Date: 12/11/09 10:13 pm Title: [7]
Thought you were gonna say Candles in the wind and thought about Elton John, which ruined pretty much the faterglow of the sex scene I had just red! lol
But I still like this story, what am I saying, LOVE it, very much and how Tom is changing, how Bill is making Tom change simply by being there and being who he is.. Nice, nice, nice!
Author's Response: Noooo, not that song! That would definitely kill the afterglow! Thank you so much, I'm really happy you love the story. And I appreciate your reviews so much!
Date: 12/11/09 08:12 pm Title: [7]
Just fantastic. The sex was hot, but the sweet ending was even better.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And so intended, on both counts. ;D
Date: 12/11/09 08:06 pm Title: [7]
Play your cards right, Tomi, and he WON'T take any of it back. XD
Author's Response: Hmmm, we'll have to see about that! ;D
Date: 12/11/09 06:07 pm Title: [7]
That was an amazing way to start the weekend! But that last line scares me a little...
Great Job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And, so intended. ;) Tom's gotten a bit attached.
Date: 12/11/09 05:46 pm Title: [7]
Wow! You just have a way to capture the character's emotions, that makes ME even a little jealous of them <3! In a good, way, of course! I wish someone could describe my own fellings like this! If that actually happened, life would be so much easier.. :P lol
Anyways, This was impeccable, not to mention hot as hell, but you probably already know that... ;)
xx
Author's Response: Excellent, I'm pleased to hear it! I know, I think I'm jealous of them too. ;D They're in their own little world. Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 12/11/09 03:32 pm Title: [7]
I don't even know what to say. That was kind of amazing, and I'm feeling a little breathless, myself. =)
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! :D I'm so pleased to evoke that reaction. ♥
Date: 12/11/09 02:00 pm Title: [7]
That was hot. And that last line...just... Awww poor tomi
Author's Response: Thank you, so much! And he's definitely gotten attached, you know? I really appreciate your reviews!
Date: 12/11/09 01:45 pm Title: [7]
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT
*_*
O_O
i like that Bill says "Tomi"
Author's Response: Thank you! ;D I'm glad you like that, I think it's so nice. ♥
Date: 12/11/09 12:13 pm Title: [7]
lalalala. that was hot. Yep, I have nothing else to say. Just hot, hot, hoooot. xD
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! XD
Date: 12/11/09 09:35 am Title: [7]
mooooooreee
this is sooo god
Author's Response: Definitely more, and more, and more! ;D Thank you so much.
Date: 12/11/09 08:58 am Title: [7]
I had to read this two times, it was so good xD
This really cheered me up, thank you so much for this! (:
Author's Response: Wicked, thank you! I'm glad you did - and VERY happy to hear it cheered you.
Date: 12/11/09 05:04 am Title: [7]
thank you thank you thank you. sometimes i can't believe you're not charging for your sex scenes.
Author's Response: ♥ ♥ ♥ And thank YOU for your review. Oh, if I could.
Date: 12/11/09 04:55 am Title: [7]
I'm sorry, my brain has melted so you aren't going to get a proper review out of me, just a *_* and a :d, and other sorts of smiley faces. Guh...
Author's Response: :D I accept your emoticons and guh. ♥ Thank you, I'm pleased it gave you such a reaction! XD XD XD
Date: 12/11/09 04:28 am Title: [7]
My GOD, I love this! You are one leane mean writing machine, just pumping out great chapter after great chapter. Every fanfiction-fans dream ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! It's a little weird to write ahead of myself - people's reactions are sometimes amusing to me, considering I've been at least two chapters ahead. But I love seeing predictions and so forth. :D I'm really pleased you're enjoying the story.
Date: 12/11/09 04:00 am Title: [7]
Aww.
That was satisfying.
Thank you for updating so soon! Looking forward to the next chapter as always ♥
Author's Response: ♥ I'm so happy to hear it. And, my pleasure! I think people needed a bit of smut that day and I was glad to provide. Thank you so much~
Date: 12/11/09 03:25 am Title: [7]
ooooh you are my favorite sex scene writer. The end was so sweet, the cuddling and cradling akgjkakjg *_*
Author's Response: ♥ ♥ ♥ Thank you! I'm pleased it had such an effect on you, and Tom's come a long way, hasn't he?
Date: 12/11/09 02:23 am Title: [7]
Okay that last line hurts :( But one hell of an awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad it had an effect on you! :)
Date: 12/11/09 02:02 am Title: [7]
I think, um. I might need a shower. A really cold shower. Because damn.
Bill's ass clamped tight around his cock had drained the smarts right out of him.
I snorted. LOL Nice.
The ending line made my chest hurt, though. It wasn't something I thought about before, and it sounds like not something Tom thought about either, or even had a reason to. Amazing chapter.
Author's Response: I, hee hee. Woo hoo? Yes. Yes, I imagine being with Bill would have that effect on one. >_> Thank you so much! Even in the midst of sexy, I like giving the emotions a prod. ♥
Date: 12/11/09 01:34 am Title: [7]
eeeeehhhh!!!! more more more more more more!!!!!! -chants like those small creatures I can't remember the name of-
Author's Response: *grins* Thank you, I'm so pleased you're enjoying it so much! Hope you continue to find it good.
Date: 12/11/09 01:20 am Title: [1]
Amazing
Author's Response: Thank you so much - I hope you continue to enjoy the story!