Date: 02/18/17 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1/1
Definitely better as a one-shot. It said everything it needed to, and it was perfect. Great work ^_^
Date: 09/25/12 11:45 am Title: Chapter 1/1
aw that was just adorable! absolutly loved it darlin :D
Date: 03/25/11 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 1/1
I think I read this on Mibba a... WHILE ago and totally forgot about it. I'm glad I stumbled upon it here because I can add it to my favorites now!
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Date: 02/25/10 01:08 am Title: Chapter 1/1
I loved it as one chapter. The end was so sweet and the whole story felt like an actual glimps into the twins lives.
Date: 12/07/09 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1/1
This is a really cute moment in time, and it was well written. I can see this being the beginig to a two or three part story about the beginning of their relatinship. :) But if you'd like to keep it a one-shot I think it works very nicely the way it is.
Thank u for writing.
Date: 11/23/09 12:58 am Title: Chapter 1/1
This was cute, I wish it had progressed or revealed what Bill was feelings but oh well.
Date: 11/22/09 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1/1
This was really good. I wouldn't be opposed to reading more of it. ;)
Date: 11/20/09 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 1/1
aww, how adorable!!! i loved it!! x