Date: 12/18/09 11:01 am Title: [11]
*covers mouth with hands to stop the embarrassing cry that's trying to exit my lips*
god woman. just frikken god. like you killed me the with goodbye sex, cause I knew it was goodbye, from the second Bill woke up, but then the note (and Tom's subsequent goodbye) AND then Tom cutting off his hair.
*whimpers*
you've killed me.
Date: 12/18/09 10:23 am Title: [11]
This chapter was full of emotion...loved it! Bill knew he was going to tell Tom goodbye, so he initiated their love making that morning-that is both sad and beautiful to me. Now if they can just get together, talk and get the proof that they are or are not twin's and start over as lover's, brother's or both!!! Thank you for the update...you know i'll be waiting for the next chapterb29;
Date: 12/18/09 10:15 am Title: [11]
"If Bill didn't want to be with Tom anymore, then Tom would become someone else."
Go Tom!
I'm loving how adamant Tom is that they continue seeing each other. A few chapters ago he probably would have just let Bill go and wallow in self-pity, but look how far he's come thanks to his 'little brother.' I'm loving your character development and, well, everything. Thanks for updating! ♥
Date: 12/18/09 10:13 am Title: [11]
I was so nervous for this update because I knew that Bill was going to freak out and try to leave. I still wonder if Tom actually doesn't believe that they're twins, or if he's just in denial because it's much easier that way. And the end was very unexpected! I can't wait for an update
Date: 12/18/09 10:03 am Title: [11]
oh no!!! poor tom!!! =(
Date: 12/18/09 10:01 am Title: [10]
Oh man, after Tom tell's Georg and Andreas his feeling's for Bill, this happen's!!!!!!!!!! Apparently Bill was thinking more about how much they looked alike, otherwise why would he have called his aunt??
I'm dying to read the next chapter to see how they will begin to handle this...
So, off to the next chapter--->
Date: 12/18/09 08:39 am Title: [11]
I love this!!! I hope they can be together!!! XD
please continue!!
Date: 12/18/09 07:41 am Title: [11]
Omg. I'm crying now.
Bill changed Tom so much, with only a few days... They fell in love... And I fell in love with this story.
God. *wipes her tears* This chapter was... Too sad. I'm one very emotional person, and this chappy was beyond emotional itself... But I loved it. I loved it as any other chapter of this lovely story. :)
So... All I can hope, is that they're gonna make up. I don't care if they're brothers or not... They're meant for each other anyway.
Date: 12/18/09 07:23 am Title: [11]
The anguish is palpable. Those poor boys.
Date: 12/18/09 07:08 am Title: [11]
I can only begin to imagine how difficult it must be for Bill right now. I mean we all read or write twincest without turning up a fuss but it simply cant be that easy to adjust to. I hope Tom manages to get through to Bill next chapter.
Date: 12/18/09 06:50 am Title: [11]
Cornrow time! Silliness aside, this was heartbreaking...you captured the emotion of that sexual encounter perfectly.
Date: 12/18/09 05:46 am Title: [11]
Nice chapter :) poor tom :/
Date: 12/18/09 05:35 am Title: [11]
ohhh god
the sex was HOT
but then the angst made me sad...
update asap
Date: 12/18/09 05:31 am Title: [11]
cornroows! cornrowscornrows!!!
Date: 12/18/09 04:38 am Title: [11]
Bless you.
Oh, Bill. You can't hide from this.
Date: 12/18/09 03:57 am Title: [10]
...oh
:s
Author's Response: Hey, neither genre has been removed! I hope you'll still give the story a chance!
Date: 12/18/09 03:50 am Title: [11]
Ooo cornrows! They make him look oh so sexy it's sad now that they know they're brothers
Date: 12/18/09 03:45 am Title: [11]
This is.. so sweet.. and so emotionally wrought... :') I love Tom's attitude.. and I get the feeling if it hasn't sunk in all the way, when it does, his ZOMG! reaction will still be a good one. I feel very heartbroken for Bill.. but I also know Bill probably didn't steal -all- of Tom's stubbornness and craftiness in the womb. :D
Another beautiful chapter.. thank you, as always, for posting. :3
Date: 12/18/09 02:21 am Title: [1]
With a kitty-ear hat on his head! And mittens that have like, felt claw on the finger tips! Awwwww
Author's Response: SOMEONE NEEDS TO FANART THIS.