Date: 03/12/23 06:57 pm Title: Chapter Six
I have left a review on another story of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too! I LOVE when the Twins are adorable and sweet and love each other!
Date: 08/30/16 03:38 am Title: Chapter Twelve
this was a good story!
Date: 06/16/13 06:02 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Wow, what a story.
So much drama, love, happiness, misunderstandings… And it is also very well written.
Thank your for writing this great story and sharing it.
Date: 11/21/12 06:52 am Title: Chapter Twelve
this was a good story!
Date: 02/10/12 06:38 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Okay, just for starters; I normally do not like bot!Tom fics. I prefer Tom playing the dominantive role; he can still be sweet, shy, timid, and kind, but also powerful and strong and also the one dishing out the cuddles and not just recieving. I have to say I wasn't a huge fan of Tom being so.... submissive and girly? (I cannot come up with any other words, sorry >.<) BUT (and that's a big but) I absolutley adored this fic :) I liked the way you described all the emotions, I loved the plot, I loved the relationship between Bill and Tom. I am more of a bot!Bill kind of person, but when there is a mix between the two (bot!Tom and bot!Bill) I do rather enjoy it a little more ^-^
I think you did an amazing job on this fic! It was absolutely brilliant! So sweet, so cute, and so very, very sexy ;) Pat on the back for you! And some cookies.
Oh (and this is probably very late) but congrats! On your baby girl being born :3 I hope she's healthy and happy ♥
Date: 07/06/11 05:47 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Normally I try and stick to the slash stories that are twincest-not related but I just had to read this one. I'm glad I did. I think the way you wrote the twins' relationship in the beginning is exactly how things would be if they had feelings for each other. Also, I think the progression of things was perfect. It was nice to see Tom let go of his inhibitions and just let Bill in. This was a beautiful story and I am definitely adding it to my favourite's!
Date: 01/02/11 04:41 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
I loved it
Author's Response: Thank you :-)
Date: 12/27/10 11:29 am Title: Chapter Three
Hey you have a mistake somewere here :-“Of shadow people.” Tom laughed quietly and held onto Tom tightly.- And it's a little confusing to me.You said:
-“And you grabbed the back of my neck and forced my lips against yours.” Tom said dryly and Bill bit his lip. -and then -“I remember that.” He felt Tom’s grip loosen around his body and he started to fear losing everything, losing all that they had started to accomplish. -
So,Tom was the one who kissed Bill.
“Well, why’d you do it?”
“I wanted to.” Bill shrugged and sighed. “I don’t know, Tom. You were on me, feeling heavy and right and I felt safe and warm so I kissed you, but then…........so here you say that Bill kissed Tom?clarify this please:D
It's a very well written story,you know,but a lil confusing to me:-s
I'm about to think that you changed names in the end .you just thought that Tom's character would fit better on Bill.This is it?:D
Author's Response: I don't remember. I wrote this a while ago. ;shrug; Too lazy to change it now hahaha Thanks though.
Date: 07/09/10 08:39 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
This was so weird, but good, so much drama, tom bottoming... But different it's always good!
Author's Response: Well thank you!
Date: 04/17/10 05:28 pm Title: Chapter Six
hmmmmm. lol u popped your bot~Tom cherry. i wasn't expecting that. im used to you writing bill bottoming so it was nice. i like its its full of fluff and smut at the same time. have i ever told you how much i love your writing? yes? well too bad i'm telling you again. i love your writing its amazing!
Author's Response: Eeee thanks so much! xo :D
Date: 04/09/10 11:17 pm Title: Chapter One
EEEEEPPp. I loved this :) soo so so much. I liked how bill was more in control in this, You dont seee it in many fics, well the ones ive read.
I love all your storys :) and this was just another added to the list!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! xox
Date: 03/27/10 11:53 am Title: Chapter Twelve
love ! :D
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/20/10 08:28 am Title: Chapter Six
*shudders* bottom Tom.... *shudders more* Not my thing.
And yet this fic is still amazingly well written ! :):)
Author's Response: Hehe thank you! Yeah it was a bit strange for me to write, too! :p
Date: 03/20/10 08:22 am Title: Chapter Four
If you want to kiss me, kiss me. If you want to touch me then go ahead and touch me. I’m yours you know. I was born with you so you could keep me. We split into two people so you wouldn’t ever feel lonely.
That right there made my heart melt and I almost started weeping, I swear. Beautiful and twisted and lovely and awesome
Author's Response: Awww, thank you!! xoxo
Date: 03/20/10 08:07 am Title: Chapter Two
*giggles*
Okay, the story I love,but the thing that makes me smile are your little notes.
CONGRATS on your baby :D ^_^
Author's Response: Aww thanks!! xoxo
Date: 03/20/10 08:00 am Title: Chapter One
Gotta love the plot! I've been reading so many PWP stories recently that this is incredibly refreshing ^_^
Author's Response: Aww, thank you!!
Date: 02/06/10 06:07 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
That was truly, truly amazing. As awkward as it was to read this with a "Protector of the Damned" ad with a scary werewolf along the side of it, I still loved every minute of it. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.
Author's Response: sorry for the lateness of this reply, but thank you!!
Date: 02/05/10 01:52 am Title: Chapter Two
def not rushed or awful XD
Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry for the late reply!
Date: 01/08/10 02:38 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Oh boy, they got a long way to go. BUT I think Tom is doing much better.
Author's Response: :D
Date: 01/04/10 02:02 am Title: Chapter Twelve
First, so much hugs and happiness and best wishes for your daughter! I hope everything went well and she's alright, and you're having a great time getting to know each other. Now, on to the fic, phew. So full of emotions, and hotness in this last chapter (I honestly feel like I was there, which pretty much ruins the thought ;). And the last paragraph, it made my heart ache because it was so true in all the good and the bad. Great job!
Author's Response: Oh, me and Dresden are doing lovely! She is in love with me just as much as I am in love with her. :3 And thank you so much!!