Date: 12/04/09 01:02 am Title: These images in my head: 3
Eh, it's not too short/bad. It's moving the storyline along so yeaa, it can sometimes become a drag. haa Also, I just wanna say that I think you're really good at describing scenes. I've never read someone smoking with dancing smokes mixing of blue and gray! This story is really nice! =}
-You are so welcome for the banner. It was my pleasure. =}
Author's Response: Aw, sorry to hear that. I'll try harder. And I try to be extremely descriptive to make up for the shortness. All stories have their drag moments. :P
Date: 12/02/09 10:19 pm Title: My little brother :2
For some reason, the contact thing wouldn't grant access for me to send the banner to you. Oh well... Maybe it's just my sometimes really tweaked computer. *sigh* Anyway, I finished it. I was supposed to be doing some kind of essay but I got stuck so hey, might as well could've took the hour or so to make this for ya. =}
Like it? I could create another if it sucks. hahaa The pic of Bill is from the Spring Nicht video and the beautiful women is actually Scarlett Johansson with photoshopped greener eyes and brown to a very 'Hayley Williams in Decode' red hair. That pic belong to Getty and yadda yadda. lol I hope you like it! =} Also, I can't wait for that third chapter. xD
Author's Response: You freakin' rock! Thank you so much! It's amazing! OMG, I owe you!rn<3333
Date: 11/30/09 08:24 pm Title: My little brother :2
Of course, Tom would notice something's wrong. ;} And you know sometimes, you don't even have to be their twin. There's just that love and when it's strong enough, it can tell you what's wrong. (Okay, that was really sappy. lol) Anyway, we're moving along and I'm satisfied! =D There were minor mistakes and I'm not in a nit-pick mood, to be honest. I want to know if Bill's going to see the seemingly magical woman again too. Maybe when? ;}
-About your chapter notes for this chapter, I totally understand how you feel! I have a story up that has read count of something like 100 or something people and only one person reviewed. It's kind of disappointing because you always want people to praise you for the hard work you did to update a story. Even so, I keep updating and even that one review keeps me going. Sometimes, that's all you really need. I just want to say don't get discouraged by review count because that one review can be all it takes. (I'm such a hopeless optimistic. lol)
--You need a banner, eh? Well, I believe I could help you out there! =} Although I'm not listed as a banner maker on this site, I'm always offering to help. I could try for you if you wanted me to. All I would need is thorough description (I like to be on the safe side and keep the author's interest in mind) and give me about two, or three days. If you have your own pictures you want to use, send me their links in an Author's Response (or send me an email which you can do by contacting me from my page) to this review or give me a time period of the characters because Bill in particular has varied hairstyles throughout his career. I get the feeling he's got the spiky hair in this fic, but a picture says a thousand words. =D
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! , i was getting frustrated only cos i was eager to put this up, but i like more than 1 review cos i gotta know what im doing right and wrong. its the only way ill learn!nnAny ways, you're a life saver! Time has no limit, take your time. And the only thing i ask that i want done specific, is the OFC's looks. Dark red hair, green eyes (dark or pale,) and use a pic of Bill (in his Scream years), where he's looking almost pained/frustrated. And the rest is up to you! nThankyou!<3
Date: 11/30/09 07:53 pm Title: Heated: 1
Crappy? No such a thing! I enjoyed it. I'm not really into the vampfics but what the hay, I'm giving this a try. =} I like how you're portraying Bill in this fic and it makes me wonder why Georg and Tom are so mischevious. It's so in-character (for Tom and Georg) that it seems almost out-of-character, you know? Interesting... =D This Jaquelyn seems like a really promising character, too! Her description seems to meet the eye and some of her properies pulled me in like when Bill said he was so cold and and when he touched her, his hand was still savoring the heat. That and how her eyes are a glowing green. Also, on the funnier note, I can't believe Bill wasted a drink like that. He just threw it on the street, and it was clearly still full because his trembling caused it to spill over. These are recession times for the Americans! lol Nice job. =}
Author's Response: Thankyou so much! You made my night with your nice comment! i hope you stick around! <3
Date: 11/29/09 07:33 am Title: Heated: 1
It wasn't crappy.. I liked it :) Please continue ;D