodness, that was soo.... WOW! Amazing! I know I've said this a million times, but once again, I absolutely adore your vivid descriptions of everything... including how smexy hexy Bill and Tom are getting, lol. ;)
That was just too sweet! Nervous Tom is cute, and I think it was sweet that Bill gave him a second chance. I grinned from ear to ear when Tom asked "Why me?" and Bill said it was because he woke up with his pants on. That really does say a lot about a person, but it's one of those things that people never really think about. In every fic, when one of them falls asleep, the other undresses them (Though for pure reasons), so the fact that you had Bill say that really made me stop and think for a moment. I definitely like that detail!
And later.... *drools* Sooo hot, seriously. I know you said we have to wait until Friday, and I'm hoping that you meant tomorrow, and not next week. XD Anyway, I look forward to more! :)
Author's Response: *grinning* Very pleased to put those sexy hexy images in your head. XD Nervous Tom was very hard to resist. And Bill had a good point, you know? I know I'd be creeped out if someone I didn't know well undressed me to put me in bed. Better to simply be covered up with a blanket or something.
Thanks so much for your reviews, I really love hearing what you think about the story. ♥
Date: 12/10/09 07:27 pm Title: [6]
Yeah.. We all know where it's going..XDD Heeeeee...XDD
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!O__O Rofl.. So hyper... My battery's gonna die in a moment though.. Reading updated fave fics turn off my *depression mode*
Author's Response: Oh my god, I don't think anything would have stopped them. ;D Thank you! Very pleased you enjoyed it, sorry about your battery loss. Thanks for your review and hope you've continued to enjoy!
Date: 12/10/09 04:57 pm Title: [6]
YOU BETTER UPDATE NAO.
NOT NAO
RIGHT NAO.
*clears throat* I thought this was a very nice chapter. *nods sedately*
Author's Response: *grins* Well, thank you! I certainly didn't make people wait as long as I was intending. :D
Date: 12/10/09 04:46 pm Title: [6]
oOH i like where this is going :)
xx
Author's Response: Sexy times...definitely sexy times. ;D Thanks for your review!
Date: 12/10/09 04:13 pm Title: [6]
This is a terrible place to be caught up at. =((( Friday, though? That's tomorrow. I think maybe I can survive until then.
Author's Response: I'M AN EVIL PERSON. But I didn't make people wait too long. ;D Thanks for your review!
Date: 12/10/09 03:38 pm Title: [5]
LOL I can't help but laugh. Tom, you are so helplessly clueless.
Author's Response: HOPELESSLY clueless. *shakes head* But, I'm glad he made you laugh and not weep. ;D
Date: 12/10/09 03:06 pm Title: [4]
Nnnnnnnngh. My God, between the sunblock and the grapes. And then the kissing at the pick-me-up-at-seven. I'm a freaking goner. And so glad I still have more to read. ♥
Author's Response: Sexy Bill is sexy. ;D Very glad you enjoyed that. And I'm pleased to have written more for you to read when you get a chance!
Date: 12/10/09 01:42 pm Title: [6]
You just killed me, woman! I was squirming in my chair trying not to moan myself... God! That was just so hot. *dies*
Anywayss. You gotta update! I'll bully you some more, if needed. But just... I love your writing style! I've only ever read this story and the 'the blue of desire' from you. But one day I'm gonna get my lazy ass also reading all your other stories. I just know they're just as amazing as this one! x3
So keep it up, girl!
Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad that it came across so hot! Very fun to write. ;D And I'm definitely keeping those updates regular - hope you're still enjoying! Ah, thank you! I'm really pleased to hear you like my style. I hope you enjoy the others, if you get the chance! ♥ And definitely not losing any steam on this story, it is full speed ahead on the sexy cruise!
Date: 12/10/09 01:06 pm Title: [6]
O.O you...you....how DARE you end it there, woman! *glares and repeated clicks where the next button should be*
Author's Response: *grins* I'm so glad you're caught up in it, though! I was good, I didn't make people wait that long! Thanks for your review.
Date: 12/10/09 11:29 am Title: [6]
ohhhhh u tease
friday? no way....*cries*
if i were a boy i'd be hard now
i'm so happy that Bill gave Tom a second chance
it really was a very agonizing and extended foreplay *cough*
please update
Author's Response: I'm a terrible person! Who didn't wait until Friday. ;D LOL, but I know what you mean; the twins DO that to me.
