Date: 12/14/09 10:33 pm Title: [9]
Uhhhh-oh. For a few seconds there, I got the impression that Bill suspected the truth. Or... um... actually, I'm still unsure as to what the truth is myself, but I did notice Bill never mentioned how old he really was. Hmmmm. Going to take a wild guess here and say thirty, and also suspecting that Bill's proving suddenly elusive next chapter relates to this.
I'm still reveling in their many sexy and sweet moments here, though. Don't let the fact that you may be identical twin brothers get in the way of your true love, guys! :( Also, Phil's "Wait, Bill is a man?" had me literally wheezing with laughter. My sister had to come in and ask what was wrong with me.
Hope your neck feels better soon, and that many more reviews come flowing in to act as pain relievers! :P
Author's Response: Uh-oh, indeed. And your impressions are good, Bill was definitely suspecting something was afoot. Or amiss. Or something. >_> You're too perceptive! And yes, they're still having plenty of sexy and sweet moments! Poor myopic Phil! He probably thought Bill was a girl because all the women kept calling him "Billy." Thanks so much, and I'm really super happy you're still enjoying!
Date: 12/14/09 10:06 pm Title: [9]
DON'T FEEL BAD ABOUT WRITING MORE XDD I'd rather you write more than have respond to my/everyone else's reviews.. is that bad? I know you appreciate all the reviews anyways so.. just keep writing :D
I loved it as usual
Author's Response: Thank you, but I do feel bad for leaving them so long! ;) Thank you, though! And I definitely appreciate all of the reviews. :)
Date: 12/14/09 10:03 pm Title: [9]
An other excellent chap! Keep them comin, cant get enough ! lol
Author's Response: Thank you, so much! Working on keeping up pretty quickly. :)
Date: 12/14/09 09:56 am Title: [8]
hmmm... -having weird thoughts- I hope you won't go where my head is.. I see a twc in the warning and yeah..
well.. I love it!!!
Author's Response: I have to wonder what your weird thoughts are, though! We'll have to see how it goes. ;)
Date: 12/13/09 10:33 pm Title: [8]
im sry i hope u feel better]= plz more=]
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Definitely feeling better now.
Date: 12/13/09 08:06 pm Title: [8]
I really, truly doubt you need any more people to tell you how awesome this story is. But I can't really think of anything else to say about it, so you'll just have to deal with it, I guess. :]
Author's Response: I really appreciate you telling me so, though! :) Thanks so much.
Date: 12/13/09 07:22 pm Title: [8]
Awesome chap once again !! Love this story so so much, all of your stories are a ``valeur sūre`` ! lol cant wait for the next chap !
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really pleased that you think so. :D
Date: 12/13/09 02:54 pm Title: [8]
God, this is so incredible. you are such a fantastic writer. i adore this story!! keep up the wonderful work. sorry you aren't feeling well. hope you feel better soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm really pleased that you think so! I'll definitely be doing my best to keep up with this one. ;)
Date: 12/13/09 02:06 pm Title: [8]
Oh, I hope you'll feel better soon.
this is so hot, and you write so good.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I really appreciate it! :)
Date: 12/13/09 01:57 pm Title: [8]
Boy am I all worked up right now... Amazing, simply marvelous. I know those words are superfluous and hardly informative but I kind of have to gather my thoughts beyond the simple 'why is there no next button!' Which, by the way, was the first thing that entered my head when I finished the chapter. Severely disappointed I am.
Ok, on to what I like about your story. First of all, it sounds like you're setting them up to be related but separated at an early age, which I really really like. I love twincest in all its many forms but that's my favorite because it allows them to have a sexual relationship in a realistic way. If that's not where you're going, then ignore me cause I'm obviously an idiot. For some reason, I also really like that Bill is a travelogue writer. It's appropriate, I think. He's well-known and familiar with a certain amount of spotlight so Tom's popularity shouldn't freak him out too bad. Tom, on the other hand, has yet to tell Bill what he does for a living and I hope they get around to that because secrets (even unintentional ones) only make problems. And the last thing I can think of at the moment: You write with intensity and it is fantastic. I was having a hard time holding a conversation with my roommate because I'd been hooked into the story and it refused to let me go! It's an amazing talent and you use it well. I cannot wait for the next chapter, I'm tracking this for sure. I hope you feel better!
Author's Response: Ahh, I'm so glad to hear it! And I really enjoy the fact that you're so into the story that you want the next chapter as soon as you're finished with the current one. ;D It's an awesome compliment.
