Date: 12/11/09 01:03 am Title: [7]
Holy hotnessssss! Mmmm. Words fail me.
Author's Response: XD XD :D Thank you! I'm so pleased to make you speechless. ;D
Date: 12/11/09 01:00 am Title: [7]
*_*
Author's Response: :D Thank you!
Date: 12/11/09 12:55 am Title: [7]
O*M*F*G!!!! That more than made up for my crappy day!!! Deff one of the hottest sex scene's i've read in a long time! I love the way they tell each other how they feel and what they want to do to each other..that's hot as hell and make's it even more sexy!
That last sentence has me worried.....thank you for the fast updating!!!!!!
Author's Response: Excellent, I'm so pleased! And very flattered by the compliment, thank you. :D So glad you found it to be hot. And yes, I have to tease a bit, a taste of things to come!
Date: 12/11/09 12:48 am Title: [7]
That was... oh, DAMN! Lol, I need a second to just recollect myself. That was seriously the hottest thing I've ever read. Your sex scenes are always amazing! :)
And, once again, the DETAIL! Even in the sexiest of things, you described their surroundings, (Along with what THEY were doing!) And omg. OMG. All I can say is hot damn. :)
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: *grins* Thank you, so much! I enjoyed writing it, clearly. :D The boys are very inspiring. I'm so pleased you were caught up in the detail and the...OMG. ;D I hope you're still enjoying!
Date: 12/11/09 12:44 am Title: [7]
Nothin' at all wrong with a little smut at sea!
I adore your writing, and the way you portray the characters so realistically is like a breath of fresh air.
I'm excited for the excursion!
Author's Response: Oh my god, yes, right? Thank you so much, I'm very pleased to hear that they're coming across as realistic. And fun sexytiems on the excursion, of course!
Date: 12/11/09 12:20 am Title: [1]
-cocks head- from the philippines?? I iz from the philippines.. -giggles then goes off to read more-
Author's Response: *grins* It was a totally unnecessary detail for her to throw in there, but I'm glad a couple of people enjoyed it!
Date: 12/10/09 11:33 pm Title: [7]
That was so hot :) But oh, Tom ;_; That last bit made me upset...
Fantastic chapter ♥
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, Tom is definitely getting attached and he's scared. ;_; I appreciate your review, hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 12/10/09 11:10 pm Title: [7]
This chapter was insane in the best way possible!This was a different type of sex scene. Your description was refreshing and new. It wasn't the same ::insert cliche overdone sex description:: I'm used to reading between Bill and an OMC. Thanks so much for really being creative. It is definitely appreciated. :)
Author's Response: Excellent, I'm so glad you think so! It's really great to hear that you thought the scenes were different and new; I try my best! I appreciate your review.
Date: 12/10/09 10:52 pm Title: [7]
aww poor tomi at the end=[ they have 2 stay 4ever 2gether=]
Author's Response: I know, he was very sad. He needs his Bill!
Date: 12/10/09 10:50 pm Title: [7]
do you need a lot of candles? cus I can leave plenty reviews!!
I loved loved loved this! It was sexy!
Author's Response: *grins* Thank you for the candles! I'm really glad you loved it, I very much enjoyed writing it.
Date: 12/10/09 10:18 pm Title: [7]
Um, so, uh, my week has definitely been improved. *_* Gah, I didn't realize that you'd posted two more new chapters after this one. I'm too accustomed to having your fics faved so I get email alerts for them! Clearly I've got to do the same with this one, because it is hot, sweet, and delicious every step of the way.
I love that they end up cuddling at the end, despite Tom's usual opinions on that subject. Your incredibly sexy chapters are always, well, incredibly sexy, but then they always include that amazing emotional bond, also. What can I say, it appeals to my porn-loving side and to my sappy side as well. ;) Thank you so much for posting; I needed this after prancing around in the freezing cold today!
Author's Response: Woo woo, WOO! Happy to be on the improvement committee. :D And thank you for favoriting it.
Bill is too cuddly to resist. And definitely, the emotional bond is so important. Even when Tom thinks he's a one night stand kind of guy, Bill breaks EVERYONE'S rules. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, thank you!
Date: 12/10/09 10:15 pm Title: [7]
So, so good. Perfect bedtime chapter.
Author's Response: Awesome, I'm pleased you found it to be so. ♥
Date: 12/10/09 10:11 pm Title: [7]
I love this so much xD that was the most epic sex EVER! Ugh, falling in love on a cruise~
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so pleased you think so! Yep, definitely falling in love on a cruise~
Date: 12/10/09 10:11 pm Title: [7]
HOT.
that is all I can say, cause as sick as I am right now (and i'm SICKKK), this made my day much better, and made me sit there and want a cigarette so badly. was just hot.
Author's Response: I'm sorry you were sick. ;_; But I'm glad it made your day better! ...Sorry about the cigarette craving, though.
Date: 12/10/09 10:06 pm Title: [7]
You write such good sex, woman!!! I feel like I need a cigarette now and I don't even smoke. *melts into puddle of goo*
Author's Response: That's what Michelle said! XD Awesome, thank you SO much.
Date: 12/10/09 09:48 pm Title: [7]
I didn't know you could actually sweat while reading. I do now. That was scorchingly hot.
Author's Response: Woohoo~ Thanks so much, I'm pleased to evoke that response!
Date: 12/10/09 09:45 pm Title: [7]
*lights review candles for you* I love how in each of your stories your characters are all so different and exciting, even if they're very ordinary people. I love it. :)
Author's Response: Yaaaay. ♥ Thank you, I'm happy to hear that! Pretty much what I'm going for - different, but still relatable. Thanks so much.
Date: 12/10/09 09:45 pm Title: [7]
*fans self*
Woo-oh.. That was.. amazing.. the foreplay on that was KILLING me last chapter, but it was obviously for good reason. ;) This.. wow.
Poor Tom though. :( That last part completely yanked at my heart strings... I'm crossing my fingers and hoping it won't turn out that way. :'(
Amazing chapter.. dang.
Author's Response: Bill does so like his foreplay. ;) And he is NOT a tease, he totally follows through! Definitely poor Tom, Bill has had a serious impact on him! I'm SO glad you enjoyed it. ♥
Date: 12/10/09 09:40 pm Title: [7]
awww that was perfect! Poor Tomi... very good chap, cant wait for more :P
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yeah, poor Tomi, I put him through so much. ;P Thanks for your review!
Date: 12/10/09 09:21 pm Title: [6]
plz gurl more=] dont wait just post==]=]] ur awesome
Author's Response: LOL, I just posted, it's your lucky night. ;D