Date: 01/14/10 10:16 pm Title: [18]
I had to take like 3 breaks reading this. I don't think it's really YOUR fault though. i'm hormonal and in the middle of cramps from hell so I'm impatient as hell -.- it's sad really.
but anyways, on to something actually meaningful, dudeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Tom shoulda known Bill was gonna go all 'OH NO HE DIDN' on his ass for the wife remark LOL. and bah they need to stop bitching about being siblings. I'm a weirdo, cause I don't really CARE either way, but yea. i'm gonna go waddle off cause I feel like a bloated marm bitching at you ;_;
Date: 01/14/10 10:10 pm Title: [18]
That was only the hottest botTOM scene ever. O.O
Date: 01/14/10 10:03 pm Title: [18]
Ahh i think they are but that makes me think i'll be wrong and they wont be twins. but then questioning that makes me think they are again! argh!
good chapter(:
cant wait for the next one!
Date: 01/14/10 09:37 pm Title: [18]
UNGH.... how on earth do you make sex that hot so sweet, fluffy and still be pantie melting. Oh dear god , I don't care if they are or aren't they just aren't made to be apart.
Date: 01/14/10 09:35 pm Title: [18]
God, I'm such a sucker for Tom bottoming. Loved the buildup to taking the test, as well. You handled the tension and nerves perfectly.
Date: 01/14/10 09:26 pm Title: [18]
WoW! That was an amazing chapter.
Date: 01/14/10 09:02 pm Title: [18]
At this point, I just hope that whatever happens, their love is strong enough to survive whatever comes in the form of this daunting DNA test.
Date: 01/14/10 08:57 pm Title: [18]
:(...if they're twins..tom will run...i just hope that by some kind of miracle..they aren't...
Date: 01/14/10 04:13 am Title: [17]
Finally finished this chapter. I'm really loving the story and I MUST know how it ends!
Date: 01/07/10 10:56 pm Title: [17]
So lovely. I can't wait to see what happens... and I totally think Tom should let Bill do him. :)
Date: 01/07/10 07:38 pm Title: [17]
ooh, bill topping tom sounds incredibly hot. thanks for the fabulous long updates!!
Date: 01/07/10 06:19 pm Title: [17]
Have I already mentioned how much I love the long chapters?
I cant wait for the next update :D
Will you be doing a sequel or do you think the sotry will be pretty much summed up?
Either way- I cant wait for more!
Date: 01/07/10 05:28 pm Title: [17]
oh my god. finally a story where bill maybe be tops and not bottoms for once! i love you ! haha
Date: 01/07/10 02:56 pm Title: [17]
i loooove that pic
and Hoggle is such a nice name,good choice
i like them together like lovers and i hope that they're not twins....ohhh pleaseeee
i can't stand the drama...
mooooore
Date: 01/07/10 02:10 pm Title: [17]
*GASP* NOO!!! Tom can't be an asshole to Bill again!!! He can't ruin it!!!!
Date: 01/07/10 01:52 pm Title: [17]
This pic is definitely too cute for words!!! I loved this chapter (which one did I NOT love?) as usual. I was a bit concerned that things would change between them as Bill discovers Tom's daily routine but it hasn't happened...yet. We'll see what happens in next chapter and I hope that Tom will let Bill get his way with...you know what ^^
Date: 01/07/10 01:27 pm Title: [17]
*waves the 'oh god, yes' flag for some top!Bill!*
I like that, even in spite of Tom's concerns, when they're just together, they're just so SMOOSHY. It's only when Tom starts thinking that things get awkward. Tom really needs to learn not to think so much.
Date: 01/07/10 01:22 pm Title: [17]
.."Bill pushed his tongue right in and helped himself."...- i loved this line XD
i'm so curious to see the results of the test...i hope that even if they are brothers they can still be together...but tom has to get rid of the demons in his head first...i think it will be easier for bill to accept than him...
Date: 01/07/10 12:51 pm Title: [17]
Georg's "Oh, my God, you're too good for him" was definitely my highlight for this chapter - I loved that part so much.
Then again the part where Bottom!Tom was a possibility... yum. I hope this happens before the DNA test. I have a feeling he'll freak out if they really were twins D: