Date: 01/29/10 07:00 am Title: Unschuld
I loved it.
Author's Response: =D Thnx. Glad to know you enoyed it.
Date: 12/25/09 01:38 am Title: Unschuld
Twice, I read it twice already and the feeling's beautifully described.
Going to read the next of your stories.
Date: 12/25/09 01:28 am Title: Unschuld
Twice, I read it twice already and the feeling's beautifully described.
Going to read the next of your stories.
Author's Response: Ohmygosh, Velia, you're too much. I'm thinking of making another companion to "Red Sky" Not sure
Date: 12/01/09 09:24 pm Title: Unschuld
Thank you SO SO much for the dedication =) I really appreciate that!
And this was super cute yet slightly angsty with Tom's thoughts, which I always love. I like the way you started each part with "innocence is", it gave it a nice flow. And the idea itself was very nice and quite adorable, though the end leaves it very open. Which, of course, isn't a bad thing ;) My only crit is that there's some small grammar issues and it's short, but lol, being short is sometimes a good thing and I think it worked effectively here. Anyway, thanks again and nice job on this oneshot ^.^
Author's Response: OMG!!!! YOU REVIWED!!! Really, the end is very open?? O.O I never thought... But THANK YOU THANK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH!!!! IT REALLY HONORS ME TAHT YOU REVIEWED!!!!rn
Date: 11/29/09 07:03 pm Title: Unschuld
Hello
This was beautiful, though short. Is there any sequel waiting to see publishing light?
I do really love to see if Bill's "I love you," meant hte same for him than it did for Tom.
Greetings!
Velia
Author's Response: O.O oh!! I didn't ACTUALLY expect for someone to ask for a sequel. I'm touched. You really made me feel shy. I'm not sure if I'll have a sequel but I'll probably do one from Bill's perspective, though I'm not sure if I will do another one.rnOh, and Greetings back to you too!!!rn:D
Date: 11/28/09 10:20 pm Title: Unschuld
This was really sweet. It made me smile. =)
Author's Response: Aww, Thank you. I feel so warm and fuzzy inside.rn:D
Date: 11/28/09 08:37 pm Title: Unschuld
it's so innocent.
Author's Response: Thnx, It must have been annoying after awhile to read "Innocence is when" but I try to.
Date: 11/28/09 07:31 pm Title: Unschuld
=D imma review cause im awesome like this, and i love this one shot =] it was awesome :D
Author's Response: THANKIES!!! YOU HELP CONTRIBUTE IT AS WELL!!! :D AND YOU DESERVE A CHOCOLATE CAKE FOR BEING MY FIRST EVER REVIEWER!!!rnrn