Date: 01/23/10 12:13 pm Title: [1]
this story is one of the best i've ever read on this site. i LOVE it :3
*gives hug*
Date: 01/23/10 12:12 pm Title: [19]
end?? :(
i'm glad tom has make that decision...if they were really twins i think he wouldn't be able to get together with bill
(but i'm a bit curious if they were twins..guess i'll never know ehe)
great fic thanks :)
Date: 01/23/10 11:13 am Title: [19]
Oh wow, I was surprised that Tom tore up the letter, but that's really the perfect ending, because before that I found myself thinking that even if it was the result he wanted, that they weren't related, they would both always have it in their mind that Tom would have left otherwise. This ended perfectly, with happiness and sweetness and the promise of sexy times. ;) I really loved this! :)
Date: 01/23/10 10:53 am Title: [19]
Woowwwww ! My god I'm speechless now, but I'll try to express my thoughts anyway. :) First of all, thanks so, so much for this amazing journey. Seriously, I don't remember a story where I was that excited to see an update. All of the chapters were awesome and the story as a whole is definitely one of my favorite of all time. You are one of the most talented authors here, no doubt about that. I hope you continue writing because I just can't wait to read other stories from you.
About the ending, I didn't really thought about how I want it to end, the only thing I knew was that they needed to stay together. After reading the ending you planned since the beginning, I must say it couldn't have been better. It fits the characters development and to me, it's the perfect ending.
I'm really sad that this story has come to an end. Seeing a new chapter of At sea for you always made my day. I'm looking forward to read your future stories. Thanks again for sharing your talent.
Date: 01/23/10 10:19 am Title: [19]
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So, this is one of the fics I ended up saving, to read in one go. That's a compliment btw - I only do that when the anguish of waiting for updates might actually kill me, lol!
Omg, where to start! This fic is so, so beautiful. It's everything I want in a fic.
I love how, as a reader, I really felt the intensity of their relationship - how much they loved each other. But how there was still that nervous, unsure element too. So sweet.
I was kind of terrified for them when the whole twins issue popped up. I was a bit shocked by that, lol. I thought this was going to be centered on the 'holiday romance' and what happens next. That added a great twist.
But I love how this ended. I didn't want them to end up not being twins, but I didn't see how Tom would realistically just decide it was ok, if they were either. I didn't even consider that they might not find out :) It was so perfect!
Also, I love how Hoggle was fully involved. Lol. Our dogs are on the front line for everything, so that made me laugh.
I want to thank you for writing this. Fics like this are the reason I want to read them in the first place. I loved every chapter.
Adds to faves ...
Date: 01/23/10 09:09 am Title: [19]
i give u the biggest and longest hug of all!!
i..i...so much love this story that ima gonna die!!! (wth,....how do i write die?..lol)
hmm...what do u say about a squel?...abouut how the world will be talking about them...and theyre basic life and so on..pleaseeeee think about it!!!
ohhh ad for the ed of the story is THE perfect song from lost *life and death*...just pefect...it made me laugh and cry at the same tme!! try it out everyone!
thank u for the looooovley story!!
Date: 01/23/10 08:50 am Title: [19]
I literally didn't breathe for 12 paragraphs. I was expecting tears but not the good kind. I'm sorry to see go.
*hugs*
Date: 01/23/10 08:35 am Title: [19]
couldn't have ended better. i'm sad to let this story go...
thank you for being such an amazing writer!
Date: 01/23/10 08:06 am Title: [19]
i think this is the best ending... i was so scared that it was going to be true.
i love this story so much, sad to see it end but here's to another :)
Date: 01/23/10 07:52 am Title: [19]
I knew! I knew! that they wouldn't open the results. You make it ends perfectly. thanks for this amazing experience
Date: 01/23/10 07:13 am Title: [19]
awesome end to awesome story) thank you so so much)
Date: 01/23/10 05:35 am Title: [19]
I've been DYING for this last chapter, and you ended it just the way I thought you would. I think we (the readers) all have an opinion of whether they are or aren't, and I like that you left us to think what we want, and still know Bill and Tom are going to be happy together.
Date: 01/23/10 05:15 am Title: [19]
this journey with you was wonderful
u delighted my heart
keep up with writing amazing stories
Date: 01/23/10 04:53 am Title: [19]
When Tom ripped that letter apart, I was so relieved he realized the things that truly mattered. The final chapter was very sweet and fitting.
I just love this fic so much, from start to end.
Date: 01/23/10 04:25 am Title: [19]
*hugs*
I think it was so, so amazing that they never found out for sure; I was actually dreading the letter, either way, just because it would be so anti-climactic. Great job!
Date: 01/23/10 04:14 am Title: [19]
Kay, I read this hoping it would be like "got ya! not the end!" but it really was... so heres my review.
*DIES*
I honestly don't know what i'll do without this story, it has taken me to new emotional extremes. I have never NOT wanted the twins to be twins before sooooo badly. Jesus, this chapter made my heart ACHE as they sat down to open the results. I was so torn and I think I was just as relieved as Tom was not to know. I knew in my heart they were, but it was best that they didn't, so that they could have eachother. Whew, sorry about this long ass thing, I just had to say goodbye and thank you. It was an epic bby, you did an amazing job.
Date: 01/23/10 03:15 am Title: [19]
AAHH ITS THE END?! *mouth trembles* This was so good...I LOVED EVERY INCH OF IT! But damn, I was looking forward to that paparazzi thing and everyone gaping on how gorgeous Bill is, how happy Tom is, and Toms new haircut. WELL I GUESS THATS UP TO MY IMAGINATION NOW, LOL.
THAAANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS, IT WAS A LOVELY TRIP! MWAAH!
Date: 01/23/10 02:33 am Title: [19]
Oh thank goodness you updated! Very excited. I've been waiting to read the last bits, and I'm glad they got up.
I loved the way you ended this by the way. Perfect.
"Tom began to sweat, sour fear emanating from his pores, and he couldn't meet Bill's eyes."
Right there, right there I was thinking "Oh my god, we're not gonna know!" And I almost squealed.
Than I did squeal, slightly, haha, when Tom ripped the papers up.
I think it was good to end it that way. Instead of breaking our little hearts over the possibility of them seperating. Though I don't think you'd have done that. You seem more of a 'happy ending' person to me. :)
It was really great, the whole story and not just the ending. So glad I read it.
Bill proved to be a very positive change in Toms life, and made it better for him. :D
Thanxs for the story, it was wonderful.
Hugs,
Date: 01/23/10 01:42 am Title: [1]
ohgod. It says it's completed... I don't wanna read it! I don't want this to be the end bby... this is truely sad. I will try to read it and not cry, but I'm not making promises. If I can't respond properly, I loved it bby. Thanks so much.