Date: 01/01/10 08:02 am Title: [15]
thank you for making my NYE a little better. i love this story and i especially love the characters. they're so alive, so real.
Date: 01/01/10 12:45 am Title: [15]
i cant remember if i already wrote a review for this story yet. lol, i read so many its hard to keep track.
this is an amazing story!
i just read about half of it tonight but thats ok because i needed a distraction while i waited for the clock to strike midnight so i can countdown to 2010(:
i love that your chapters are long and full of detail.
however, i must criticise just once! after a while, the sex scenes start to get boring once i read about 3 of them.
well not boring per se, but i just get tired of reading them. but i do anyways just incase i miss something important!
cant wait for another update-kaitlyn :D
Date: 01/01/10 12:45 am Title: [15]
i cant remember if i already wrote a review for this story yet. lol, i read so many its hard to keep track.
this is an amazing story!
i just read about half of it tonight but thats ok because i needed a distraction while i waited for the clock to strike midnight so i can countdown to 2010(:
i love that your chapters are long and full of detail.
however, i must criticise just once! after a while, the sex scenes start to get boring once i read about 3 of them.
well not boring per se, but i just get tired of reading them. but i do anyways just incase i miss something important!
cant wait for another update-kaitlyn :D
Date: 01/01/10 12:08 am Title: [15]
Thanks for the update!!! God I love this story.
Cannot wait or the next chapter...my mind is all over the place thinking of scenerio's~~~
Date: 12/31/09 10:57 pm Title: [15]
Good! Tom is finally accepting it could be true, so now they can at last work towards a solution. Jeez, took him long enough. I am a little worried about what's coming up for them, but I trust that they'll figure it out together. =)
Date: 12/31/09 09:13 pm Title: [15]
Woho. Interesting. What will happen next I wonder(: love it.
Date: 12/31/09 05:45 pm Title: [15]
I'm eager to know Bill's suggestion
Date: 12/31/09 04:45 pm Title: [15]
I love the last line of this chapter so much - it's so beautiful and poetic! but ahh im really scared of what tom is going to do now that he's starting to realize the implications of the whole twin thing o.O and is that what simone was sorry about?? not telling tom about bill?? update soon please! :)
Date: 12/31/09 03:56 pm Title: [15]
I don't know why I haven't been constantly reviewing this story, because it's definitely become one of my favourites on here. Ughh, it's so original and intruiging and fjafskl;j SO GOOD. Sorry for my lack of words there ^^;
Anyway. Wow, everything about this story is so interesting and well written. I adore the idea behind it, and all the mystery surrounding Bill and Tom being twins or not. And your descriptions are to die for, I can imagine everything here, I can almost see all these scenes playing out. The characters are just lovely, too, I love the hesitance between the two of them yet the pure love that keeps bringing them back. This chapter was superb, not only was the beginning amazingly sexy and well written, but that ending gave me chills. What a way to end the chapter! Keep up your awesome writing cuz just wow, this story is amazing =)
--StarStruck
Date: 12/31/09 03:44 pm Title: [15]
and the other shoe has finally dropped. poor Tom.
please let them find out for sure one way or another and soon.
Date: 12/31/09 01:44 pm Title: [15]
Uhhhhhhh ooooohhhhh. The shit is about to hit the fan, right?
Date: 12/31/09 01:26 pm Title: [15]
i love the story. happy new year to the story and to you, m'dear! can't wait to find out what's going on.
Date: 12/31/09 01:23 pm Title: [15]
"Oh, hell with the hot tub," Tom replied, leaning his head against Bill's. "I've got a really good feeling about the sauna."
I must agree with Tomi! It was even hotter reading the sauna scene this morning, Tay. This chapter should come with a cold shower warning! ;)
(And that little fix was perfect!)
Date: 12/31/09 01:05 pm Title: [15]
I love that you updated today! What a lovely start to my New Years Eve. I'm thinking they have to be brothers, now, but you are a tricky one so I am not entirely convinced! Thank you so much for a lovely year of twins. :D You've given me, and us all, so much twin love, I'm really glad you're in the fandom. *hearts*
Date: 12/31/09 12:44 pm Title: [15]
This is by far the best chapter, and not just because of the sauna sex ;x You're too good at this.
Date: 12/31/09 11:52 am Title: [15]
Yay ! Danke so much for this new chap :) Loved it, so hottt! Poor Tom tho... cant wait to see what happen in the next chap!
Date: 12/31/09 11:36 am Title: [15]
Awww...I'm still somehow sticking out with 'it's just coincidence', though it's more out of stubbornness than logic now xD
It would be a perfect plot twist for them to go through all this angst about it and it turn out not to be true xD
Date: 12/31/09 11:19 am Title: [15]
Oh, this chapter was so good! First of all, the sauna sex pretty much killed me. I adore well-written rimming and that was just perfect and sexy and so hot and just...guh. I'm useless now.
Then the part at the end, when Tom is struggling with his thoughts and the description of them being like snakes twisting together was just such a vivid bit of imagery. Nice.