Date: 12/07/09 03:41 pm Title: Chapter Six
wow! i was not expecting botTOM sex. i have to say that, i absolutely LOVED it! i love how desperate and needy Tom is. I so love his character like that cause somehow, no matter how hard he tries to be, i figure that's what he's really like..haha!
Author's Response: I can see him being extremely fragile in real life, too. :3 The 'bad boy player' image wore off in 2005 Hahaha. :D Thanks!!
Date: 12/07/09 03:03 pm Title: Chapter Six
I battled with myself whether or not to even leave this review just because its prolly not the best one you could ever receive. I love your writing style, and even though i saw the bot!Tom coming long before this chapter (and i still didnt stop reading, because i was so goddamn curious lol) it still shocked me a little to read Bill spreading Tom open and licking him out rather than the other way around. Seeing Tom like this, like the needy one, their reversed "personas" is odd in its entirety for me. I sit here after reading it, and I wonder whether or not i liked it, because i honestly cant tell, and if its even something i could find believable. I'm not sure if i could ever see it being this way, you know, in real life, but i certainly credit you for really trying something i havent really seen before. (done well, that is, and this was, very, very well done)
Aside from Tom, you managed to keep Bill being Bill, and i think that was the best part. that even with Tom off in his own emo hole, Bill was the same person he is everywhere else (and i mean that in a good way too, i suppose he's the Bill everyone kind of agrees he is? Fic wise? Because no one really knows about real life. XD) I really loved that about this chapter, and the whole fic, was that Bill was Bill, if that makes any sense. ^^'
So. Thats my review. Please dont take it the wrong way, because even though I have a certain hostility toward bottom Tom fics, this was done very, very well.
~HJ
Author's Response: Well like I've said many times, you can't please everyone! :-P I think people are too caught up in the fake personas that TH gives out to please the fandom, in all honesty. As you said yourself, no one who isn't close to them really has no idea. Haha. Anyway, thanks for the honesty! Besides... Real life? Well, we all know Bill has Tom wrapped around his finger. LOL. Just kiddin'. :-P
Date: 12/07/09 02:08 pm Title: Chapter Six
O_O OH MY GAWD. I should have read this chapter right here with a few glasses of wine.....cuz goooooooot damn...I need a drink.
That shizz was hot xD.
YAY botTom!!! you popped my botTom reading cherry cuz I've never read one before! After this, I'll definitely read another ^_^
Author's Response: Hehehe. I never used to read BotTom either, nor have I ever written it. :3 It was an exciting new challenge hehe!
Date: 12/07/09 01:34 pm Title: Chapter Six
YAY for Top!Bill! This was so hot & so sweet - the perfect combination
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D
Date: 12/07/09 11:58 am Title: Chapter Six
I think I'm not a botTOM convert. :) That was gooooood.
xx
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 12/07/09 05:54 am Title: Chapter Six
Best botTom i've EVER read, oh my GOD!
and I, I.. HATE Tom bottoming! hah
i'm changing teams. oh dear.
thanks!
Author's Response: Ohh, I am glad you liked it then! :D
Date: 12/07/09 03:49 am Title: Chapter Six
I lovelovelovelove x 10000 how you made Bill the natural top. It was so obvious since the beginning and I loved it!
Amazing story, like always :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D
Date: 12/07/09 02:29 am Title: Chapter Six
Dear GODDESS that was HOT! Damn, woman! *___* I really loved how slow you went with it. It was paced beautifully.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Date: 12/07/09 02:17 am Title: Chapter Six
Oh my gosh, my question answered! Lol xD
I've been wondering since like chapter two if this would be a botTom fic and lo and behold, I was right.
Surprisingly, I really like you writing them like this. I mean, normally I can put up with botTom but this, this has captured me.
I love Tom like this really and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I'm glad! Thanks so much!
Date: 12/07/09 01:43 am Title: Chapter Six
damn that was sooooooo hot. I had no idea Bill would top, and I love Top!Bill. That was incredible. WOW.
Author's Response: Hehe thank you! I like Top!Bill, too. :3
Date: 12/07/09 01:15 am Title: Chapter Six
That's an ealy Merry Christmas for damn sure!!!!!!!!! Good god how hot was that?? I love when Bill is hot, horny and in control-even if he did tell Tom he was calling the shot's-lol
This was worth waiting for!
Author's Response: :3 Thank ya!!
Date: 12/07/09 01:09 am Title: Chapter Six
gah i love love love botTOM, gah so much. Honestly my theory is that tom would be the bottom, because yougner siblings are usally more foreful and the older tends to submit to the younger (especially when they are really close in age) sure there are exceptions, but i see it as a general rule.
lol, so ja in short i basically died over this fic beacaus ei am always looking for some good botTOM. lol gah LOUVELOVELOVED it
Author's Response: Hehehe thanks so much!! :D I am glad you liked it!
Date: 12/07/09 12:50 am Title: Chapter Six
woah babe! that was so fucking amazing!!! i loved it a lot!!! update soon and say hello to baby cinnamon roll for me, okay? much love!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I patted Dresden on the head for you. :3
Date: 12/07/09 12:36 am Title: Chapter Six
Tom is a fucking beast.
~smiles~
I think you to TB better than BB, it is a very hard thing to pull off. I think after this if you're up to it, you should try another mini series/story with TB.
Author's Response: I just might. :3 Thank you!
Date: 12/07/09 12:21 am Title: Chapter Six
Christmas smut=Love. Just sayin....lol!
Author's Response: Hahah! Nothin' else much like it. :3
Date: 12/07/09 12:08 am Title: Chapter Six
Wow, that was hot. You have fried my brain! :)
Author's Response: Then my work here is done! :3
Date: 12/07/09 12:04 am Title: Chapter Six
I loved it, absolutly fucking amazing, I never would have thought you would do boTom lolz but it wuz amazing. Cant wait for the next update XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Haha, yeah I decided to try out somethin' new. :3 Thank you!! xo
Date: 12/06/09 11:50 pm Title: Chapter Six
Mmm, I disagree, I think I like your bottom!Bill better, but never-the-less, this got me all hot and bothered. I'm thinking a cold shower is in order. <3
Author's Response: Hahaha. :D
Date: 12/06/09 05:53 pm Title: Chapter Five
Damn... You are such a teaser! This is so good and sweet that I'm just giggling here happily. Adorable twins! I really love your characterizing here, esp. for Tom. His character is so sweet and I'm completely falling in love with his character. His uncertainty is unresistable. That combined to Bill's determent tenderness... Absolutely adorable writing! I'm waiting so much for them to go further... Hot and fluffy and cute. Awww :)
Author's Response: :D Yay! Thanks so much!
Date: 12/06/09 12:33 am Title: Chapter Five
lol...I'm hangin on a cliffie!!!
Author's Response: Hehe. Don't fall! ;D