Date: 12/09/09 04:41 am Title: Chapter 3
Yay an update. I'm looking forward to seeing how long you decide to make them (and us) wait until they actually meet each other (if they ever do). Sigh, if only this kind of thing happened in real life.
Author's Response: Okay, we just submitted CHapter 4 and I would really like to know what you think about the direction we took. SO, please review.
Date: 12/07/09 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love this! Update soon.
Date: 12/06/09 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
and just by the way. Glimmerdust? I am 14 years old, and I live in Norway. Our language is probably as far from English as you can come, and I have no connection to England or America or any English speaking country at all. But, I happen to know exactly what "I realize it's an antiquiated notion" means. Haha. But, i guess my english is just a little bit better then Bill's anyway xD And. please update! IT HAS BEEN MORE THEN A FEW DAS NOW!
Author's Response: I am so sorry Honey. I've had a rough few days. The last day of August my son died, and with Christmas coming, I just couldn't handle very well. I'm back and feeling much better. It will be up tomorrow night.
Date: 12/06/09 06:33 am Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait for the next chapter, so as i have already said; please, please update! : - DDDDDDDDD
Date: 12/03/09 11:42 am Title: Chapter 1
your welcome this is a really great fic =]
Date: 12/03/09 05:58 am Title: Chapter 2
hmmm when you put it that way. I suppose I have other choice but to review. I love how the stoey is progressing so far! And after hearing yah'll talk about it last night it is going to be good!!
Date: 12/02/09 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm really enjoying this story. It's heaps more believable than most other online chatroom stories
Author's Response: Thank you!We're working on the next chap. Keep your eyes peeled, and PLEASE let us know if we stay believable or not. It's hard to walk the fine line.
Date: 12/01/09 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think she's finally gonna believe him yay! =D
Author's Response: Maybe... :) But do you really think it's going to be that easy? Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 12/01/09 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ohhhh man you got to keep writing pleasseeeeeee
this is really good =]
Author's Response: I promise to keep writing as long as you keep reviewing... how's that for a bribe? :D But seriously, we so appreciate your response. This idea could have gone horribly wrong, but we're glad to see that the chance we took paid off. THANK YOU!
Date: 12/01/09 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
OK I offically really like this. Its realistic and interesting. I would love to read more of this, I am hooked. But If I did have one critisism it would be that to keep it realistic you need to be careful of the range of the boys language knowledge. For example "I realizee it's an antiquiated notion" is probably a little out of Bill's league seeing as he is German. I know he speaks English really well but even I had to look up antiquiated and I am English. Am I making sense? Lol. I'm just saying take into account that english isn't thier first language and they are still learning. It just helps with the believability factor. Other than that its awesome so far. I can't wait for your update. LOVE IT!
Author's Response: I actually thought of that while writing.. great minds think alike LOL. My thought that had me leave it in was that he learned his basics in school. I've been talking to a friend who learned English as a second language before and had them pop out a word like that on me that made me have to go into the dictionary in my head before I realized what they were saying. I think it's because when they teach you a language in school, they don't always know what the common vernacular is. Tell me what you think about this, because if you still think it's too far fetched, I may have to pull that word out. THANK YOU SO MUCH for giving such an in depth review! Like I said before, I totally value your opinion. You rule!
Date: 12/01/09 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
more please! see girl! it IS tomi:D
Love it
Author's Response: You really think we nailed Tomi! I'm so happy to hear that you have no idea! We should have another chap. in the next few days. Keep the reviews coming, and if you think we're still hitting the mark with Tomi. Thank you sooo much!
Date: 12/01/09 09:50 am Title: Chapter 2
Holy shit, i love it! Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it! We should have another installment in the next few days. Keep 'em coming love, your reaction inspires.
Date: 12/01/09 08:20 am Title: Chapter 2
This was a greate chapter! please, PLEASE update:-DD that would make my day, seriously. i'm begging u guys, update nooooow:D:D
Author's Response: We will update ASAP! It may be a couple of days, but we'll try to make it worth the wait. Thank you so much for your response Honey! Please keep 'em coming. Reviews make us write faster.
Date: 12/01/09 07:54 am Title: Chapter 2
Oooooh, things are getting interesting now!
Author's Response: YAY! I'm so glad you like it! Keep letting us know if you like what you see. It helps ward off writer's block.
Date: 12/01/09 07:17 am Title: Chapter 2
Awwww!
Cant wait for the next chapter! :D
Author's Response: AWESOME! We should have another in the next few days. Please keep the responses coming. It makes the wheels turn faster.
Date: 12/01/09 05:12 am Title: Chapter 2
This has awesome potential. Actually believable because of the good writing, unlike some other 'meeting online' fics that one occasionally comes across. You know what I mean. Great story
Author's Response: Thank you so much.We knew when we started this one that it would either hit the mark or go horribly wrong. I'm glad to see that it hasn't gone horribly wrong :). Thank you soooooooo much for the compliment on the writing. We should have another chapter in the next few days. Keep the reviews coming and let us know if we stray from believable to wrong. Thanks again!
Date: 11/30/09 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
More plz!!!! =D
Author's Response: It's posting 2nite! PLease let us know if you like where the story is going. Reviews fuel our fingers.
Date: 11/29/09 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LIKE THIS STORY, ITS AWESOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!! Your enthusiasm rocks! Chapter 2 posts 2nite, please keep reviewing. It helps stave off writers block. :)
Date: 11/28/09 07:49 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like this story, please, PLEASE, continue!: - D
Author's Response: Please keep the enthusiasm coming. It's infectious! CHapter 2 should post 2nite. Let us know if you like it. Happy fingers are born from reviews.
Date: 11/27/09 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cool.
Continue?
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. We love them, they inspire happy thoughts and fingers. CHapter 2 goes up tonight. Please let us know what you think.