Date: 01/15/10 08:02 am Title: [18]
Awwww and still going with 'they aren't' lol
Not, if my brain hadn't exploded/melted from the hot smut scene, this review would be longer/better xDD
Date: 01/15/10 05:36 am Title: [18]
Holy crap. Yeah, um. I may have to make note of this chapter next time anyone says Bill shouldn't top or Tom wouldn't bottom. Whew...
Date: 01/15/10 05:14 am Title: [18]
ohhhh i don't like when Tom bottoms but this was hot...
and i think that they are twins
Date: 01/15/10 05:03 am Title: [18]
OMG you wrote that top!Bill so well, it flows naturally though I prefer top!Tom. I really want to know the result of the test and hope that they won't be twins **cross fingers** cause what they have here is so great and natural and...
I know it's just a story but I really feel for them and you're the one making this happen. Thanks!
Date: 01/15/10 03:01 am Title: [18]
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
they... are/n't. SO THERE. I win either way. :P Lovely lovely chapter, I adored Bill topping, it was so right. :)
Date: 01/15/10 02:54 am Title: [18]
OH MY GOD. You expect ANYTHING coherent after that? Jesus, Tay. *sweats*
Date: 01/15/10 02:28 am Title: [18]
I can't wait to find out, and see how thy handle it, whatever the answer may be. great chapter, thank you so much!!
Date: 01/15/10 02:25 am Title: [18]
*sucks in breath*
*exhales*
I don't think I realized how much I freaking loved Bottom!Tom until this moment.. You just write him so well.. it was adorable with just the right hint of uncertainty (and I love the bit about Bill's nails.. "Sometime within the last twenty-four hours, and that's all I'm saying," Heehee.. ). I adored this chapter so much it's ridiculous.. :D :) :3
Thank you!
Date: 01/15/10 02:24 am Title: [18]
OMG-i'm having an internal battle over if I want them to be twin's or not!!!
That chapter was so many thing's in one...damn, what a story.
Bill & Tom together are seriously sexy and H*O*T as hell...you need to add a warning-*Read at your own risk~may need multiple cold shower's* HOLYSMOKE'S
Date: 01/15/10 01:32 am Title: [18]
"He was being fucked by a man; there was nothing unmanly about what they did together."
Love that line!
I'm so not used to Tom being being on bottom. I like it.
Date: 01/15/10 01:23 am Title: [18]
ahhhh... i dont know if i want them to be or not....either way they have to stay together...forever. LOVE IT! GREAT WORK!
Date: 01/15/10 01:20 am Title: [1]
Please,please,please don`t let them be twins.I want a really happy ending.The chapter was amazing as allways.HOT!
Date: 01/15/10 12:26 am Title: [18]
I don't like when Tom bottoms, but damn...that was hot. Not to be crude, but phew. That was something, alright. You're driving me mad with the are they or aren't they mystery. I seriously can't bring myself to either conclusion, but my hopes are they they aren't related. Can't wait! 8D
Date: 01/15/10 12:05 am Title: [18]
i really like how much you discussed tom's feeling of being a man in here, and i agree - it's not unmanly to get fucked. also, OBVS very hot. i still have my theory that they won't read the results tomorrow.
Date: 01/15/10 12:02 am Title: [18]
T____________T *totally dead* ps about that comment on your LJ "Blue of Desire" post today.. well I'll warm you up now. no longer sad XDD
Date: 01/14/10 11:28 pm Title: [18]
I never once thought about them not being twins O.o until you mentioned the are they aren't they theory. Huh. That was HOT. I don't like to read bottom!Tom but you write it so wonderfully that I couldn't help but enjoy it. Bill makes a sexy top, which is why he's so worth reading het for. Lol
Date: 01/14/10 11:27 pm Title: [18]
Holey Smokes! At this point, I'm about half and half on that debate...Lovin' the sex though. ;)
Date: 01/14/10 10:46 pm Title: [18]
Something new alkdfjg it was even better than I thought it would be. And now I want to read this chapter forever and never move on to the next one, because oh my god it could break my heart. And theirs. ;_; For some reason, though... I can't help but think it might be left ambiguous? Tom might realize it doesn't matter either way, because he loves Bill so very much? lksdjfgd I DON'T KNOW.
Date: 01/14/10 10:42 pm Title: [18]
omg that was freaking HOT!! H O T !!
I will accept whichever way you make the test results turn out to be..but I soo hope that they are not brothers. I dont want them to always have those weird doubts in the back of their heads wondering if they should really be together or the fear of ever being found out that they are brothers, or more so the fear of someone finding out and also finding out that they themselves knew they were brothers and kept on with their relationship.
Date: 01/14/10 10:27 pm Title: [18]
Omg danke so much for this amazing and long chap! Cant wait for this mail delivery! Soon please :D