Date: 11/19/12 01:10 pm Title: First Snow
i thought that would be i nice story about hot making up sex...wrong!!! now i'm depressed :(
Date: 05/08/10 05:46 am Title: First Snow
Not going to lie, I'm very bummed after reading this.
Author's Response: im sorry ):
Date: 04/22/10 03:25 pm Title: First Snow
Wow! This is great!
I'm so curious to know exactly how Bill and Tom ended up like this and if things between them changed after the story.
But at the same time I have to admit that I do love a well written ambiguous ending which this definately is.
Very nice! :]
Date: 02/09/10 02:07 am Title: First Snow
Brrr. That was cold. Emotionally cold. At least Bill got the snow angel.
Date: 12/28/09 05:58 pm Title: First Snow
Oh my, this is beautifully written, but ever so sad. It's heartbreaking to see Bill like this. Despite the tragedy of it all, I still really liked this fic :)
Date: 12/12/09 07:12 pm Title: First Snow
Damn it, that was a sick little story.
Date: 11/28/09 05:46 am Title: First Snow
Wow, I don't think I've ever read another story like that. It was unique and awkward, but I actually mean that in a good way. lol. Snow as lube was indeed unrealistic, and fat!Tom is really gross, and raggedy naked Bill w pastic covered furniture is also...*shudder*... but u know what? I still really really liked the story!! It was crazy and I actually wish it was longer. It was kind of brilliant in a way I think. :)
Was the inspiration for this story the plastic-covered furniture by any chance?
Date: 11/27/09 03:25 am Title: First Snow
I think i'm a little sad after this, thinking of them ever treating eachother that way. And i seriously love fat tom, LOL omg xD
Date: 11/27/09 02:13 am Title: First Snow
poor confused, lonely Crazy-Bill. i can't imagine Tom fat xD LOL good job, Cheeky!
Date: 11/27/09 12:19 am Title: First Snow
So Bill's kinda out of his mind and Tom's disgusting. Great. Way to depress me.
Date: 11/26/09 10:59 pm Title: First Snow
The scariest thing of all, is that I can see it. In some fucked up way, I can imagine all of this happening. I'd rather not. Haha. A wonderfully written story. However... now I'm depressed. (But I have to admit, I've been thinking about writing something like this for a while now.)
Date: 11/26/09 10:28 pm Title: First Snow
Eww fat Tom. Probably clumsy too.
Date: 11/26/09 10:13 pm Title: First Snow
........COLD KILLS BONERS! lol. This was amusing. lol
Date: 11/26/09 08:28 pm Title: First Snow
god that was beautiful but it made me so sad.i seriously felt like crying during reading it
Date: 11/26/09 07:43 pm Title: First Snow
wow....was not expecting that ending!!
Date: 11/26/09 07:00 pm Title: First Snow
Yay, angry snow porn!!! It made me happy. Mainly because Bill walks around naked =]
Date: 11/26/09 06:22 pm Title: First Snow
that was totally awesome
Date: 11/26/09 06:13 pm Title: First Snow
OH MY GAWD!!!!! SOOO HAWTTT!!
Date: 11/26/09 06:05 pm Title: First Snow
That was so weird! Fat Tom? LOL!
Seriously though, I think this has potential to be a multi chapter. Not that I'd ever tell someone how a fic should be written! I just mean the characters and the relationship between them is interesting and maybe worth exploring.
Date: 11/26/09 05:21 pm Title: First Snow
in the snow? ouch. crazy twins.
xx