I think we're all glad Bill gave Tom a second chance...especially Tom. Thanks!
Date: 12/10/09 10:13 am Title: [1]
My guess is that Bill is one of the other guests :) Tom sounds grumpy and tired of the life he's leading. I hope he meets someone who can brighten his day. *wink wink*
Author's Response: Good guess! ;) And yes, Tom is definitely grumpy and tired and maybe needs hugs. Or, a Bill. :D
Date: 12/10/09 09:08 am Title: [6]
Oh my god, you're going to leave us hanging here??? Bill is so seductive--
Tom doesn't have a chance, lol. And I loooovvvve Bill's comet outfit, which is what I was imagining here. This is so fun and sexy.
Author's Response: *snickers*
Tom never did have a chance. At least you recognize this fact. And Bill was definitely wearing the Comet outfit, glad you recognized! Thanks so much, I'm so pleased you're continuing to enjoy it. Fun and sexy was definitely what I was going for. ♥
Date: 12/10/09 05:56 am Title: [6]
It's less bullying and more gentle nudging. ;)
Oh that Bill, so sweet but what a tease!
Author's Response: And I appreciate that. ;D And am entirely susceptible to it. Thank you! And yes, he's very much both.
Date: 12/10/09 04:41 am Title: [6]
I'm so VERY glad they didn't just say sorry and bang each other outright. Everything is moving at the perfect pace, something hard to achieve, and there's just enough flirting to keep the smut fans happy until they actually do it. Great balance.
'He smoothed his napkin down and told it, "I'm very sorry."' BEST SENTENCE EVER. People SO do that! I cracked up. Loving the long chapters too. Overall, so happy with the chapter, bravo.
Author's Response: *flails* Thank you! The pacing was important to me. Yeah, they definitely couldn't fall right into bed...there had to be more emotional and mental build-up, on both parts.
I'm so pleased that the long chapters are working. This fic seems to...demand them, or something. >_> Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 12/10/09 02:13 am Title: [6]
Bill is such a tease.
You are such a tease.
This is my favourite chapter so far & not just because of sexytimes. I like how we get a glimpse of insecure and unsure Tom is of himself, and how just being with Bill has made him want to become a better person. And this Bill...omg. How you've written him here is so very sexy and confident and seduction. Guh. I love it.
Author's Response: Guilty on both counts! Thank you, I'm glad it's made an impression on you! They both have their issues and insecurities, but Bill is determined to overcome them...determined enough for both of them, fortunately. Thank you so much for your review, I'm so incredibly pleased you're into this story.
Date: 12/10/09 02:00 am Title: [6]
*___*
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
...you didn't expect a coherent review after that, did you? good. *flail*
Author's Response: ♥ ♥ ♥ Good enough for meeeeeee. Especially after leaving you on a bit of an edge. >:D
Date: 12/10/09 01:39 am Title: [6]
Yay, I'm so glad to see that Bill is a forgiving soul (with the healthy needs of a young man, ahem). I wonder what they'll notice, or what'll happen between the sheets. And Tom's last line was so much love. Also, I think you've made Michael such a great fun character - I hope he finds love, or at least enjoys his book, immensely.
Author's Response: Yes, and yes. ;D And they were way too desperately into sexing each other up to notice anything...just then. Thanks so much, I'm very pleased you thought so! And glad you're enjoying Michael - he totally is fun for me. ♥ Hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 12/10/09 01:15 am Title: [6]
:DDDDDDDDDD
This is too cute
I love it.
I have to say, this is the first fic I check when I'm online to see if its been updated
(:
Author's Response: ♥ ♥ ♥ Thank you. I'm so glad you're enjoying. And thanks for your review!
Date: 12/09/09 11:57 pm Title: [6]
>.> how dare you stop here woman? just kidding. kinda. i always enjoy your writing, and this is no exception. you made me feel just as tense, as teased as Bill made Tom (which is no easy feat considering that i'm currently sick as fuck and in this HORRIBLE amount of pain). anyways, i can't wait for the next chapter. time to change the rating? xD
Author's Response: 'Cause I'm evil? >_>; I mean, thank you! I'm glad you got heated up along with them in spite of the evil sickness. Thanks for your review and hell yeah, next chapter was time to change the rating! ;D
Date: 12/09/09 11:47 pm Title: [6]
Omg I pictured them dancing to that song and I think my brain melted.
Author's Response: Thank you, me too. :D It's a pretty image, don't you think?