Bill's occupation was definitely fun to select. And Tom wasn't as stealthy as he thought about his own secret. ;D I'm so pleased that the story has you hooked so deeply and I love hearing your thoughts on where you think it's going! I hope you continue to enjoy and thanks so much for this lovely, in-depth review. ♥
Date: 12/13/09 05:23 am Title: [8]
My love for this story just keeps growing.
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much.
Date: 12/13/09 02:53 am Title: [3]
Tom watched with sheer fascination as Bill's lips lips closed about the tube. - I agree. Bill's lips are gorgeous enough to mention twice ;)
I love how Tom is so fascinated by Bill's beauty he forgets he's on a date. lol. I'm trying to catch up on this story but I'm convinced you are wonder woman so we'll see how that goes. Love this so much, your writing style is always so entertaining :)
Author's Response: Augh, neither my beta or I caught that! *fixes* Thank you!
Tom was definitely fascinated by Bill, to the exclusion of his poor date! Thank you so much, I hope you're still enjoying the story...and don't worry, I think you'll catch up soon. :D
Date: 12/13/09 02:31 am Title: [8]
sorry you're not feeling well :( hope the sushi will also help those fingers! tom is making me nehvous o_O
Author's Response: It was one of THOSE weekends; thankfully, the cats were volunteering hot water bottle duty. D: Thank you! ...And Tom should be making you nervous.
Date: 12/13/09 01:25 am Title: [8]
Whoo! Someone is getting the best birthday ever. Or should I say someones ;) Hot and cute and ah, cruiseship romances make my day.
Author's Response: Yes indeed, someones were having the best birthday ever. ;D Thanks so much!
Date: 12/13/09 12:23 am Title: [8]
Why denyyyyy... It's inevitable!! Tom, you've changed, and you want Bill forever and ever and eveeeeeerrr... You're in loooooovvveeee!!! Come on!!XD
Sigh... I'm getting tingles. LOL..XD
You better rest for a while if you're really not feeling well. We don't want it to get worse, ja? You've been always good to us when it comes to updates!! *huggles*
Author's Response: Very good point! And Bill is extremely hard to deny... Glad it's giving you tingles! XD And, I was definitely feeling better by the end of the weekend, thanks for your good wishes!
Date: 12/13/09 12:10 am Title: [8]
Loving it, as usual. I love how I keep forgetting about the whole 'We look alike' thing until you bring it up, or rather Tom does, and then I'm going 'shit! I forgot about that', and then this whole new dimension to the story comes into play once again. Btw, I think they should deff go to a nightclub one night haha! But who can resist a little necking at the pool either? I'm so torn. Love it
Author's Response: Thank you! ...I'm glad you keep forgetting. XD It comes through every now and then, I don't think they were thinking about it constantly, of course. Ooh, nightclub! But, pool! Yeah, there's still a couple of days left to have some fun vacation interludes...
Date: 12/12/09 11:15 pm Title: [1]
Great first chapter. I thought to myself when I finished it, "I like her stuff. Why didn't I start reading this when I first saw it posted? Now I have to play catch-up." I'll do it gladly, with a smile.
Author's Response: Thank you, so much! ♥ I'm really pleased to hook you in with this story.
Date: 12/12/09 10:36 pm Title: [8]
Mmm, this was so sweet and hot, as always. I can't wait for more. Twins or no twins, I'm sure however this ends up it will be lovely. :)
Author's Response: Thank you thank you! ♥ Glad to leave you wanting more. And I really appreciate the faith in me. :)
Date: 12/12/09 10:08 pm Title: [8]
I AM SO SURE THEY'RE TWINS aahhhhh I am gonna die when the truth is revealed.
This chapter was incredibly hot, though *_* Can we have some pool sex or shower sex? Or beach sex? I mean, they're on a cruise, there has to be some sex in the water! :p
Author's Response: Ahhhh I CAN'T SAY. :P
Thank you so much! I'm really pleased you enjoyed it. Oooh, pool sex...that...I'm maybe gonna have to see if I can fit that in. Beach sex, alas. That would probably be a bit too obvious. ...OR WOULD IT. *ponders* Thanks for the great suggestions! :D
Date: 12/12/09 09:34 pm Title: [8]
So good, so cute.
And then there is that foreboding twin thing. Or is there? You kill me.
Author's Response: Very much so, yeah? :D Thank you! Or is there? is the whole question, lol.